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发表于 2014-8-7 14:42:31 |显示全部楼层
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“一个人可以走得很快,一群人才能走得远”,各位一起加油啦!



【自习】
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:









【9.11自习】
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • advantage[əd'væntɪdʒ]弯



【9.10自习】
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • T3-6去除em,发音全,从容!想清楚再出嘴,不要出了再改!
    【每个词的每个音节发全,但口形别夸大】
    T3T5:在不违背前紧的情况下,加信息量(各点点到即可,不要贪细节);
    T4T6:达意、勾勒出logic线条即可,不要贪细节!
  • 补充改进:
    T3T5:前紧,缩R1;
    T4:概括简述例子;
    T6:小结句扣分论点;大结句扣RTQ;
  • It turns out that...
    Instead of



【9.9自习】
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • T12-想kw;T3-speaker因1紧;T4-关联句;T5-短因;T6-概括例子;全部-前紧;
  • 发音:发全,从容;
    不要!if...then 不要!
  • T3:听力复述句式:In order to...,instead of..., they can...
    T4:前还要紧,看下小绿时间;最后关系句要给7-10s;
  • T5:有个短的原因,听力的时候走神了;心理预期可能有“短原因”!听记平衡;可以漏细节,一定别漏点!
    T5时间:P-12s;2SLN+sugg-25s;
    学生生活差异:国外是可能住在校外apartment然后去campus上课;
    Problem说清楚准确;
  • 进考场前练练新T1T2找紧张状态;
  • imitate['ɪmɪtet]



【9.5题目】
task1 what community service task would you like to do? helping children with their homework, teaching old people how to use computers, or cleaning a city park.
task2 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the government should spend money on projects that can encourage citizens to lead healthier lifestyle. please give your opinion and reasons.
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • question['kwɛstʃən]衬
    auditorium[,ɔdɪ'tɔrɪəm]礼堂会堂
    spoon[spʊn]s布n 勺子
  • T1T2:
    尽力such as出来!这样更有细节;
    最后总结句扣题干要求;
    T3T4:
    概括转述,前紧
    T3:阅读内容只给25s;非主干内容的废话不要补充了,漏了就漏了,前紧;
    笔记整齐点,一行一行的;
    每个单词音发全发清楚,尤其是逻辑连接词,放慢;Andy



【9.3题目】
task 1 describe the most important development in your country in the past 20 years. explain its significance.
task 2 do you agree or disagree with the following statement? watching sports programs on television is not a good use of time. please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.
task 3-6 TPO 31
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • T12:
    Personal;
    构思的时候把要用的“英文kw想出来”,想不出词的,赶紧想换别的说法;
  • T3-6:
    Paraphrase关键!换词,换句式!(例子一定是转述,丢点细节也行,不然太啰嗦了)
    别贪心,前紧!
    T4的例子可以不说那么细,别贪心;
    with是个好串联词;
  • experiment[ɪk'sperɪmənt]一 掰
    university[,junɪ'vɝsəti]涩
  • T3说政策原因的时候,可以直接用in order to就好了
  • 记笔记的时候,如果觉得记的比较多了!就要知道,必须前紧了!“笔记多少定前紧
  • T6开头还是小概述一下吧;当然也要RTQ!



【9.2题目】
task 1 Describe the most important day in your life. explain why it is important.  Include specific reasons and details in your response. 
task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? children should learn how to draw or paint. please use specific reasons to support your answer. 
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • first school in college: met F together buy&sing
  • dif dif, I like singing, waste of time
  • TPO:
    一定要切题答(T1T2也是);后面的RTQ;
    连接词一定慎重出嘴;
    作品:work
    workshop in a small garage
    T5:说全信息点,别说错东西就好;
  • 笔记按行,字写清楚点,不然容易乱;



【9.1题目】
Task 1 Describe a job or career that you admire but do not want to take. Include specific reasons and details in your response. 
Task 2 Some people think that students should study during weekends, but others think that they should relax and to socialize during weekends. What is your opinion on this issue? 
Task 3-6 TPO 33
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • T2T3:前紧;
  • T4要前更紧,留时间说关系;
    T4阅读那个词不用记,后面会出来;
  • T5:不要管自己的立场,选好说的!
  • T6:RTQ,不拘泥套路!
  • T1T2:
    prepare[prɪ'pɛr]  pear梨[pɛr]; 都是“配”
    还是要具体例子好一些;用“I”;
    em,um少!



