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jzhouUID: 157270

People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It would be a very happy thing for us to receive a gift or a present at the time of our birthday or some festivals, and for some special gifts, it would be kept in our memory forever. Why we remember these gifts, there are some reasons will be given below.

Firstly, unlike the things purchased in a store by ourselves, the gifts are involving the love and the care of our friends or relatives for us. We maybe throw an item that is brought in a store into a garbage box when it has been worn out, but for a gift we would not, especially some gifts from important persons in our lives. Suppose you received a book from one of your closest friends who had been to a place far away, I think you must take the book very precious and will preserve it very carefully, because when you read the book, you seem to see your friend with your own eyes.

Secondly, a gift sometimes symbols an extremely unforgettable period of our lives. I think the gift, which a boy received from his father at the birthday of his eighteen years age that would be regarded as the end of a man's childhood, would be an good case in point, because the gift could arouse the remembering of his childhood life that is fading away in his memory, and remind him that he has grown up and should depend on himself.

Thirdly, reviewing the gifts, which we received before, always rejoices us. It would be very funny and pleasing to lay out our gifts and introduce to our friends how they come. Further more, sometimes we can acquire knowledge from gifts. If you received a piece of china as a gift, such as a fantastic plate or a bottle, maybe you can learn how to appreciate china or the history of the china.

From what has been discussed above, we can see that gifts deserve our remembering. People all like to keep their gifts and see them often.
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chicagochenUID: 116575

不好意思 改天给看好不

jzhouUID: 157270

不要紧，随便什么时候都可以，只要帮忙看看
万分感谢 :)

最初由 chicagochen 发布
[B]不好意思 改天给看好不 [/B]