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发表于 2004-4-2 17:48:04 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
我的一些例子总结和关于作文的备考感悟
        写给后继的勇士们
今天无疑是一个值得纪念的日子,4月2日当我以一颗极为轻松的心走出武汉作文考场的一刹那,我深深知道这其中的艰辛滋味,报班,背单词,然后练作文和打字,一个个连自己都无法记数的不眠之夜,都将成为一个宝贵的回忆伴随我成长.
总的来说,我今天的发挥还算正常,怪只怪打字速度还是太慢,感觉言未尽意,所以大家还是应该狂练打字方为上策,最好在一个月前就进行上机训练,否则也只有独自懊恼了,以下是我搜集整理的一些例子希望对大家有一点帮助.
一个人的成功来自收集别人的智慧
1.荷马史诗最初由口头的民间歌谣经累世的行咛诗人加工,逐步形成的.最后由荷马收集定型.
Nowadays people pay great attribute to Homer, who is known for his eminent epic poem Iliad and the Odyssey, the recollection of many barbs’ poem.
2.瓦特对蒸汽机的改良,引发了第一次科技革命
Another example here which also rings true: British engineer and inventor watt, made fundamental improvements in the steam, his modern, high-pressure stream engine, has definitely been the first scientific revolution
通才与专家
1.亚里斯多德是通才与专家的代表.著述论及物理,天文,政治,逻辑等各方面,尤以三段论的逻辑思考方式,建立了哲学体系中的理性研究方法.
Aristotle, the great Greek philosopher, whose theories on science, ethnic, logic, nature, have profoundly influenced Western civilization .Now the Philosophical system we use today--the essential method of rational inquiry, is based on syllogism, which follows empirical observation and logic, contributed by him.
2.可用的句型
某事would clearly seem to be a field that lies exclusively within 某人的 realm, yet the annals of 该事 are replete with 另一些人的names, such as… To compound the puzzle, there has exiguously been a tinge of rumor or scandal casting doubts on the…
以下是我写的范例be that as it may, the contribution to human modernization would conspicuously seem to be the position exclusively assigned within 通才的realm, yet the annals of the eminent intellects to the civilization of mankind is replete with 专家的name: such as
家庭熏陶及自身刻苦努力的例子
1.        阿基米德从小家教良好,虚心向很多数学家求教,发现浮力定律
Among all the most intellectual figures of antiquity, Archimedes, definitely, is indelible for his discovery of the principle of buoyancy, which forms a cogent example of the contribution of good cultivation at ones youth to his future achievement.
艰苦环境下的自强
1.        但丁童年父母双亡,勤奋自学,写下<神曲>,是资产阶级人文思潮的萌芽
2.        莎士比亚从一个剧院的打杂工变为一代文学巨匠与自我提升是分不开的
Dante compose Devine comedy after all years of sedulous effort from an obscure orphan to a famous poet. Shakespeare  刻苦努力work without respite
3.贝多芬在30岁时就丧失了听力

