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TS:the definition of technology is too broad to draw such a conclusion.For instance,computer science and space technologies definitely behoove people’s critical thinking.The conclusion still can’t hold its stand even when it comes to the very controversial object ——calculators.
我的想法是对于题目的抽象词进行细化,例如technology有很多种,在computer science and space technology中都是对人的critical thinking and logic thinking要求很高,其次再对很平常的technology---calculator减少人们思考的过程提出质疑,认为计算器只能锻炼人们的耐力并不一定减少思考过程
ts1:computer science is really a technology fostering people’s logic and critical thinking.No matter how simple a software impress you,the programming behind it isn’t necessary as effortless as its seemly appearance
even the softwares themselves reduce large quantity of work for people,it just skip the step to do the unnecessary calculation
这一段的主题句我并没有都在第一句写完,而是在整个段落中展开,不过我感觉可能都放在第一句中会比较好。这一段主要说明的是不管一个software看起来多么简单,其背后的编程都需要非常严谨的逻辑思维。其二程序本身虽然减少工作量但是却没减少思考量,只是跳过了不必要繁琐的计算。
ts2:Not to mention the intricacy and delicacy requirements of space technology,it abet people to explore further about the origin of lives,not just human.
这一段说明space technology引发人们对生命的本源思考,非常复杂,同时space technology要求非常精密的检查和计算,都对人们的思考能力锻炼很大
ts3:it would be very tempting to assert that calculators make people unwilling to calculate and consequently reduce the ability of thinking.Yet,it has done nothing but delete the redundancy step of calculating.
这一段说的是尽管计算机减少了很多计算的步骤,但是人们依旧需要有一个思考的过程才能解开问题。比如说科学家在完全不用手进行任何计算的情况下发表高质量论文的现象很常见
王老师您好,这是我的第一篇issue,所以我对1+3的模型并不是很清楚,1+3中的3是不是最后有个让步,比如说在这道题中,让步可以是减弱人们的思考能力或者不减弱但是也不增强,这样可以写出更多字数?
求拍砖,狠狠的拍,拍完之后我会再从新写过一篇请老师改正
附上原文
With the technology advancing rapidly,some people concern that the capability of human to think for themselves surely will retrograde.Nevertheless,the definition of technology is too broad to draw such a conclusion.For instance,computer science and space technologies definitely behoove people’s critical thinking.The conclusion still can’t hold its stand even when it comes to the very controversial object ——calculators.
Instead of impairing people’s thinking abilities,computer science is really a technology fostering people’s logic and critical thinking.No matter how simple a software impress you,the programming behind it isn’t necessary as effortless as its seemly appearance.Anyone who has experience of programming will be familiar with intricate programming steps,any loophole will lead to an deadlock,therefore,on the contrary to weakening people’s capability to think,it proffer people a perfect method to reinforce logic thinking.Besides,even the softwares themselves reduce large quantity of work for people,it just skip the step to do the unnecessary calculation,its still of importance for operators to own thinking abilities to deal with vary situations.
Not to mention the intricacy and delicacy requirements of space technology,it abet people to explore further about the origin of lives,not just human.So far,our human only control such a tiny part knowledge of this unqualified universe that we are nearly ignorant.Is there anyone who dares to say exploring the origin of lives will reduce our thinking abilities? From theory that earth is center of the universe to the heliocentral theory,from impression of square earth to the truth of spherical earth,every giant development about space technology will unimaginatively widen our eyesight and hence expand our thinking ability.We also need to pay attention to the whole process,from giant structure to tiny spike quality,so that the accuracy of operating is guaranteed.
It would be very tempting to assert that calculators make people unwilling to calculate and consequently reduce the ability of thinking.Yet,it has done nothing but delete the redundancy step of calculating.It may be true if you deem calculation will enhance people’s patience,but the it isn’t inevitable to be involved with the process of thinking.it’s not an unusual phenomenon that scientist publish high qualities paper without do a single calculation by hand.It could be realized all by machine.On the contrary to increasing people’s thinking ability,it,instead,waste people’s precious time to do something more significant which is called opportunity cost.
Ultimately,it’s very clear that lots of technologies are and will be improving our life quality and reinforce our thinking ability simultaneously. |
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