【8.30题目】
Task 1 Describe a person who you would like to spend time with. Explain why you want to spend time with him or her.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should always study in a quiet place.
Task 3-6 TPO 2
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • 随时看时间;前紧后松;漏细节比漏点强!
  • T4:一定前紧,最后留一句时间;



【8.28题目】
Task 1 In your opinion, why is it hard for university students to manage their time effectively?
Task 2 Some people think students in the future will have classes on the Internet, but others think students will still have classes in buildings. What is your opinion on this issue? 
Task 3-6 TPO 4
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • T1:用BA的时候,前紧后松;前不是重点时,点到为止;
    早入主题,在主题信息区墨迹;不要在让步、对比区墨迹;
  • T3:先阅读再听力说,比较简单;
  • 【限时练习】之后T1-6就都用TPO录了,逼自己;限时和慢慢说完全不一样;
  • T4:RTQ,有的没必要先列出概念,尤其是TPO4这种两个例子的;
  • 概括:例子多的一定注意精简;不要一句一句说例子,多用状语等从句,合句概括说;
    前紧后松;
    T3-6一般只会说不完,不会没的说;
  • university[,junɪ'vɝsəti] 涩
    guitar[ɡɪ'tɑr] 一
    interesting 重音在in
    conflict['kɑnflɪkt] 重音在con; computer[kəm'pjutɚ] 肯
    share[ʃɛr] 是shei不是shai
    hammer['hæmɚ] 嗨
    nice to meet you是第一次跟陌生人见面时礼貌性的打招呼用语
    add[æd] 爱
    complaint[kəm'plent] le n
    more[mɔr] 摩尔
    hire['haɪɚ] 艾
    elevator['ɛlɪvetɚ] 重音在前
    hall[hɔl] 浩
  • T6:RTQ;没有扣题干答不可以!
  • 发音发全,躲闪音和速度无关;
  • em,um



【8.26题目】
Task 1 Many people have pets, like cats and dogs. Do you think that raising pets is good, why? Please include reasons and details to support your response. 
Task 2 Some students prefer to choose a career before getting into college. Other students prefer to choose a career after taking some university courses. Which one do you prefer and why?  Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response. 
Task 3-6 TPO 6
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • 重点转移:口语每天保持就好,不用力求完美;重在meet新问题;
    控制在1h内:前两题5min内;3-610min内;
  • 前紧后松,前不贪心;T6控制细节,时间不够有的就不说了;
  • T5:用能秀出最多信息量的方式组织顺序;
  • experience[ɪk'spɪrɪəns] 浊化b;
  • 时态时态!
  • T3:不要说“is only sb that...”,这样不准确;应该说“it's his/her own problem”!
  • 只有if不要then!
  • T5:改用这个:To solve this, he/she has two options:



【8.24题目】
Task 1 Nowadays robots are widely used in the society. What are the benefits and risks of this?
Task 2 Should employees be required to wear suits in the workplace, or should they wear casual clothes?
Task 3-6 TPO 7
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • T4:因果重视听,可以漏细节,别漏点!
  • T5:听记平衡,SLN是重点!
    前面能不说的就不说,概括,前紧后松;
    所选弊端:As for the problem/concern...
    不要加自己的内容,3-6完全尊重材料!(T5 As for这个应该可以)
  • T6:RTQ!direction要看下,比如这次问的是如何change,要对应着组织!
  • 现任的:incumbent[ɪn'kʌmbənt] 或者 present! 【不要】用cnt;
  • 爆破音,th,浊化,连读;
  • ★【T3组织】对于agree类和有些阅读里介绍附加条件而非解释原因(比如学校通知说要改革食堂,后面顺带说我们要涨价啦),这种的提前总结好也很清楚。
    总之只要信息量足够然后整个能串成通顺的东西就好啦~



【8.23题目】
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Task 1 A high school plans to add an extracurricular activity for students. What kind of activity would you recommend?
Task 2 Can part-time jobs help people prepare for their future career? Please give your opinion with specific reasons and details.
Task 3-6 TPO 8
Else:
  • “连续击球两次”怎么说?hit the ball continuously twice?
    T3-6时态问题?一般现在时?
  • T4:读文的时候找重点句,不用全记,定义找一句话就行了;听力开头一定调整好状态,千万别错过;听最重要!
    听力中例子的名字听不清没事,direction里一般会写出来;不要在名字上分神,主要听过程;
  • T5:前面问题铺垫寒暄什么的不用听太细;控大局,听不清别着急;主听SLN;
  • T6:概括加强!



