issue216 科技类，今天的，来晚了

haiyaUID: 187989

issue216-----题目------
Most important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.
------正文------
In the long river of human's history, the accidental is always accompanying with momentous discoveries and creations. However, in my opinion, I partially agree with this statement. Since the way to research and explore is hard and long, only waiting for an accidental will result in nothing. We should prepare our mind well before the chance impends.

Admittedly, discovery and creation need chance and opportunity. The accident can be categorized into two types. One type is accidental accident, in which he/she seeks for one answer while run into another one. Just like Columbus, he discovered the America Continent after 260-day voyage. Nevertheless, he mistook the continent for India, which was his original destination for his plan to substantiate the round earth. He was indeed a lucky man. He gained the success and respect despite some flaws. The other type is certain accident, in which one search and come cross the same one. Take Becquerel as another example. One day he put uranium and salt on a plate. 5 days after he ceased the experiment, a strange phenomenon was found. According to this phenomenon, he put forward the spontaneous radioactivity, which afterwards made him win the Nobel Prize. He is also lucky. It seems the fate favor them and give them rare chance.

However, from my part, the success of research and exploration is certain to great degree. We should not simply ascribe discoveries and creation to accidents. As Pasteur, an predominant biologist once said, "Opportunity prefers the prepared mind." It illustrate if we don't exert much effort to pursuit our ideal, we will never meet with opportunity. Prepared mind give us the ability to discovery details what other omit in daily life. Without stable knowledge and experience background, Becquerel hadn’t understood the meaning of the phenomenon. Prepared mind give us the fixed belief. Imagining how hopeless Columbus was on the sea, his assistants even threatened him back to Spain by suicide. But he believed they would arrive India and not change his plan.  As we all know, the way of research and exploration is somewhat lonely and tired. Columbus and Becquerel both contributed themselves into their career. If they gave up on the way to the destination, they certainly wouldn't taste the fruit of success. It is their belief and endeavor than inspire them to go on. And finally, they met the accidents certainly sooner or later.

Moreover, over-emphasizing the accident on the discoveries and creation give the birth to non-answer. It makes us escape from the difficulties as well as prompt to search the short-cut. Obviously, without knowledge and efforts, even if we face the chance within 1 micrometer, the distance may extend to 1 kilometer so that we are unable to catch it. Additionally, if we put stress on accidental accident, our attention will be distracted from the work which we are researching on or exploring. As well, it is detrimental for us to gain the success.

To sum up, the discoveries and creations like the seed with wings. They only prefer to root in rich soil, which are the prepared mind. Any idea that hopes to obtain discoveries or creations from only chance without efforts, they will gain nothing at last.

越写越慢了，这次超时了估计10分钟。
我要抓紧练习。真想不明白我刚开始写时时间是来得及的，现在怎么老来不及。

flyingwindUID: 189320

呵呵
是不是有点偏题目了？事实与倾向？
你的题目似乎变成了“Most important discoveries or creations are accidental，therefore our scientist should rely on accidents to develop important discoveries”

flyingwindUID: 189320

Issue216

“Most important discoveries are accidental: it is usually while we are seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.”

Sample Essay

It could be said that almost no discoveries are accidental because human beings are always looking for something, whether it is peace of mind or the answer to the origins of life itself. Humans are a curious lot – always questioning their surroundings and looking for answers. However, it cannot be denied that many times, although it is not necessarily the usual situation, we find the answer to a question when we were looking for the solution to a problem, rather than the answer to that particular question.

To begin with, history is chock full of examples of “accidental” discoveries that have played tremendously important roles in human development. While there may be an argument about whether such discoveries were truly accidents or not, one cannot deny that many discoveries were based on a series of fortuitous events that were not necessarily what the researcher had planned. However, it is difficult to ascribe to pure accident many of the most famous “accidental” discoveries.

It is true that there have been many inventions and discoveries credited to discovery by accident. Velcro, nylon, x-rays, polyethylene, vulcanized rubber and sugar substitutes have all been discovered more or less by chance, or at least by an unplanned series of circumstances. One of the all-time greatest “accidental” discoveries in this category would have to be that of penicillin. Alexander Fleming, a Scottish scientist, found that a bacterial sample that he was studying had become contaminated with mold, which inhibited the further development of the bacteria. Although the discovery of the drug penicillin itself was an accident, Fleming had previously researched the development of antibiotics during World War I. Additionally, more than three thousand years ago, Chinese people used moldy soybean curd as a poultice for boils and other skin infections. Warm earth, containing mold and other fungi, was also used by some cultures as a first-line treatment against infection thousands of years ago. Even though the final naming and refinement of the ultimate drug that we now know as penicillin was discovered by “accident”, it was more than a mere accident that led to its discovery.

