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感谢小伙伴们抽空批阅！

1104 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People often buy products not because they really need them but because other people have them.

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1103 TPO23 综合

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1102 The modern life is more and more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

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10.30
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed in doing a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than the excellent knowledge of this job.

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10.28 Some people think university professors should spend more time doing research while others think they should spend more time educating students. What is your view?

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10.27 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole society today expect young people to follow are too strict.

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10.26 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Competition between friends always has a negative effect on their friendship.

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10.24 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past young people depended on their parents for making decisions. Today, young people are better able to make decisions on their own.

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10.23 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more interested in politics today than they were in the past.

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10.22 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents do not understand their children as well as parents did 50 years ago.

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10.21 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in the university.

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10.20 TPO 26 综合

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10.19 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual.

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10.18 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for the government to spend money on improving Internet access than on public transportation.

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改：感谢壹乐同学，改得非常中肯。我写主体第二段的时候也比较心虚，自己也嚼着光纠修地铁一件事好像没有说服力啊。
后面重新思考了一下，这篇文章问的不是 it is better for the G ……，而是important。问important就是在问哪个更不能取代，我花一段写public transportation的个别缺点，对important这个点下刀不深啊，其实严格意义上来讲有点偏题了……

参考了壹乐的观点，我打算改写成：
主体1：找网络和交通重合的优点（经济），接着开始鄙视交通，说其实网络有交通无法达到的优点呢
主体2：教育
主体3：多元生活体验

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