【8.22题目】
Task 1 What advice would you give to a friend who just got a job. Explain what the suggestion is and its importance. Please include specific details.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: children should have their own cellphones. Give specific reasons and details to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO 9
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • RTQ:T12要是问advantage&dis就不能只说一点!
  • T345容易说不完,概括能力练!T5信息量,尊重原意,不要夸张;
  • 注意连读;
  • 抓住kw并说出;



【8.21题目】
Task 1 If you are a volunteer in a hospital, what kind of work would you choose? 1. take care of patient's family 2. talk to patients 3. read to patient Please give specific reasons and details.
Task 2 Do you like jobs with opportunities to interact with people, or do you prefer to work without contact with real people? Please explain your preference with specific details.
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • 控制will滥用,好多应该是一般现在时就好了;
  • 注意单复数;
  • 控制and;



【8.20题目】
Task 1 Do you like to take outdoor activities in summer or in winter? Please give specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 The school has required students to read the same book and during vacations give a report on it. Do you think it's a good idea or not? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • 说“当...时,我...”,不要用will,而要用always或者usually+一般现在时;
  • an opposite example
  • 控制em,um,and;
  • 前面不要展开太多,留给后面能支撑观点的detail;



【8.19题目】
Task 1 What time of a year do you like most? Please give specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Having a relaxed or unhurried lifestyle is the most important for a person.
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
Else:
  • 例子基本都是过去式,注意时态!
  • T1:主题句和展开共说两句,然后直接例子;
    15s构思的时候:想kw+例子;
  • T2:感觉第一次没有抓住本题的主要矛盾,题目说的是mostIPT;对于这种绝对题干,选否定态度比较好说;
    例子的细节展开要在[关键部分],而不是铺垫部分;



【8.18题目】
Task 1 What are the benefits of chatting with older family members? Give specific details in your answer.
Task 2 When things at home such as furniture are broken, do you prefer to have them repaired in a shop or fix them by yourself?
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
T1 outline:
  • interesting story
  • grandpa, dif people dif places

T2 outline:
  • easier to do
  • In my house, nail,screw,screwdriver
  • watched father, taught, not a big deal

Else:
  • 和na的练习还是很有效果的,快了不少



【8.13题目】
Task 1 Among the following professions, which do you think is most important to a city? Police officer, building designer or transport worker.
Task 2 Nowadays many people find their social network on the internet, do you think it is a positive trend?
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
T1 outline:
  • most IPT profession, police officer, cuz guarantee for efficiency
  • WITHOUT theft robbery['rɑbəri],
  • IMAGINE, building designer - car - dangerous building
  • IN this CASE, NOT ONLY BUT ALSO

T2 outline:
  • Nowadays many people find their social network on the internet, do you think it is a positive trend?
  • is pos, cuz make Fs
  • WITHOUT, share with people around, For me I love the songs of one singer named Crowd Lu who only have a samll gourp of followers.
  • BEFORE finding friends on the internet, enjoy by my own, loneliness.
  • But now, with the internet, to be specific, douban, more friends all around the world, happy

Else:
  • T1:有选项的稍微好答点,但是想不到具体例子,只能宏观地说;要练编例子的能力;
    对于那种自己提出主题的,就更不知道说啥好了;
    T2:BA结构不错,可以有话说,In the past...;有无结构,Without...;假想场景or当...时;
  • 举例子用 I ,感觉别说大道理好!



【8.12题目】
Task 1 Describe a family member who has similar personality traits to yours. Give specific details in your answer.
Task 2 Where would you choose to live: a big and new place far from your college or a small and old place near your college?
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
T1 outline:
  • considerate and kind
  • employee fell off a 5-meters high machine in workshop, broke his leg and broke the expensive machine.
  • When visited at hospi, blame him, not for but for
  • impressive give me a lesson

T2 outline:
  • a small and old place near your college
  • cuz save time
  • won't in a hurry; spend with friends, in library
  • 特别注意了不用and链接和避免em,um,以后都要强行改正!宁可慢

Else:
  • T2感觉差不多可以直接说了,说的时候注意下:从正面说选的好;一个点足够,想到一个点后抓紧想如何展开、细节(编例子);
    T1主要是观点确定太慢,需要对这种问题再多过过脑子,好多东西没想过;