鼓励质疑权威   
1.        培根认为知识就是力量,反对中世纪经院哲学对人们思想的禁锢,鼓励人们推倒偶像,
2.        笛卡儿认为要清除由传统得来的偏见,办法就是怀疑,提出我思故我在
3.        哥白尼日星说
Bacon advocated the idea of testing the authority in order to gain real knowledge. Cause knowledge acquires certain skepticism to whatever we study even since the dawn of our civilization. Human beings have paid tribute to Copernicus for the first step he took in ignoring established boundaries and challenge long-standing assumption of astronomy for publishing his  Heliocentric conjecture that the earth and other planets revolves around the sun. Same thought have also preoccupied Descartes who considered holding little suspicions to the wholly spread religions is the only way to expunge prejudice from our mundane life.
竞争的好处
如美国邮政制度的改进  
Take Philadelphia for example, in 1847, With a population of 150,000, people still had to go to the post office to get their mail. The confusion and congestion of individual citizens looking for their letters was itself enough to discourage use of the mail. It is no wonder that, during the years of these cumbersome arrangements, private letter-carrying and express business developed, and thrived, and actually advertised that between Boston and Philadelphia they were a half-day speedier than the government mail.
乐于助人的人会受人尊敬
In 1956, look magazine named Thomas Dooley as one of the year’s the most outstanding men. From August 1959 until his death in January, 1961, Dooley suffered almost continuous, excruciating pain. Knowing that he did not have long to live, Dr. Dooley worked without respite on behalf of Medico, the organization he had found to bring medical aid and hope to the world’s sick and needy. The lines of Robert Frost kept reverberating in his mind during those fretful days: “The woods are lovely, dark and deep; but have promise to keep, and miles to go before I sleep.” When he finally succumbed, millions throughout the world were stunned and grief-stricken by the tragedy.   
科技带来的负面效应的例子
1.        科技的发展很快
Yet modern technology progresses so rapidly that what may be today’s wild dream will be next year’s kitchen appliance. In that case, one may prognosticated that within ten years every suburban matron will have her own robot servant
Precocious wizard 尚未成熟的新奇产品    affluent inventor才思泉涌的发明家  latest brainstorm 最新的发明
2.高科技产品也毁掉了人们某些难以名状的享受  ineffable joy
Speaking about inventions and discoveries, I just learned in a newspaper that an eminent scientist in Ohio has developed a pill that contains all the nutritive value of three complete meals. I am not intent to disparage such a laudable achievement, but to me it seems like a most objectionable discovery. Rather than a scientific triumph, I would be inclined to label it as an egregious blunder, a scientific disaster, a laboratory fiasco which is a replacement of the pleasure of devouring hot corn bread, masticating on a thick steak, biting into crisp French fries, or attacking chocolate bar? I am afraid this is the only pill l would like to eschew form chewing.  
欺骗,可以用于教育的真正作用发人深省等
Nowadays, far from being a clandestine activity, it is obvious to observe that, the skullduggery on every aspect of daily functions, is rampant. Clearly, an inexorable campaign will inevitably be called for, less to resolve duplicity—the sordid affair derived from a paucity of moral guidance—than to salvage our self-respect immediately.
Students have been given a plethora of skill instruction instead of ethics
The lack of probity as well as integrity, appears to be the skullduggery’s pernicious effect on personality
construe as an open invitation to cheat with impunity将其视为一种公开的不会受惩罚的欺骗的邀请
有背于考试最初的实质the rudimentary concept of examination /the concept of examination since its inception

饱读群书和精读
voracious and indiscriminate reader
sb may very well be learning all these is to know in a very limited area
人很多的时候不要盲目听从权威
1.毕加索的抽象艺术,说明艺术家的思维是需要超前的
Take the enormity of Pablo Picasso’s artistic output for an illustration, which connotes an unrealistic interpretation of its original creature, exists as unrivalled tributes to an artist whose influence remain unequalled in quality and longevity. It is simply because of the innovative approach towards objects he applied to his work-- full of variety in its kind for individual to predict in their fragment--which people desperately needed.
2.        举爱默生的话,不要盲从他人    by Emerson
Familiar as the voice of the mind is to each, the highest merit we ascribe to Moses, Plato, and Milton is that they set at naught books and traditions, and spoke not what man, but what they thought. A man should learn to detect and watch that gleam of light which flashes across his mind from within, more than the luster of the firmament of bards and sages.
Great work of art have no such affecting lesson for us than letting thoughts which we have rejected come back to us with a certain alienated majesty, teaching us to abide by our spontaneous impression with good-humored inflexibility when the whole cry of voice is on the other side. Else tomorrow a stranger will say with masterly good sense precisely what we have thought and felt all the time, and we shall be forced to take with shame our own opinion from another.
3.        可用的句型
No way of thinking or doing, however ancient, can be trust without proof.      
By Henry Thoreau
天空为什么有云,那是为了不和上帝太接近;我们为什么相遇,那是为了追寻另一个天空的梦境... ...
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发表于 2004-4-2 17:53:14 |只看该作者
谢谢,写的很好
辛苦了

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有用!
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谢谢分享
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发表于 2004-4-2 23:12:29 |只看该作者
谢谢!
没有理由保持沉默!

起初他们追杀共产主义者,我不是共产主义者,我不说话;
接着他们追杀犹太人,我不是犹太人,我不说话;
后来他们追杀工会会员,我不是工会会员,我不说话;
此后他们追杀天主教徒,我不是天主教徒,我不说话;
最后,他们奔我而来,再也没有人站起来为我说话了。

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