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发表于 2016-1-20 20:19:51 |只看该作者
<error_type>一句话有两个谓语动词</error_type>
<correction.s1>It reminds me that I appear different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decreasing gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

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<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>What reminds me is that I appear differently in different place too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example,  if a certain food that is vital for human who are settling down the island that must search for food to survive is rightly necessary and the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:21:17 |只看该作者
句子 1  This reminds me, I appear different in different places, too.

句子 2  For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.

<固定搭配有错.s1>
<correction.s1>This reminds me of appearing to be different in different places.

<缺少连接词.s2>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals and the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.

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<error_type>sentence fragment
</error_type>
<correction.s1>This has reminded me that I had appeared different in different places, too.
</correction>
<correction.s2>For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food which is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food is just suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.

</correction>

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<error_type>不知道)</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I  appear differently  in different places too.</correction>
<correction.s2>For example,when  people have settled down in the island, they must searched for food to survive. If a certain food is vital for human but also the only food suitable for mammals, this kind of food would be more and more occupied by human so the number of mammals may decrese gradually.</correction>

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<error_type>不知道</error_type>
<correction.s1>This reminds me of the fact that I appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, people settling down the island must have searched for food to survive. If a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or is the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is occupied more and more by human.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:25:52 |只看该作者
省略不当
I also appear different in different places

or is the only food

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<error_type>填写你认为这个句子的错误类型(如果不知道就填不知道)</error_type>
<correction.s1>你修改后的第一个句子</correction>
This reminds me that I appear different in different places.
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>
For example, people settleing down the island must have searched for food to survive, if a certain food vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:39:46 |只看该作者

<error_type>不知道,缺少介词</error_type>
<correction.s1> This reminds me, I seems different in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2> For example, people settling down on the island must have searched food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.

</correction>


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发表于 2016-1-20 20:41:02 |只看该作者
<correction.s1>This reminds me that I perform different in different places, too.</correction>

<correction.s2> For example, if people settle down in the island,they must search for food to survive, and if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, then the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-20 20:44:02 |只看该作者
<error_type>两句话中缺乏必要的连词,too用起来很牵强,前面没有逻辑信号</error_type> <correction.s1> This reminds me that I appear different in different places.</correction>

<error_type>不知道问题在哪里</error_type>
<correction.s1> This reminds me that I appear different in different places.</correction>
<correction.s2>你修改后的第二个句子</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-21 01:42:30 |只看该作者
<error_type>句子之间关系混乱</error_type>
<correction.s1>1 This reminds me that I appeared differently in different places, too.</correction>
<correction.s2>2 For example, people settle down the island must search for food to survive, if a certain food that is vital for human is rightly necessary or the only food suitable for mammals, the number of mammals may decrease gradually as this kind of food is more and more occupied by human.</correction>

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发表于 2016-1-21 14:16:02 |只看该作者
error type 02

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谢谢楼主

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