Similarly, one can look at the “accidental” discovery of vulcanized rubber. An experimenter named Charles Goodyear had become interested in the substance of pure rubber, which could be used for many things but still had problems in its natural state. It would become brittle in cold weather, and melt in hot weather, which made it unacceptable for use in most climates. Mr. Goodyear began conducting many experiments on the substance, combining the pure rubber with many different chemicals. However, it was a fortuitous event that led to his greatest discovery. One experiment led him to combine sulfur with the pure rubber, whereupon he accidentally dropped the mixture onto a red-hot stove. Rather than melting, the substance formed into a disk-like object. It maintained its ability to stretch even when he put it outside into the cold winter air. Although Mr. Goodyear had been trying for five years to fix the problems with rubber, he “accidentally” discovered the process of vulcanization, which gives rubber strength, elasticity and durability.

Both of these examples are among the most widely cited “accidental” discoveries that have made great contributions to modern society. Although the actual sequence of events that led directly to the discovery could be deemed accidental, it was the search for answers to a particular problem that led the scientists or researchers to look in that general area anyway. While we may not find the answer to exactly the question we were originally concerned with, it is in the pursuit of knowledge in a particular area that we will usually find the answer to the question at hand.

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观点陈述型作文/[题目]

“最重大的科研发现都是随机偶然的：往往存在着这样的情况，当我们在寻找某一问题之答案时，我们碰巧获得了另一个问题的解答”。


[范文正文]

可以说几乎没有任何科学发现是随机偶然的，因为人类总是在为着某一事物或目标而寻寻觅觅，无论所要寻觅的东西是心境的平静，抑或是有关生命本身之起源的解答。人类实乃一充满好奇心的生物种类——总是在探究其所处的环境，寻求各种答案。然而，我们也不能否认，在许多时候，虽然并不必定是在经常性的情况下，当我们在寻找一个问题的答案时，会意外地发现另一个问题的答案，而不是原来那个特定问题的答案。

首先，人类历史充斥着在人类发展过程中曾发挥过极其重大作用的“偶然性”发现的实例。虽然对于这些发现是否真正属于偶然性事件可能尚有争论，但不能否认的是，许多这些发现基于一系列并非必然是研究人员计划好的巧合事件。但是，将许多最为著名的“偶然性”发现归诸于纯粹的巧合，亦是非常不切实际的。

诚然，有许多发明和发现已被人们归诸于随机性事件。维可牢，尼龙，X－线，聚乙烯，热补橡胶和蔗糖替代品等，无一不是通过那些或多或少是碰运气的过程而被发现的，或至少是经由一系列非人为策划的情况所致。在这一范畴中，青霉素堪称人类历史上最伟大的“偶然性”发现之一。苏格兰科学家Alexander Fleming发现他正在研究的一种细菌样本被霉菌所感染，而该霉菌遏制了细菌的进一步发育。尽管青霉素这一药物本身的发现纯属偶然，但是，Fleming在此之前已在第二次世界大战期间进行过抗菌素的研发。此外，早在三千年之前，中国人已使用发霉的豆腐作为膏药来治疗烫伤及其他各类皮肤感染。含有霉菌和其他真菌的热土数千年前也被有些文化用作防止传染的首要医治手段。尽管我们现在所知道的青霉素，其终极药物的最后命名及精炼是通过“凑巧”而被发现的，但导致其发现的并非只是一次偶然事件。

同样地，我们可以来分析一下热补橡胶的“偶然性”发现。一位名叫Charles Goodyear的实验人员对纯橡胶的物质产生了浓厚的兴趣。纯橡胶可用来做许多事情，但在自然状态下仍存在诸多问题。在寒冷的气候下，它会变得易于碎裂，但在炎热气候下则易于融化，这些问题使它在大多数气候状况下无法使用。Goodyear先生开始对这一物质进行研究，在纯橡胶中加入许多不同的化学品。但是，只是出于一次偶然的幸运事件，才得以导致了他那最伟大的发现。在一次实验中，他必须将硫磺和纯橡胶混合在一起。在实验过程中，他不小心将混合剂掉到一火红的炉子上。混合剂非但没有融化，相反，它形成了一个盘状物。即使当他把这一物质放到室外寒冷的隆冬空气中，它仍保持着伸缩的特性。虽然Goodyear先生五年当中一直在努力解决纯橡胶的种种问题，但他却是“偶然地”发现了热补这一过程，使橡胶具有了力度、弹性、和耐用性。

