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全部作业                 http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i3mUkg1每天都要复制一遍链接过来好麻烦
                            以后麻烦各位点总链接吧 每天分文件夹的,新的都在最上面,不会太麻烦~
                            有时候直接就用手机传了就懒得来复制粘贴了~~
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Task 1: If you have a chance to go to the moon, would you go? Give specific reasons
and details to support your response.
Task 2: What would you build if you have the land to do so, a park or a library? Give
specific reasons and examples in your response
Task3-6: TPO11

1025
Task 1: Which of the following hospital volunteer works would you be interested in
doing? xxx, talk to patients or read to patients.

Task 2: Some people prefer to work alone, other prefer to work with others. Which do
you prefer? Explain your answer in details.
Task3-6:TPO12
T4觉得很困难
good 可以指商品(并不一定要复数形式)

10.24   http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnAhr8F
Task 1: Talk about a skill you have but would like to improve. How do you plain to
improve this skill of yours?

Task 2: Do you agree or disagree with the statement that advertisements have great
influence on what people buy

Task3-6:TPO 13

10.23   http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gdH0F67
Task 1: Talk about two schools which you attended and their differences. Give specific
examples and details in your response.
south &  yali
teachers helpful more strict   stringent rules
atmosphere  openminded

Task 2: Some people think that one needs to be talented to be an artist, others believe
trainings and hard work is more crucial for someone to be an artist. Which do you think
is more important? Give details and examples in your response.

Task3-6: tpo 14

10.22(未占座)
Task 1: Your friend is about to open a new restaurant, what suggestions would you give this friend, it could be about the location and food. Give specific reasons and details in your response
Task 2: Do you agree or disagree with the statement that sixteen-year-olds are old
enough to drive a car. Give specific reasons and details in your response.
Task3-6 TPO15

1021   http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWLRZT6
Task 1: Which of the following do you think it’s the best way to get to know a new school, joining a one-day campus tour, spending a weekend on the campus play field or auditing lectures?

Task 2: If you were given a empty piece of land, would you rather using it to build a garden or a playground for children?

Task 3-6 TPO 16

1020(据说是1018的考题诶)[当天没做又忘占座我就是傻。。]
Task 1: Talk about a style of clothing you like the most. Explain in details why you like wearing it.
Task 2: Some teachers like to give class assignments in person, others like to give assignments by email. Which do you think is better? Why?
Task 3-6 TPO 17

1019                     http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntqjUSL
从今天起打算把tpo里面的12题一起练了当开拓思路
小伙伴如果有时间的话就顺便帮我听一下吧,merci ~!
如果没空的话就不用理了
录音里面TPO1 2的标题是tpo1 tpo2 版主布置的作业录音报题是 日期+题号

assignments:
Task 1: Your friend has been offered a job that's far away from his hometown. Do you think he should take it or not? Give specific reasons and details to support your response.
should take
youngster need to challenge  themselves
increase their working abilities more rapidly  enhance ability of  communications & adaptation
relatives& acquaintances    overcome obstacles by themselves

Task 2: Do you agree or disagree that teachers should encourage students to have class discussions during class? Give specific reasons and details in your response.
agree
prefer  more active class environment
absorb knowledge fully understand theories and methods
i still can remember details & steps (impressions)   use them practically
Task 3-6 TPO 18

Tpo18 01     Imagine ur life ten years in future.Talk about one way u think ur life will be different in the years than it is now. Use details to explain your answer.
shall have been working
have plan for further education - shall haven't started to work too long
busy arrange time according to clients  
tpo18 02    Agree/disagree: It's important to learn about other cultures. Use details and examples to explain your opinion.
agree        globalization  cannot isolated from other cultures    clues of multi-culture phenomenon
music/movie   appreciate them    communicate  with people with diff background


1018                     http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sj6qOup
Task 1: If the school received a large amount of money, what do you wish it will be spent on? A sports gym, a laboratory or a scientific research facility?
sports gym more students and faculty can use
I love save time& money
get donation from various means

