issue46 领导者的竞争合作意识，限时，自己修改过

G猫UID: 192988

Issue46  领导者的竞争合作意识
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作者：G猫     共用时间：44分33秒     645 words
从2005年2月1日8时17分到2005年2月1日9时44分

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While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.
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Co-mpetition, which means a combination of competition and cooperation, is a buzzword in this decade. Both the sense of competition and cooperation is necessary for any one, especially the leaders. Competition together with cooperation makes a leader and later a successful leader. A society should better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of competition as well as a sense of cooperation.

Be competitive and having the ability to cooperate with others makes one outstanding to be a leader. Be competitive render individual enterprise. Driven by such enterprise, he or she will take pains to perform well in any given task and also strive to catch up with creative ideas that are differing from the majority. This makes the prospective leader prominent and noticeable in an organization. However, one who performs best in the organization will not ensure that he has the ability to become a leader. The sense and ability of cooperation drive one to deliberately organize his or her partners cooperate in an effective way so as to reach a solution to the given task. In short, a desire to win in competition, the willing to cooperate with others and the capacity for organizing cooperation is the key to leadership.   

Furthermore, the sense of competition makes a successful leader. In the super-modern society, the tasks confronted by leaders are increasingly complex and complicated. Take the business world for example. The leader of a company must lead his or her organization to survive competition. Facing the external competitors, a sense of competition compels the leader to take advantage of various strategies to improve their service and product so as to win the other competitors. By doing so, instead of being left out and left behind, the leader are possible to make continuing profit in a changeable economic climate. For the internal employees, encouraging the competition spirit sometimes can boost the efficiency and productivity of the organization. In the sales department, for example, if a reward policy is adopted, the leader might promote a competitive atmosphere for the employees to compete against others to win the reward, and as a result the over all sales are promoted. However, competition is not always a good thing to have. An unhealthy realization of competition will harm the company and its future. For the sake of winning in competition in the market, some leader may use illegal means, such as stealing business information of their competitors. This will damage the interest of other companies and also will result in a reputation lapse of the company itself in the long run. Thus, the sense of competition of a leader includes not only being competitive but also being competitive whenever and wherever needed and applying this strategy in an appropriate way.

A sense of cooperation is also an essential element of good leadership. Cooperation, as a managerial strategy, will benefit the corporation from many aspects. For the internal operation of the organization, most of the tasks cannot be finished by individual effort. Cooperation can make use of every member's advantages and intelligence to maximize the productivity and efficiency. For the external competition in the market, cooperation is also an effective way to promote sales. As a business strategy, cooperation so as to competition has benefited many business institutions. This can be illustrated in the example of shopping center of certain kinds of goods, Such as the cell phone market. Many shops selling cell phones are located there. Why do the leaders of those shops choose a place that is replete with competitors? Don’t they be afraid to be beaten by their competitors? The answer is no because they are in a relationship of cooperation to attract more customers as people believe that they will have more choices in this kind of shopping center. In this case, neither shop has got all sales, but the over all sales of the market rise. And as a result, every shop is a winner. Here, the sense of cooperation of leader has taken effect. From all the above, we can see the sense of cooperation is important for the leaders not only in the company's operation but also in its profit-making in the market.

In sum, the sense of competition and cooperation makes one to be a leader; moreover, they both serve benefit purpose for a leader to run his or her institutions more successfully. The leader should realize both the merits and drawbacks of competition and cooperation, making use of them in a proper way, so as to achieve the final goal of the community.

[ 本帖最后由 iq28 于 2007-6-26 02:28 编辑 ]

鬼谷子UID: 159645

限时能写出来这么多很不错了
我看看

G猫UID: 192988

谢谢鬼谷子，限时只写了645，后来改的时候东加西加的就加到这么长了，现在似乎740个字左右了。

windy-iUID: 196853

Co-mpetition, which means a combination of competition and cooperation, is a buzzword in this decade. Both the sense of competition and cooperation is necessary for any one, especially the leaders. Competition together with cooperation makes a leader and later a successful leader. 我觉得这两句话层次很分明，但是有点点罗嗦A society should better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of competition as well as a sense of cooperation.

