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发表于 2014-10-8 07:53:34 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2014-10-10 15:37:26 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who have learned many different skills are more likely to succeed than those who focus on learning only one skill.

Modern society is a society of knowledge explosion. Hundreds of thousands of new knowledge comes out nearly every day. So here comes the debate: Should we focus our attention on only a unique field, or learn as much as knowledge from all kinds of subject? And who have the advantage over the other while pursuing success, ones who have learned many different skills or ones who have learned only one skill? From my standpoint, I believe that those who are equipped with many different skills are more likely to succeed.
None of the subjects can be independent, they influence and support each other. There is not exist the idea of subject naturally. It is human work that dividing knowledge into different parts, so each subject can be regarded as a partial image of the nature. As a result, each subject could be completed only by the knowledge from other fields. For example, when dealing with a digital photograph, a PS practicer would see it from an aesthetic angle, while a Matlab practicer would see it from a digital image angle.
Even a unique problem always need many kinds of skills to solve. As mentioned in the last paragraph, we can hardly find a problem concerns only one subject, so that we can hardly solve a problem with only one skill either. For example, to analysis a Quantum mechanics problem, one must have the ability of advanced of mathematics; when a lawyer dealing with a case of medical of malpractice, he has to know the discipline of medical to handle it.
Those who have learned many different skills have the advantage to communicate with others and are more likely to gain respect. We often hears that sentence that ” Somebody is so smart, he knows everything!”, fulling of worship. If you know something others focus, then you will have a common topic with them, as a consequence you will be welcomed by them; on the contrary, if you communicate with one shares none subject with, you can imagine the scene with no hard.
As a conclusion, people who have learned different skills are more likely to make friends with others, are more likely to gain respect, can set a stereo sight on problems, and have the advantage to deal with complex cases, so they are more likely to success.

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发表于 2014-10-11 00:47:41 |显示全部楼层
下次用word写。
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多用例子,下次交前先用word查一遍基本语法和拼写。

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发表于 2014-10-11 09:44:56 |显示全部楼层
已改好 仅供参考~~

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发表于 2014-10-12 11:52:13 |显示全部楼层
已改。
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发表于 2014-10-13 23:59:28 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2014-10-14 08:15:33 |显示全部楼层
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感谢点评,有许多很中肯的,收获颇多,谢谢

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