回馈GTER， 义务帮商科新生们改文书，攒人品。

寂寞的小脚丫UID: 3145609

商学院毕业已有四年，当初是多亏了GTER上好多大神的选校定位建议，自己才顺利入读名校的。 现在，外企工作之余，偶尔帮学弟学妹们改改文书。 纯义务。  为了避嫌，我不留联系方式， 同学们可以跟帖，哪段或者哪个局部不满意，发上来我来润色和挑毛病。 传播正能量。  

blinkkkkUID: 3734867

楼主好人，顶一下。不过我现在还在准备雅思。到写ps的时候再来～

顺其自然好了UID: 3655217

请问如果问题是为什么选这个学校，可以从哪些方面写

忍者臭龟UID: 2745634

谢谢！

zhangyan702002UID: 3469457

楼主：我写好私信你，帮我修改吧

小姬帮忙UID: 3744525

顶这么棒的楼主

aqqwUID: 3686041

求楼主帮忙看一下文书，My emergency handling ability has also been well developed in dealing with a complaint client. The indignant client claimed to refund his investment in a financial product and compensate for the loss with extremely exciting mood in the bank hall. Response to the growing complexity of communication and emergence of opposite perspectives, I introduced the client to the VIP room first then reminded him of keeping clam. The lobby manager made sure that he would find the suitable way to balance it for the client. After that, the lobby manager introduced the regulation in promoting financial products. The bank could not guarantee the predict interest for the entire client, which is a confusing point for interns. Through observing the working environment and procedures, I formed a more direct image of financial market, especially China’s investment environment and the whole process of capital operation. Months of internship endowed me with significant in-depth mastery of the essential characteristic of Chinese finance and banking operations.