issue183,还有7天,大伙打个分

happymichelleUID: 154082

文章写的挺费尽，没时间的活大伙重点看看行文逻辑就行了，多谢！
ps:还有7天觉得不会有什么太大的提高了，只求观点结构逻辑清楚就行
183 As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious.

Are things become more complex and mysterious rather than comprehensive when we acquire more knowledge, as the speaker claims?  In my view the two are not mutually exclusive.  In fact, natural science and social science not only help people learn more about the world and make things seem comprehensible, but also inspire our curiosity and arouse our desire to search unknown areas, which might seem complex and mysterious for us.

Generally speaking, there is no doubt that many things which seemed puzzled for our ancestors are so easy for people to understand nowadays in that accumulated knowledge helps problems and theories to be expressed clearly and lucidly.  For instance, with the basic knowledge of genetics, people now stop wondering why children resemble their parents rather than other people; with mastery of fundamental knowledge of medical science, disease such as diarrhea, hepatitis, measles, are not seem so horrible and mysterious as before.  In a word, knowledge solves so many problems that make the world, in our eyes, more understandable and more welcomed.  In this sense, the speaker’s statement that things do not become more comprehensible is groundless.

Nevertheless, it should be admitted that many new problems and puzzles are still confusing us. When it comes to the scientific field, more and more unsolved mysteries are waiting to be discovered: such as the vaccine of AIDS, the theory of organ transplant, many pathogen of illness are still unclear, which prevent us from saving more lives.  No matter how knowledgeable we are, we should realize that the knowledge we acquire are so limited that can hardly explain or solve most troubles we meet.  Furthermore, in the field of society, the problems are even more complex for the reason of historical problems and the process of globalization.  A case in point is the combat between Israel and Palestine, which lasts for more than half a century.  Why?  To ask this complicated question, we should take into account lots of factors such as the oil price of Middle East, the new world pattern after the World War Second, and the relationship between Israel and American etc.  Therefore, we should realize the complex and mysterious questions always surround us, encouraging us to find new method to solve them.

In fact, as the revolution of human beings, it is inevitable to avoid meeting more unexplained and intricate problems in that it is just by acquiring more knowledge that people gain more ability and have more chance to attach to new questions, which are both complex and mysterious at first glance.  If we uncover them, they seem so much easier to understand, that is to say, more comprehensible. If not, they might still keep secret.  Let’s compare the known part of the world to the space within a circle; the unknown part of the world around the circle grows as the circle of our knowledge expands.  As Larry, one of the philosophy professors in our university once put, (and I paraphrase) "The more knowledge people have, the more mysterious fields they would like to search.”  What he said aptly illustrates that with more knowledge, many old problems become comprehensive, while at the same time, we face more complex and mysterious challenges.

In conclusion, I essentially hold the opinion that, by accumulating more knowledge, people can not only make what has been inexplicable in the past, more easily to understand, but also have to face the incessant complex and mysterious problems.  In the final analysis, I would like to clarify that it is not because the knowledge itself, but rather the desire to explore untouched fields that make things become more complex and mysterious.

阿莱UID: 190806

感觉三个body的衔接不是很好 2.3body开头都用的是转折意思的起始词吧
另外 对题目的理解上 米雪儿是不是把握得也不太准呢？
我感觉题目更多的意思指的是：对某一特定的object 我们对于它获得的知识越多 反而越困惑
呵呵 不知道你明白我的意思不

happymichelleUID: 154082

最初由 阿莱 发布
[B]感觉三个body的衔接不是很好 2.3body开头都用的是转折意思的起始词吧
另外 对题目的理解上 米雪儿是不是把握得也不太准呢？
我感觉题目更多的意思指的是：对某一特定的object 我们对于它获得的知识越多 反而越困惑
呵呵 不知道你明白我的意思不
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谢谢阿菜!

补一下我的提纲先
1.随着我们掌握更多的知识，我们确实解决何解释了很多原来不可理解的现象，所以从这个意义上来说过去的很多难题变得可以理解了
2.但与此同时我们也应该意识到层出不穷的新问题，因为我们还不能解决它，所以这些问题对我们来说显得复杂和神秘
例子：自然科学上，AIDS疫苗的研究，器官移植的原理都还神秘
社会问题上，巴以问题的复杂性
3.事实不是因为我们活得越多的知识，我们发现问题的能力越强，我们越迫切想去探索更神秘，更复杂的问题，才显得这个世界变得更复杂了
你提的衔接问题很好，我的意思是"thing"若是指原来的puzzle但已被解决，那么就是comprehensible,若是指新的问题那么就是complex
毕竟人们懂了就觉得简单，不懂就觉得复杂
我好像没把问题说清楚ft~~
我看了一下老外的280片，它是从comprehensible, complex and mysterious各三段写的，虽然没有层次感，但是比起我这种说不清楚还是强多了

