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It's more and more common that children manage their own money at a yound age.Toward this topic different people have different ideas.Some people think this may distort the children's value towards money.However,I believe this pattern contributes to financially responsible adults as well as improve children's life habit.In order to make m yself claer, I would like to give some reasons in the following paragraph.

To start with,good habits are formed at young age.If any bad habitats were formed at young age,it takes a great effort to correct it when we become adult.It's extremly vital to form healthy habits for young children.It's said that Buffett, the man named for his talent in investigation,revealled his intelligence in business when he was in primary school.He rentted his toy to his classmates to earn money.He recalled that it is this time that form his habit to manage his money ,which contributes to his success.Thus,good habit formed at young age has a positve on our whole life.

Additonally,managing their own money will surly help children built strong attitude toward money.It is not umcommon that  many adults live from paycheck to paycheck in these days and ages.This phenomenon may mainly the consequence of wrong attitude toward money.Given that they used their money very optionally when they were children,how can you expect them to manange their money reasonable when they become adults?Their attitude which was formed at their young age determins they way the spend their money at their adult times.



On the other hand,concerns about the potenial negetive effect on  children' view toward money rise.Children may think money is extremly vital since they manage their own money.Hence the only goal for them is to make more money regardless of other precious things in our life.Modern society sees numberous cases which was caused by wrong value about money.Numberous people think money is the most important thing in the world.Cases about the rich show off their wealth are abound on all kind of media.for example,Guo Meimei,a hot person on the Internet,cause a wave in China.She puts a lot of luxuries on her microblog,which lead to  reflectiones about China's unbalance in the poor and the rich.However,it is not the money that distinguish good from bad.It's our attitude toward money decide the role  money plays in our life.


In sum,Granted there are some weakness for children to manage their own money at a young age.But I think it can have a positve for them to form good habit which will benefit them for whole life as long as they are well induced about the meaning of money.So I think children are supposed to learn to manage their own money at a young age.