4月批改活动

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Kssandra 发表于 2015-4-26 00:52
咦？我还没考~7月份考呢

哦 那你加油！

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tesolchina 发表于 2015-4-26 07:48
哦 那你加油！

嗯嗯，过一阵其他学校的事情忙完就得要拼老命了。。。

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Issue 11，这个题目我感觉很难，因为又是我比较不熟悉的这一类很大很模糊的题目。想了大半天不知道该怎么写比较好，所以为了让自己好把握一点，自己在写的过程中试图把大的话题定义成比较细节的内容，尽量举贴近生活的例子。这样导致写完后还是有一点跑题的担忧。这篇超时了大概一两分钟，拼写和语法错误不多。

辛苦您了，非常感谢！多注意身体~

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Issue 12，这个题目不觉得很难，不过中间的一二段好像写多了，写得也比较慢，第三段写到一半时间到了，草草收尾。整个文章自己写完好像有点low的感觉，似乎又有挤牙膏的嫌疑。。。

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Issue1:

As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Type: 是否同意命题及不同情况下是否正确

TS：

There is no doubt that relying on technology becomes a habitual behavior when people are trying to solve problems. Some people argue that the ability of humans’ thinking will be harmed by using technology frequently. While I agree that the deterioration of humans’ thinking can be met by relying on technology more for people who is studying in school and using Internet tech to solving academic problem, for scientists and engineers and technology they use in their jobs—computer tech and material tech, relying on technology is helpful to ability of thinking.

我对你的语言表达深感担忧
deterioration of humans’ thinking can be met  这是啥意思啊
for scientists and engineers and technology 科学家、工程师和科技怎么能并列在一起呢  

就中间段的思路来说  我觉得还不错
分科学家、工程师和大学生三个群体来写  


ts1:

To begin with, computer tech can solve numerous normal calculating issues and therefore more time can be saved by relied on using computer tech. Based on this, scientists can have more opportunity to work out the complex issues and hence ability of thinking will be grown.
举例：天体物理学家通常会利用计算机来解决物理模型中数据计算部分，从而，可以从繁琐的计算工作中解脱出来，为模型构想更复杂的方程式。在这一过程中，物理学家的思考能力得到了增强。

ts2:

In addition, since material tech offers extensive paths to the achievement of the project, the ability of engineers’ thinking is advanced by considering how to achieve the project profitable and efficient.
举例：材料技术为工程师们提供了多种传输媒介用以传输模拟或者数字信号－－光纤、屏蔽双绞线、同轴电缆，因此，基于工程要求，工程师必须考虑采用何种方式保证工程的经济性或者信号传输的稳定性。

ts3:

On the other hand, it is not good news to the ability of thinking, for students studying in school prefer relying on Internet tech more than on independent thinking to get answers for their assignments.
举例：在完成数学作业时，同学需要通过回想老师上课所讲述的内容、参考随堂笔记并结合自己的理解来解决难题，在这一过程中，独立思考能力得到了增强。在internet上，由于大量的数据被共享，同学们很容易找到相关题目的正确答案，致使独立思考的过程缩短，思考的能力得不到增强。

又写了一个issue1的提纲 麻烦王老师看看 谢谢

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4月批改结束；已经发的习作我会陆续看，并继续讨论。

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坐等5月份批改活动

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Issue 27

27) In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.


TS:

No one can deny that the development of any field of inquiry cannot be met without effort given by participants: directors bring new screen format to film industry, electronic engineers change old electro circuit design, making electronic product working more stable and chemical process engineers adjust formula, reducing waste and increasing amount of product. Although I agree that a beginner of director is more likely than the expert to make significant contribution to film industry, the expert in electronic design and chemical process have higher possibility of making important contribution to the field than beginner do.

ts1:

To begin with, for the beginner of director, the desire of providing new visual effect to audience can create new technology to filming and filming equipment and therefore the development of film industry is advanced by beginner. The experts normally are used to utilize familiar filming style and implements to film and hence are less likely to make significant contribution to movie industry. For example,
詹姆斯卡梅隆同志为业界带来了3D 摄影机和摄影技术，以及后来的全数字化摄影机，这使得摄影素材得以长久保存 观众有了全新的观影体验 斯皮尔伯格同志仍然醉心于老式的摄影手法，因此，对于电影工业的贡献仅仅体现在艺术上。

ts2:

On the other hand, in general, the experts are erudite, and beginner are good at a certain subject as they just graduate from school for a very short time. Therefore, the experts have more possibility of making important contribution to electronic design than beginner do. For example,
新手通常只知道如何使用电路画图软件和一般性的器件属性，这对于电路设计来说是完全不够的，设计电路还需要了解抗干扰，各家公司相同功能器件的不同属性等综合性知识，甚至需要考虑电子产品的外壳和电路板的安装规划，因此，expert显然可以在贡献的更多。
ts3:

In addition to being more erudite, experts have more experience than beginner since they have already experienced a variety of chemical process. Therefore, the lack of experience makes beginner contribute less than experts do in chemical process.
对于化学过程控制来说，简单的记住化学公式（新手们通常最擅长的）是不够的，因为在反应过程中，不同的外界条件，装置的规模会对最终结果产生影响，需要长期的摸索，才能发现其中的关联，expert多年的经验会产生积极作用。

麻烦王老师帮忙看一下 谢谢！

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Kssandra 发表于 2015-4-28 11:13
Issue 12，这个题目不觉得很难，不过中间的一二段好像写多了，写得也比较慢，第三段写到一半时间到了，草草 ...

谢谢老师的指点！

最近两周练习的时候题目都是没有提前考虑就上来直接写的，感觉是不如先写好提纲再动笔写出来的文章，并且写的时候明显感觉到很焦虑，一直在删删改改。5月份打算尝试每次先写一批提纲，然后再一篇篇地写全文。

谢谢老师，祝五一假期愉快~