【8.11题目】
Task 1 In order to save time and effort, human beings are using robots to do a lot of tasks. What is your opinion on this issue?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Bosses should require their employees to wear formal clothes instead of casual clothes.
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
T1 outline:
  • to save time and effort, human beings are using robots to do a lot of tasks.
  • safer
  • assembly[ə'sɛmbli line robots rigorous less mistake guarantee of drivers' safety
  • rescue robots suffers rescuer

T2 outline:
  • Bosses should require their employees to wear formal clothes instead of casual clothes.
  • agree
  • causual['kæʒʊəl] clothes dif cheaper and more expensive cloth, compare with eachother
  • formal clothes can make others think is a team of unity higher effectiveness

Else:
  • wear 美音是[wɛr],英音才是[weə];
  • 老外不喜欢word repetition;例,pay more attention to A and concentrate less on B;
  • ★☆★不要太字正腔圆,避免背诵朗读的感觉;想象成是在和rater交流,not machine;★☆★



【8.10题目】
Task 1 Which characteristic do your friends like in you the most: cheerfulness, kindness or intelligence? Explain with reasons and details.
Task 2 Which kind of class would you choose just for fun: an art class or a science class?
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
T1 outline:
  • kindness especially animal, sausage or cake, play with them.
  • like animals ->so obviously they like those who is kind to animals, just like me.

T2 outline:
  • for fun, art class, cuz interesting
  • like photography, go off campus, the great wall, Forbidden City, Fragrance Hill; trip
  • have had lots science class: phy bio chem, less attractive

Else:
  • cheerfulness: feeling or showing happiness. 强调感情流露;
  • Art:
    [narrow] painting, sculpture, printmaking, photography, and other visual media;
    [broad] +music, theatre, film, dance, and other performing arts, as well as literature and other media such as interactive media.
  • voyage: 尤指海上;
    journey:单程较远;
    travel:国外或远方,不重某一目的地,重游历;
    trip:短距离,直达目的地;
    tour:“旅行,周游,观光”,主要目的地是游览或视察,距离可长可短,常带有“最后回到出发地”的含义;
  • characteristic[,kærəktə'rɪstɪk]
    campus['kæmpəs]    compass['kʌmpəs]
  • 在美语里面 p t k 一般来说都会浊化并且有吞音;
    注意所有元音的发音,嘴巴给的要够夸张;
    photography[fə'tɑɡrəfi],重音在to;
    替换and,太多了;



【8.9题目】
Task 1 What type of movie do you think is not enjoyable to watch: action, romance or or science fiction? Give details and reasons in your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should do a part part-time job before attending college.
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
T1 outline:
  • action,cuz tired of it
  • romance treasure;sci idea
  • action by cool scenes not impressive story,Fast & Furious
  • lots of, tedious

T2 outline:
  • agree, not matter what kind
  • cuz know society needs, motivation study
  • for me, can be improved
  • for classmates, textbook, tedious, !work hard on

Else:
  • There may be intersect parts between action, romance and science fiction movie, like the Transformer, so a pure sample is better.
  • treasure['trɛʒɚ],相比之下用cherish发音更容易些;
    further['fɝeɚ]
    specific[spɪ'sɪfɪk]
    society[sə'saɪəti],social['soʃl]
  • 直奔主题,把一个点展开,展开地足够specific,前面不要对比铺垫或者让步;
  • 压制en,um;



【8.8题目】
Task 1 Describe the most important development of your country in the past 20 years. Explain why this development is so important.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? Students nowadays are working harder in their studies than those the past.
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
T1 outline:
  • Internet
  • 20yrs ago: few Internet
  • 15yrs ago: lots of people dial to get on, news & article, well-informed
  • now countless resources-> vivid, make it easy to communicate,
  • It's IPT cus changed our way of life

T2 outline:
  • Agree, though forced
  • math Teacher, extra time cus love math, without pressure
  • However, now, as popu and fast dev, finding a satifying job is diffic
  • So, just as I did, stu must harder to stand out.