Being competitive and having the ability to cooperate with others make one outstanding to be a leader. Be competitive render individual enterprise. Driven by such enterprise, he or she will take pains to perform well in any given task and also strive to catch up with creative ideas that are differing from the majority. This makes the prospective leader prominent and noticeable in an organization. However, one who performs best in the organization will not ensure that he has the ability to become a leader. The sense and ability of cooperation drive one to deliberately organize his or her partners cooperate in an effective way so as to reach a solution to the given task. In short, a desire to win in competition, the willing to cooperate with others and the capacity for organizing cooperation is the key to leadership.

看到这里明白了你的用意：）是用第三句话来统领第三第四段吧Furthermore, the sense of competition makes a successful leader. In the super-modern society, the tasks confronted by leaders are increasingly complex and complicated. Take the business world for example. The leader of a company must lead his or her organization to survive competition. Facing the external competitors, a sense of competition compels the leader to take advantage of various strategies to improve their service and product so as to win the other competitors. By doing so, instead of being left out and left behind, the leader are possible to make continuing profit in a changeable economic climate. For the internal employees, encouraging the competition spirit sometimes can boost the efficiency and productivity of the organization. In the sales department, for example, if a reward policy is adopted, the leader might promote a competitive atmosphere for the employees to compete against others to win the reward, and as a result the over all sales are promoted. 我觉得因为你是想讲竞争与合作的平衡吧，不妨在谈过分aggressive的坏处时，从对合作性削弱的角度来讲。However, competition is not always a good thing to have. An unhealthy realization of competition will harm the company and its future. For the sake of winning in competition in the market, some leader may use illegal means, such as stealing business information of their competitors. This will damage the interest of other companies and also will result in a reputation lapse of the company itself in the long run. Thus, the sense of competition of a leader includes not only being competitive but also being competitive whenever and wherever needed and applying this strategy in an appropriate way.

A sense of cooperation is also an essential element of good leadership. Cooperation, as a managerial strategy, will benefit the corporation from many aspects. For the internal operation of the organization, most of the tasks cannot be finished by individual effort. Cooperation can make use of every member's advantages and intelligence to maximize the productivity and efficiency. For the external competition in the market, cooperation is also an effective way to promote sales. As a business strategy, cooperation so as to competition has benefited many business institutions. This can be illustrated in the example of shopping center of certain kinds of goods, Such as the cell phone market. 这个例子比较……我觉得用跨国公司扩张战略中的并购可能恰当些。这个例子主要好像是用博弈或者说专业市场的形成降低各种成本来解释的。Many shops selling cell phones are located there. Why do the leaders of those shops choose a place that is replete with competitors? Don’t they be afraid to be beaten by their competitors? The answer is no because they are in a relationship of cooperation to attract more customers as people believe that they will have more choices in this kind of shopping center. In this case, neither shop has got all sales, but the over all sales of the market rise. And as a result, every shop is a winner. Here, the sense of cooperation of leader has taken effect. From all the above, we can see the sense of cooperation is important for the leaders not only in the company's operation but also in its profit-making in the market.

In sum, the sense of competition and cooperation makes one to be a leader; moreover, they both serve benefit purpose for a leader to run his or her institutions more successfully. The leader should realize both the merits and drawbacks of competition and cooperation, making use of them in a proper way, so as to achieve the final goal of the community.
我的整体印象就是用词很丰富呢！层次条理也很清晰哦！写出这么多字真是不简单！向你学习！我自己的issue里面benefit不知道出现了多少次，烦死了。帮我看看吧！：）

windy－i

鬼谷子UID: 159645

------题目------
While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.
------正文------
Co-mpetition, 【？没见过这个词，请教】which means a combination of competition and cooperation, is a buzzword【颠峰里面的词汇，不错】 in this decade. Both the sense of competition and cooperation is necessary for any one, especially the leaders. Competition together with cooperation makes a leader and later a successful leader. 【罗嗦，makes a leader successful】A society should better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of competition as well as a sense of cooperation. 【开头不错，提出观点，要两者并重】

