This is the Xmas Day

poohUID: 146994

This is the Xmas day,
With smiles on eveyone's face.
In the kindle light  I pray
For another happy new begin
Grant me happiness and healthy body
Endow me with wisdom and beauty
Can Gold hear what I say?
Will he permit?
Maybe I am too greedy
To ask for so many
If only one chance is given to me
Please let me be with my family
Although I used to wanna escape
After all this is the harbor where I feel happy and safe.

joe824UID: 187661

Hope our dreams come true!

poohUID: 146994

thanks.

I find what i write is kinda like rap

gdhdannyUID: 125843

Is this an original one?

Oh, my Godness!~~~

poohUID: 146994

of course la

it is too simple , kaka

you can try to make one too
Remember to end every sentense with [ei] or

joe824UID: 187661

So rhyming is the key point!

imongUID: 140258

the rhyme is fine but i'd believe it's no rap