【8.7题目】
Task 1 Among the following types of books – mystery, science fiction and biography, which type do you like the least and why?
Task 2 Do you like to travel alone or with your family members? Explain with specific reasons and details.
Link of recording: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJyRDmb
T1 outline:
  • unhelpful for me
  • while
  • , on the contrary
  • Plus, horror violence, brain-consuming which I don't like

T2 outline:
  • with family members ->exact, parents
  • usually busy with my own business, courses & researches
  • if possible want to grasp the oppor keep company with them, cuz most IPT persons
  • Plus, affraid of traveling by their own, so with me, they can more enjoy sceneries, and their happiness can make me happy

Else:
  • mystery: a piece of fiction dealing usually with the solution of a mysterious crime



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T1 语法好像有问题,make our life vivid and make it easier to communicate.代词使用错误。
T2 审题错误,问的是是否认为现在的学生比以前辛苦

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still609_o0z 发表于 2014-8-9 11:59
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T1 语法好像有问题,make our life vivid and make it easier to communicate.代词使用错误。
T2 审 ...


首先感谢评价~~
关于T1:你是指make it easier的问题?我刚才查了下……美国白宫blog上也是这么用的link,你是指这个it会感觉是指代前面的东西?
T2 我说的是work harder now额,要不你再听听?

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yy80884676 发表于 2014-8-9 12:28
首先感谢评价~~
关于T1:你是指make it easier的问题?我刚才查了下……美国白宫blog上也是这么用的li ...

看来T1那个是我的问题
T2你没有啊,你结尾说的是现在的学生now must,这是一个表态吧。

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still609_o0z 发表于 2014-8-9 15:30
看来T1那个是我的问题
T2你没有啊,你结尾说的是现在的学生now must,这是一个表态吧。

说的是  now must work harder 呀,额。。。

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发表于 2014-8-11 10:05:24 |显示全部楼层
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天了噜我一直以为你是妹子呀,打开音频吓cry了,别笑。
T1
如果是你写在上面的treasure的话,音错啦,或者可以用cherish也高级的。
Robin大神是这样说的哦:(前面主题句稍稍加一点描述最好只用10‘s或者15’s)展开一个点就可以了,比如说你不爱action,就说这个的不好就行,别前面撸一堆其他的好,rater会觉得不够specific哒。你可以把roman的好处放到action说,就说action没有这些好处,这就是action的不好,我这样描述你的懂?不懂告诉我呀你不告诉我我怎么知道你这么天真可爱不懂(没吃药)
你看吧,你就没有specific出来因为时间不够了,虽然我这题也没录好,但是我看的出来~

T2
哈哈哈哈before attending college后面一堆是什么鬼啊~对了又来一个,真假未考,但是还是要提一提,就是出现um或者en这种音,rater会扣分……那就算假的也还是能少讲尽量少讲吧,你那堆还不如um呢~ society needs? society略像sociolity这样子的发音,太不正经辣。还有应该是social needs~
further里面的ɚ或者ɜ:好好纠一下yeah~
不行一二两题考试的时候也是一个人改的tedious第一遍听到觉得棒棒哒,第二遍就是这个表情
还有就是后面一段你不开心吗少年?想上厕所嘛!不是的话抑扬顿挫起来。给你一个男神的录音慢慢撸哦。

哈哈哈哈,我第一次改的这么狠,这么犀利,一定是你太可爱的缘故,别恨我呀,妈妈都是为了你好~

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hellsjo 发表于 2014-8-11 10:05
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天了噜我一直以为你是妹子呀,打开音频吓cry了,别笑。
T1

受益匪浅嗯!感谢感谢;
话说,怎么就把我假想成妹子了=、=头像么?
另,我猜我比你大吧……@“MaMa都是....” T^T

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yy80884676 发表于 2014-8-11 14:18
受益匪浅嗯!感谢感谢;
话说,怎么就把我假想成妹子了=、=头像么?
另,我猜我比你大吧……@“MaMa都是 ...

哈哈哈哈哈比我大比我大真了不起~
有用就好yeah
头像吧,粉粉哒

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hellsjo 发表于 2014-8-11 15:48
哈哈哈哈哈比我大比我大真了不起~
有用就好yeah
头像吧,粉粉哒


“粉粉哒萌萌哒”= =#

本来觉得蜗牛这个寓意深刻点……T^T
现在这个有木有好些……搜集同学们的XDF听课证拼的……

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发表于 2014-8-11 19:36:20 |显示全部楼层
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同学你把tips都列出来这个方法很好~也方便我们理解~学习~
task1:
15~campus看你后面专门写出来了 这个音还是发得有点像compass
22~ when I see them  when i 连读会好一点
30~ plays(play)with them

task2:
可能是时间不够了,第二个点没有很好地展开,没有点出sience class为什么less attractive 以后注意一下时间的把握,其实第一个点还可以继续展开下去,举一个或是编一个你参加过的这种摄影旅行也好,说说你都看到了什么,学到了什么,这样就会有好多话说...

