issue68 欢迎bricks :)：）

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题目：
Issue68. People make the mistake of treating experts with suspicion and mistrust, no matter how valuable their contributions might be.
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提纲：
1专家在非专业领域的发言需要被质疑
2专家在专业领域内的观点有时也会不对，需要被怀疑
3怀疑对我们和对专家的好处
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正文：
Nowadays, we live in a rapid developing society which is full of information. Lots of newspapers and magazines pursue the experts in any area, and this made us easily to find the attitudes which are said by them about the current top affairs even the personal life in the internet. With the growth of the free press, more and more people begin to doubt the attitudes of the experts. However, the speaker hold the opinion that people make the mistake of treating experts with suspicion and mistrust, no matter how valuable their contributions might be, and I can hardly completely agree with his statement.

As is known to all, science is broader, and the knowledge of experts is limited. Hence, we may reasonably doubt about their attitude. For instance, some of the table-tennis coaches who are the experts in this field for a long time often want to say something about our football team. Should we adopt their attitude without careful thought? And also some of the famous novelists usually point out their opinion about the defects of the Chinese film with a layman’s word. Should not we suspect their outlook? I think, the doubt at this time can make us see the problem more clearly. Otherwise, we are more likely to be called ZHUIXINGZU.

In addition, the experts are human too. So they may also make mistakes. The experts, who are young without enough experiences, although very clever, may make the mistake. The experts who are too old may make the mistake because of the decrease of their intellect. Even the experts who are well-experienced and still have a high intellect may make the simplest mistake just due to their careless. If the attitude made by the expert has not been suspected, it may inhabit the development of the science or mislead the main people of the society. Take the middle century Europe for example. At that time, people are misleaded by the old experts in the science field. They together with the religionist told the public that the sun is go around the earth, and the earth is a flat. The flaws made the science of the human history stop growing for nearly 3 centuries. How dangerous it is! Today we live in a democratic world, and we should suspect the experts to pursue the truth for prohibit the same thing happened.

Moreover, the attitude of suspicion can not only let us understand the knowledge correctly, more clearly, and also it can provide an environment in which the experts will think the problem more carefully and be chary of their opinions. Therefore, they will learn to be more responsible to the society, and it is much easier for them to discover the new things in the subject.

To sum up, I do not agree with the speaker’s statement. I think the real science is very precise and it can undergo the test of suspicion. The experts will learn more in the atmosphere which have enough suspicions, and we should study with the suspected attitude, just like many famous educators said: “ask more ‘why’ when studying.”

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欢迎BRICKS！：）
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冥界先占座，没人改的话冥界明天改，冥界睡觉了先

好像这个座占得有点长，大家愿意改的先不用管我^_^

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[B]冥界先占座，没人改的话冥界明天改，冥界睡觉了先

好像这个座占得有点长，大家愿意改的先不用管我^_^ [/B]

先谢谢：）
have a nice dream:)

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No.1  issue68 欢迎bricks ：）
题目：
Issue68. People make the mistake of treating experts with suspicion and mistrust, no matter how valuable their contributions might be.
__________________________________________________________

提纲：
1专家在非专业领域的发言需要被质疑
2专家在专业领域内的观点有时也会不对，需要被怀疑
3怀疑对我们和对专家的好处
__________________________________________________________

正文：
Nowadays, we live in a rapid developing society which is full of information. Lots of newspapers and magazines pursue the expertsthe statements delived by experts in any area, and thisand this=>which made us easily to find the attitudes which are said"attitudes" seemed cannot be said, I perfer "hold" by them about the current top affairs even the personal lifetop affair 好象和personal life不能构成递进？ in the internet. With the growth of the free press好词, more and more people begin to doubtbegin to doubt 好象不通？楼主看？ the attitudes of the experts. However, the speaker hold the opinion that people make the mistake of treating experts with suspicion and mistrust, no matter how valuable their contributions might be, and I can hardly completely agree with his statement.

As is known to all, science is broader, and the knowledge of experts is limited. Hence, we may reasonably doubt about their attitude1。attitudes; 2.换成opinions?attitudes好像过多？. For instance, some of the table-tennis coaches who are the experts in this field for a long time often want to say something about our football team. Should we adopt their attitude without careful thought? And also some of the famous novelists usually point out their opinion about the defects of the Chinese film with a layman’s word. Should not we suspect their outlook? I think, the doubt at this time指代不明？this time是哪个time?还是我没看懂？ can make us see the problem more clearly. Otherwise, we are more likely to be called ZHUIXINGZU我晕，明摆着欺负老美不懂中文^_^.

In addition, the experts are human too这句话在中文有引申义，在英文没有。老美会以为你在写动物学巨著^_^，个人认为他们不会明白human 与make mistake的关系，他们会想是不是其他动物不会make mistake。我不是说一定不对，我只是觉得擦边球最好少打。楼主认为？. So they may also make mistakes. The experts, who are young without enough experiences, although very clever, may make the mistake. The experts who are too old may make the mistake because of the decrease of their intellect. Even the experts who are well-experienced and still have a high intellect may make the simplest mistake just due to their careless. If the attitude made by the expert has not been suspected, it may inhabit the development of the science or mislead the main people of the society. Take the middle century Europe for example. At that time, people are misleaded by the old experts in the science field. They together with the religionist told the public that the sun is go around the earth, and the earth is a flat. The flawsfallacy 或cacodoxy,flaw是小瑕疵 made the science of the human history stop growing for nearly 3 centuries. How dangerous it is!口语 Today we live in a democratic world, and we should suspect the experts to pursue the truth for prohibit the same thing happenedprohibit sth. from happening, 不要用过去分词，都happen了就没法prohibit了.

Moreover, the attitude of suspicion can not only let us understand the knowledge correctly, more clearly, andbut also it can provide an environment这是自然环境，用atmosphere或circumstance in which the experts will think the problem more carefully and be chary of their opinions. Therefore, they will learn tolearn to好像有暗指专家们现在不负责任的意思？ be more responsible to the society, and it is much easier for them to discover the new things in the subject这句话好像有点怪.

To sum up, I do not agree with the speaker’s statement. I thinkthink 就别用了，掉价啊 the real science is very precise and it can undergo the test of suspicion. The experts will learn more in the atmosphere which have enough suspicions, and we should study with the suspected attitude, just like many famous educators said: “ask more ‘why’ when studying.”


不错那，尤其是文章思路。你的文章总是写的很丰满，楼主保持！

改了一些表达上的小毛病，不一定对，个人意见，请楼主斟酌^_^

不对的地方欢迎大家讨论，敬请指教！

现在大家知道我是见文章往死里改的人类了，所以，还请大家日后有时间改我文章时给我往死里打！不用给我留情面。拍的越恨我越高兴（这人好像有点精神错乱^_^）

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THANK YOU !意见很好，考虑改正的同时，回你一个小BRICKS：）