7月30日 同主题练习 argument 34

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Argument 34) The vice president of human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company's president.
"In an effort to improve our employees' productivity, we should implement electronic monitoring of employees' Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use the Internet from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we are to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal or recreational activities, such as shopping or playing games. By installing software to detect employees' Internet use on company computers, we can prevent employees from wasting time, foster a better work ethic at Climpson, and improve our overall profits. "
"Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted."

刚刚写了这篇的示范在博客439楼。

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7月30日 同主题练习 argument 34
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谢谢老师~
谢谢互评的同学~
（今天竟然是沙发。。。。）

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我又回来，拖了这么久，汗……老师骂我吧
Argument34 （超时了）

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https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;fromuid=3232412 谢谢老师！

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cchen2014 发表于 2015-7-30 16:18
我又回来，拖了这么久，汗……老师骂我吧
Argument34 （超时了）

！@#￥%……&*（）——+
O(∩_∩)O哈哈哈~

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谢谢老师！
想顺便问下老师argument三个点的排序问题会对论证有影响么？是不是构成了递进会更好？

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这次的文章好难找假设和可能的理由啊，花了很久才找出的三个论点。
感觉段落展开还是不太擅长，下次多看看范文。

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ARGUMENT34,谢谢老师~
还有昨天的ISSUE105，老师辛苦~

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7.30 ARGUMENT 34 谢谢老师！
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看完入门系列结构写的，希望这次能好一些
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这个用了43分，没有控制好时间，列提纲就用了挺久的，谢谢老师！

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老师辛苦！

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argument 34，李老师辛苦！
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