这只不过是许多最广为人们津津乐道的对现代社会作出巨大贡献的“偶然性”发现中的两个实例。尽管直接导致这些发现的一系列实际事件可被视作“偶然的”，但不管怎么说，正是对某一特定问题之答案的求索才导致科学家或科研人员朝着那个大方向进行探索。虽然我们并不一定能寻找到我们原初所关注的那个问题的确切答案，但在追求某一特定领域的知识的过程中，我们往往会寻找到所考虑的那一问题的答案

haiyaUID: 187989

谁能指点一下？或者帮我确定一下，这篇偏题了吗？
为什么我再看一遍的时候，还是没有偏题的感觉。。。

naiba369UID: 131655

占座了

呵呵，定了，不想再麻烦了:)

haiyaUID: 187989

谢谢naiba~我要睡觉了，撑不住了。

naiba369UID: 131655

issue216-----题目------
Most important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.
------正文------
In the long river of human's history, the accidental is always 这里用always不是很好，对后面的立论有负面影响accompanying with momentous discoveries and creations. However, in my opinion, I partially agree with this statement. Since the way to research and explore is hard and long, only waiting for an accidental will result in nothing. We should prepare our mind well before the chance impends. 我觉得你开头的“破题”不是很好。题目上说发现是“偶然”的，你就直接说，no，是必然的，或者其它的，而如你原文的说法，现而绕了一圈。

Admittedly, discovery and creation need chance and opportunity.这个ts句本身就不是很严密。给你改成。前面要加some，后面最好有个限定词to a certain degreeaccident can be categorized into two types. One type is accidental accident, in which he/she seeks for one answer while run into another one. Just like Columbus, he discovered the America Continent after 260-day voyage. Nevertheless, he mistook the continent for India, which was his original destination for his plan to substantiate the round earth. He was indeed a lucky man. He gained the success and respect despite some flaws. The other type is certain accident, in which one search and come cross the same one. Take Becquerel as another example. One day he put uranium and salt on a plate. 5 days after he ceased the experiment, a strange phenomenon was found. According to this phenomenon, he put forward the spontaneous radioactivity, which afterwards made him win the Nobel Prize. He is also lucky. It seems the fate favor them and give them rare chance. 这里我窃以为，你没必要再将accident分类了，而且我感觉，你没有将这个分类讲清楚。我是这样想的。分论点：A。总有一些未知的、人们无法预测与左右的因素决定着一个关键的发现。B。呵呵，想不出来了。呵呵。

However, from for my part, the success of research and exploration is certain to great degree. We should not simply ascribe discoveries and creation to accidents.最关键的话没说，不应该归因于偶然，”而应该强调计划于组织的重要作用”。 As Pasteur, an predominant biologist once said, "Opportunity prefers the prepared mind." It illustrate if we don't exert much effort to pursuit our ideal, we will never meet with opportunity. Prepared mind give us the ability to discovery details what other omit in daily life. Without stable knowledge and experience background, Becquerel hadn’t understood the meaning of the phenomenon. Prepared mind give us the fixed belief. Imagining how hopeless Columbus was on the sea, his assistants even threatened him back to Spain by suicide. But he believed they would arrive India and not change his plan. As we all know, the way of research and exploration is somewhat lonely and tired. Columbus and Becquerel both contributed themselves into their career. If they gave up on the way to the destination, they certainly wouldn't taste the fruit of success. It is their belief and endeavor than inspire them to go on. And finally, they met the accidents certainly sooner or later. 怎么说呢，虽然具体错误不能很快挑出来，但是，总觉得你讨论的不在点子上。很“绕”的思维方式。

Moreover, over-emphasizing the accident on the discoveries and creation give the birth to non-answer. It makes us escape from the difficulties as well as prompt to search the short-cut. Obviously, without knowledge and efforts, even if we face the chance within 1 micrometer, the distance may extend to 1 kilometer so that we are unable to catch it. Additionally, if we put stress on accidental accident, our attention will be distracted from the work which we are researching on or exploring. As well, it is detrimental for us to gain the success.

To sum up, the discoveries and creations like the seed with wings. They only prefer to root in rich soil, which are the prepared mind. Any idea that hopes to obtain discoveries or creations from only chance without efforts, they will gain nothing at last.

呵呵，想出来了的。你这片文章的问题是，本来要“正说”的话，你老是要反说。比如B3。你老是这么翻着说，给人的感觉就是“绕”的很，

也不知道对不，总是感觉“绕绕”的样子。呵呵

flyingwindUID: 189320

总觉得你写的有点should的感觉
我看了嘉文的范文，感觉就是不一样
不信你看看它的中文。


说不上来了，请imong来看看有没有走题如何？呵呵，原创是他写的特训的啊

poohUID: 146994

pm给他好了。

不过，我看差不多还可以，虽然写了很多的should, 自己改一下把should去掉就好了， 写成事实而不是建议性的语气

flyingwindUID: 189320

呵呵，你看也是一样的啦！！

haiyaUID: 187989

谢谢pooh，这下放心了。

跑题到不怕，现在最怕的是丧失判断跑题的能力：）

naiba369UID: 131655

比较玄！