阿莱UID: 190806

你的思路我知道 但是 你这个思路感觉比较混乱的说 你自己把你的提纲读几遍
呵呵 是不是有点不知道究竟要说什么了？
来看看你的思路：
1。有些老问题得以解决了 所以 从这里来说 是简单了（并非越来越复杂？）
2。新问题的出现 因为暂时没有解决 所以看似复杂（这与我们获得越来越多的知识有什么必然联系？尤其是你的例子）
3。否定了复杂性的缘由是知识的多少问题造成的（由于探索神秘 导致了显得神秘？）

呵呵 反正你的这个提纲比较奇怪了 可能是我理解得不好

happymichelleUID: 154082

阿莱，不好意思，名字没看清楚地说
我现在也觉得写得比较混乱，看来如果语言做不到表达insightful观点
还是要写简单、清楚地观点
anyway,谢谢你的提醒~

LSDUID: 157855

183 As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious.

Are things become more complex and mysterious rather than comprehensive when we acquire more knowledge, as the speaker claims? In my view the two are not mutually exclusive. In fact, natural science and social science not only help people learn more about the world and make things seem comprehensible, but also inspire our curiosity and arouse our desire to search unknown areas, which might seem complex and mysterious for us.

Generally speaking, there is no doubt that many things which seemed puzzled for our ancestors are so easy for people to understand nowadays in that accumulated knowledge helps problems and theories to be expressed clearly and lucidly. For instance, with the basic knowledge of genetics, people now stop wondering why children resemble their parents rather than other people; with mastery of fundamental knowledge of medical science, disease such as diarrhea, hepatitis, measles, are not seem so horrible and mysterious as before. In a word, knowledge solves so many problems that make the world, in our eyes, more understandable and more welcomed. In this sense, the speaker’s statement that things do not become more comprehensible is groundless.

Nevertheless, it should be admitted that many new problems and puzzles are still confusing us. When it comes to the scientific field, more and more unsolved mysteries are waiting to be discovered: such as the vaccine of AIDS, the theory of organ transplant, many pathogen of illness are still unclear, which prevent us from saving more lives. No matter how knowledgeable we are, we should realize that the knowledge we acquire are so limited that can hardly explain or solve most troubles we meet. Furthermore, in the field of society, the problems are even more complex for the reason of historical problems and the process of globalization. A case in point is the combat between Israel and Palestine, which lasts for more than half a century. Why? To ask this complicated question, we should take into account lots of factors such as the oil price of Middle East, the new world pattern after the World War Second, and the relationship between Israel and American etc. Therefore, we should realize the complex and mysterious questions always surround us, encouraging us to find new method to solve them.（这段写了知识多了但是还是有很多没有能够解决的问题，与第一段内容相反，楼主如果用假设然后反驳的方式可能会更好，即：现说明知识多了本应如何解决以上的问题，但事实上并没有解决这些问题，反而世界更加复杂了）

In fact, as the revolution of human beings, it is inevitable to avoid meeting more unexplained and intricate problems in that it is just by acquiring more knowledge that people gain more ability and have more chance to attach to new questions, which are both complex and mysterious at first glance. If we uncover them, they seem so much easier to understand, that is to say, more comprehensible. If not, they might still keep secret. Let’s compare the known part of the world to the space within a circle; the unknown part of the world around the circle grows as the circle of our knowledge expands. As Larry, one of the philosophy professors in our university once put, (and I paraphrase) "The more knowledge people have, the more mysterious fields they would like to search.” What he said aptly illustrates that with more knowledge, many old problems become comprehensive, while at the same time, we face more complex and mysterious challenges.（这段话是写上一段现象存在的原因么？ 但好像还是在说现象，尤其是后面的引用，最好用到上一段）

In conclusion, I essentially hold the opinion that, by accumulating more knowledge, people can not only make what has been inexplicable in the past, more easily to understand, but also have to face the incessant complex and mysterious problems. In the final analysis, I would like to clarify that it is not because the knowledge itself, but rather the desire to explore untouched fields that make things become more complex and mysterious.

happymichelleUID: 154082

谢谢LSD，你的提议很好
现在思维极度混乱中~
SIGH~为什么每次写完一篇ISSUE,感觉都是考场上碰到了这题就放弃地说
好像是越想说清楚，越说不清楚

花之颜色UID: 187195

我现在也经常担心在考场上碰见一些很难写的题,唯一的希望就是平时尽可能把那些自己不擅长的题目写出来,这样考试的时候万一碰上,多少有点底