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花之颜色UID: 187195

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Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive, because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
提纲:
反对
1 只资助主要城市发展的弊端
城乡经济发展不平衡导致俩后果：主要城市过度膨胀，农民不愿种地。
抑制中小城市发展为大城市的可能
2 文化和传统并不总是起源于或保存在主要城市
城市文化容易和外来文化融合，农村保留很多传统
新兴的城市不一定有历史
过去的大城市在历史发展过程中没落了，举的俺家乡洛阳呵呵
3 主要城市和其他地区应该协调发展
互相促进的关系

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Major cities have enjoyed too many privileges like subsidization and national focus while countryside and minor cities have long been ignored. Should this unjustness be continued? My answer is no.

Firstly, under such an unfair policy, the disparity of living levels between major cities and other areas like countryside and minor cities will become larger and larger, which not only destroy the justness of the whole society, but also leads to disorder. Country areas have the right to develop as well, especially for such an agricultural nation as China. Since 70 percent people are living in country, too much attention paid to major cities would lead to unbalance of economic development, which cause two consequences. On the one hand, an enormous country population would pour into major cities, which would make these cities too crowded to operate smoothly. In fact, the over-expansion of major cities has produced many problems like inadequate residence, traffic congestion and environmental pollutions. On the other hand, if the farmers still live a poor life, the psychological imbalance would make them unwilling to cultivate crops, which in turn lead to severe famine and material absence. In addition, major cities usually developed from minor cities. If we only concentrate on the development of major cities, other minor cities would lose the opportunity to become large cities.

Secondly, a nation's cultural traditions are not always preserved and generated in major cities. Some cultures and traditions born in the cities have lost or melted with other foreign cultures because cities usually have more chances to communicate with foreign cultures than country. On the contrary, there are many old customs and traditions left in countryside. For example, major cities have inhibited setting off firecrackers to celebrate the New Year, but still we can keep this tradition in country areas. Furthermore, not all the major cities have been the place where traditions and cultures originated. In China, with the time going by, newly thriving large cities like Shanghai have replaced old ones. Some old capitals such as Luoyang, which has been the one of the most prosperous cities and center of culture and economy in history, become minor cities now. Therefore, to save the old traditions and cultures, we should pay more attention to country and some minor cities.

In fact, both major cities and minor cities or country should be adhered equal importance because the development of one will in turn promote the development of the other. The prosperity of major cities could bring along the boom of surrounding areas through providing more opportunities to the neighbors, while the thriving of surrounding areas would help major cities to alleviate the pressure of population and traffic so that the major cities have the possibility to make further progress. Accordingly, the government's task is to promote coordinate development of major cities and other areas.

To sum up, since prosperity of each part of a nation is indispensable to the thriving of the whole nation, as a successful government, the policy should not neglect any part. Only in this way, a nation could develop healthily and steadily in the long run.

不怕开水烫的猪UID: 187893

我觉得题目说要保证大城市的得到充足的资金，不等于说就忽视农村了，所以body1上来就从城乡关系上攻击，是不是显得太突然？

而且好像这个题目重点应该放在文化传统上，而你只有body2是从这方面写的，似乎有点不够。

你的语言很棒，一直就挑不出什么毛病

花之颜色UID: 187195

有道理的说，偶就是觉得题目中的语气比较绝对，必须确保大城市的繁荣，好像潜台词是忽视其他地方，没想太多就攻击了～难道不是么？有没有人再跟偶探讨探讨？

花之颜色UID: 187195

我觉得自己好像很容易写跑题，似乎破题有问题，汗~危险啊~