Task 2: Some people believe that it is important for young people to have a part-time job as a working experience, while others think they should spend more time on their studies. What is your opinion and why?
not necessary  not the only assignment
few connection cannot provide better prospects
studying useful& fundamental    cannot study after starting working

Task 3-6 TPO 19


20141017  1 - 6T    http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6E4wFw
Task 1: Talk about the one thing government can do to improve the educational system in your country. Give details and examples in your answer.
establish library system
do have library    not enough books  particularly in nature& social science
ex: my primary&secondary schools
     with such could develop a more comprehensive

Task 2 : Some people prefer to own cars, others prefer to mainly use public transportation. Which do you agree with? Explain why.
prefer own cars
not convenient  
ex: long-distance place costs time  stop at every station
       tired about carrying heavy staff
Task 3-6 TPO 20         

20141016 1-6T      http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0b9jS8

Task 1: Talk about a positive experience you recently had working with another person. Explain why this experience was important to you.
lawyer office      boss&tutor     

Task 2 : Some people prefer to plan what to do in their free time ahead of time, others prefer to not having such plans. Which do you prefer? Explain why.
plan   time valuable  
finish more task or even have more pleasures
clear arrangement  wouldn't   forget about appointments
benefit myself & people who need to meet me

Task 3-6 TPO 21

20131015  1-6T     http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjyjnrf
T11: Which of following study methods do you think is the most effective? Having discussions, repeating class materials or taking a lot of notes. Give specific examples and details in your explanation.
1.notes: 重点, paraphrase from professors, often more vividly
2 discussion: distraction

Task 2 : Some people prefer to sit in the front of a classroom during a lecture, others prefer to sit in the back during a lecture. Which do to think is better? Explain your response in details and examples
1 more attention no disturb more room
2 get information smoothly

Task 3-6 TPO 22
20141013  1-6T   http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJOBG8N

20141012  1-6T   http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGl6pcM

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本帖最后由 JoelJoelle 于 2014-10-15 10:13 编辑
hamxyy 发表于 2014-10-14 11:56
好流利!

我一般都是一边听自己说的一边看评语。而且其实多听几遍自己说过的非常有效。


我不是像你一遍过的,虽然结构没有大变化,但是一遍的话应该有很多小错误和卡壳。
我就是想反反复复说然后就把语法顺口的小错误内化改掉。

好的细节我再按照你的点评自己听一次。

我个人的感觉是,考官都不喜欢乱七八糟的东西,所以如果停个一两秒能够整清思路的话会更好。

那天点评完你的后我又去看了下robin神的贴, 发现1 2T我完全是反其道而行之啊。。。

Thx for ur  sharing


你不说我真的不会发现occur重音在后面,,,, really thank you!

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楼主为什么没有声音播放出来呢????

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Lucy1994614 发表于 2014-10-18 20:29
楼主为什么没有声音播放出来呢????

下载下来也不行么?
你是不是用的mac? 我自己的mac网页播放出来,但是下载可以。
或者把别人的录音转到自己的网盘用手机听~

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lz好强悍~这口语,相当好啊!让我想起了以前学校广播站的那些MM们~
发音基本都很标准,说起来也信手拈来,牛逼。
有个小点就是:停顿的时候尽量不要把一个词说两遍或三遍。

内容方面:T1、T2:两个有论点+论据,相比而言我更喜欢T1的事例展开,更加生动。
3-6题:lz抱歉哈,作业那天是1016,我误把3-6题当成tpo16的作业了。sorry。

我的作业地址是:
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;fromuid=3496847
希望lz多多帮我改正,多多给予建议哈~

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JoelJoelle 发表于 2014-10-18 20:41
下载下来也不行么?
你是不是用的mac? 我自己的mac网页播放出来,但是下载可以。
或者把别人的录音转 ...