同学你整体都不错,语音有点英音的感觉哇,呵呵~逻辑和结构也不错,说得也流畅,学习了~说的不对还望包涵~

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dafen5434 发表于 2014-8-11 19:36
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同学你把tips都列出来这个方法很好~也方便我们理解~学习~
task1:


感谢感谢~
有道理,感觉T2那个最后剩10s左右,与其说一个新点无法展开,不如把第一点再加些细节,比如出去摄影“和小伙伴们很愉快”的一些经历~
共同加油!

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本帖最后由 adrian小豆 于 2014-8-12 00:53 编辑

首先捏 鼓励一下卤煮用词还蛮丰富的

然后呢,挑毛病阶段开始
卤煮应该也知道自己的 小口音 还是比较亚洲腔啊(虽然TOEFL并没有说明不可以有口音)但是,想要分数高一些,口音还是要注意的

其次呢 要注意一下 整个语段的起伏 停顿(说白了就是自然感),因为毕竟是口语段子,不能像读课文那样平平淡淡的说出来

T1.
纵观这个题,整体来说,有几个通病就是 t结尾或者t做复印结尾的单词 都没有浊化 在美语里面 p t k 一般来说都会浊化并且有吞音

有一个地方有点奇怪, in my campus, there are some homeless dogs and cats...when i see them 这句话可以把它改成when i see some homeless dogs and cats in my campus, i will buy some food for them 个人觉得这样讲比较通顺哦,仅供参考


T2.
photography 这个单词发音不太对 不是先发photo再发graphy 中音在to

这个题里面呢 一定注意所有元音的发音 嘴巴给的都不够夸张(哥们你害羞个啥!)

campus这个单词 a发梅花音 嘴巴往外咧
before 的be发音在轻一些 or嘴巴在撅一点
Forbidden City 的for的o给的不够圆 den的鼻音不够 city的ty发dy
a lot of 有一个连读 要注意一下
最后 这个题里面的and用的好多好多 你可以替换一下哦

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发表于 2014-8-12 13:05:17 |显示全部楼层
adrian小豆 发表于 2014-8-11 22:25
首先捏 鼓励一下卤煮用词还蛮丰富的

然后呢,挑毛病阶段开始

感谢感谢!
口音确实是个大问题,有没有纠正的一些好方法?比如看看啥听听啥?

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发表于 2014-8-12 16:15:35 |显示全部楼层
我来评811的啦,不好意思,有点晚,见谅哈!

T1原来是个男生啊,看你写了tips之类的这么细心以为是个妹纸呢~不错,赞一个你的学习态度哈!
发音不错,语调也很好!
内容没的说的,语法没有错误!细节也很detai的!而且这个题你的detail很特别,之前从没听别人说过哈!
如果挑骨头的话就觉得可能缺少点自然的感觉,毕竟是口语题呀,所以更加自然点,你说的有点正式,字正腔圆的,可能放松些,更加口语化点可能更好!其他都没问题的!

T2
1)4“wear的发音注意下!
2)pay attention to 这个短语重复了,你可以开始说pay more attention to ... and concentrate less on ... 以前听一个老外说他们比较不喜欢word repetition,尽量不要出现重复的动词或名词(其实我自己经常这样,我知道蛮难的哈)。
这个题的感觉弱于上一个题,因为这个题我觉得detail 不够,感觉就是围绕集中精力与否来说,但是没有具体的例子,不过这个题的例子也不好说。但是整体的发音和语调蛮好的,你口音已经很好了,比我强多了,就是觉得稍微缺少点说话的感觉,以后可以说得更加自然吧!

总结:基础很好,语速稍微有点慢,可以适当加快一些,当然不加速也ok的!加油吧!


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发表于 2014-8-12 16:34:09 |显示全部楼层
乐百氏开开心心 发表于 2014-8-12 16:15
我来评811的啦,不好意思,有点晚,见谅哈!

T1原来是个男生啊,看你写了tips之类的这么细心以为是个妹纸 ...

谢谢评价恩~
word repetition这个我确实是需要注意下,感觉写作的时候就有点词汇量不足,口语就更反映不过来了=、=不过既然说“老外比较反感”,那还是努力改下啦~
共加油!

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