好的我在试试

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10.17
1.much more earlier
2.tired的发音
3.profit发音
5.问题与建议的比例最好是一比一吧,a disadvantage注意单复数
6.relieve her pain,fun的发音
楼主用词转化什么的很棒,逻辑论证也很好,值得学习!

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评1018 不知是不是我的播放器的原因听的不是很清晰,不容易听懂
T1,“before gym, faculty”, 不明白, factory and research agencies 指的是题里的lab和research facilities 吗
T2,assignment,如果是这个词的话,发音也许有偏差,suggestion应该是suggest
T3, 挺好的
T4,第一句听不清,后面例子讲得很好,概念定义时放在后面讲了吗。
T5,挺好
T6,挺好,glide发音

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评1018 不知是不是我的播放器的原因听的不是很清晰,不容易听懂
T1,“before gym, faculty”, 不明白, f ...

sports gym   faculty是说教职员工 掉了个the
laboratory  说快说成factory了  T T

assignment [ə'sainmənt] ss 轻辅音 s    是说的suggest them 我以后尽量发得更清晰些

uses an example of  a pair of a sister  and a brother 是我发音有问题

glide /ai/滑行

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本帖最后由 zqgypx 于 2014-10-20 18:10 编辑

T1
a 不知道是不是我听错嘹:第一句同意接受这份工作(外地工作),第二句说的是,在熟悉的环境下更容易提升技能。第二句和第一句似乎是对立的呀~ 是不是在最后几句峰回路转地说适应新环境能带来好处诶?建议还是直白的说,这句放前面。因为有时候,想峰回路转的时候,45秒过去了…………
b relatives and acquaintance is to  小口误

T2
赞,尤其细节不错

T3
a advantage for the quality 小口误

T4
a 最开始要不要提及一下啥是relict behavior? 再用一句话解释这个词?
b live in north american
c lions live there too   lion的n,发的不清楚,不仔细听可能听不出来这里说的是lion
d 听力原文好像说的是,现在木有狮子了,不是狮子跑不快了

T5
a 结构和整体内容都木有问题,btw,给建议的时候粗线了嗙的背景声音,然后开始答得有些慌张,围观群众好好奇发生了森麽
b she might miss part of the class 口误了,介是男森
c assignment 这个词常粗线,建议读准。嚼着个别单词读音这个事不用深纠,比如第4题那羚羊,保证常见单词读准就好,见过一语音炒鸡炒鸡差的小哥,语流很不错,当然答题内容也不错,拿了26。

T6
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T1
a 不知道是不是我听错嘹:第一句同意接受这份工作(外地工作),第二句说的是,在熟悉的环境下更容易提 ...

T1说的是unfamiliar 看来我发音真的不够清晰呀~
T3advantageous
T4我想表达得是没有狮子后剩下得其他predarors 没有那么快
T5 代词经常顺嘴错T T 谢谢提醒

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T2 create和understand,似乎和天赋的联系不太紧密,因为在有一定功底的情况下可以做到create和understand
T3 木有问题
T4 后面读到comfort zone bias的定义时,貌似听到了慌张翻笔记的剧情~ 念定义时,语调最好假装一下不是念的啦……
T5 17秒 “with his classmates, roommates” 似乎还不是roommate,改说future roommate也怪怪的,可能是口误。btw,58秒粗线的是喝水声麽...
T6 没提及Light离mouth近这点

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楼主语音语调很好呀,赞一个~
T1 感觉和lecture联系不太紧密,最好再补充一下细节
T2 说的十分轻松自然呀,佩服~ 说traditional garden beautiful的时候需要具体说一下哪里beautiful,并且要联系一下children

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发表于 2014-10-25 11:38:48 |只看该作者
10.24【怎么没有3-6。。?

整体都挺好的,T2个别发音不清楚,例子还可以更detail,可能是前面说的太多?把前面说的利好融到例子里来可能效果会更好

语调赞~楼主比我早考六天,加油!

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