Be competitive and having the ability to cooperate with others makes one outstanding to be a leader. Be competitive render individual enterprise. Driven by such enterprise, he or she will take pains to perform well in any given task and also strive to catch up with creative ideas that are differing from the majority. This makes the prospective leader prominent and noticeable in an organization. However, one who performs best in the organization will not ensure that he has the ability to become a leader. The sense and ability of cooperation drive one to deliberately 【？】organize his or her partners cooperate in an effective way so as to reach a 【better】solution to the given task. In short, a desire to win in competition, the willing to cooperate with others and the capacity for organizing cooperation is 【are】the key to leadership. 【具体论述为何两者要并重，不过，我原以为你要分开来论述的，不知道你下面会怎么写，继续看】

Furthermore, the sense of competition makes a successful leader. 【是说前面的是一般人成为leader，这里说成为成功的leader，明白你的思路了】In the super-modern society, the tasks confronted by leaders are increasingly complex and complicated. Take the business world for example. The leader of a company must lead his or her organization to survive competition. Facing the external competitors, a sense of competition compels the leader to take advantage of various strategies to improve their service and product so as to win the other competitors. By doing so, instead of being left out and left behind, the leader are【？】 possible to make continuing profit in a changeable economic climate. For the internal employees, encouraging the competition spirit sometimes can boost the efficiency and productivity of the organization. In the sales department, for example, if a reward policy is adopted, the leader might promote a competitive atmosphere for the employees to compete against others to win the reward, and as a result the over all【overall】 sales are promoted. However, competition is not always a good thing to have. An unhealthy realization of competition will harm the company and its future. For the sake of winning in competition in the market, some leader may use illegal means, such as stealing business information of their competitors. This will damage the interest of other companies and also will result in a reputation lapse of the company itself in the long run. Thus, the sense of competition of a leader includes not only being competitive but also being competitive whenever and wherever needed and applying this strategy in an appropriate way. 【你的结论似乎归结到了竞争的意义上面，应该是归结到领导应该具备sense of competition上面才对】

A sense of cooperation is also an essential element of good leadership. Cooperation, as a managerial strategy, will benefit the corporation from many aspects. For the internal operation of the organization, most of the tasks cannot be finished by individual effort. Cooperation can make use of every member's advantages and intelligence to maximize the productivity and efficiency. For the external competition in the market, cooperation is also an effective way to promote sales. As a business strategy, cooperation so as to competition has benefited many business institutions. This can be illustrated in the example of shopping center of certain kinds of goods, Such as the cell phone market. Many shops selling cell phones are located there. Why do the leaders of those shops choose a place that is replete with competitors? Don’t they be afraid to be beaten by their competitors? The answer is no because they are in a relationship of cooperation to attract more customers as people believe that they will have more choices in this kind of shopping center. 【其实他们同样也是要通过这样的方法来和别人竞争，应该严密一点，说他们不只是在竞争，同样是在合作】 In this case, neither shop has got all sales, but the over all sales of the market rise. And as a result, every shop is a winner. Here, the sense of cooperation of leader has taken effect. From all the above, we can see the sense of cooperation is important for the leaders not only in the company's operation but also in its profit-making in the market. 【应该再举一些government, sports, industry, and other areas的例子】

In sum, the sense of competition and cooperation makes one to be a leader; moreover, they both serve benefit purpose for a leader to run his or her institutions more successfully. The leader should realize both the merits and drawbacks of competition and cooperation, making use of them in a proper way, so as to achieve the final goal of the community.

【条理很清楚，分析的也不错。不过很多地方显得罗嗦，再简洁一点就更好了。因为考试的时候你没有时间来写这么多的东西的，尽量用最简洁的语言表达出来你的思路，只要表达清楚就可以了，不用把每个论点都说的那么多，可以把时间多用在完善你的思路上面，比如说你B2的结论部分和除了商业之外其他领域的论述。还有一个问题就是，看你限时的时间接近45分钟了，最好留出5分钟左右的时间检查typo和语法错误等等。加油！】

whxyjUID: 186010

By doing so, instead of being left out and left behind  
I think just ‘left behind’ is fine
and as a result the over all sales are promoted
By subjunctive sentence begin with ‘if’ , u should add ‘will’ before ‘are’
The answer is no because??
In this case, neither shop has got all sales?
首先，在竞争里，用sales department内部举例，应该是有一点偏差吧，not the sense of leader but the encouragement the leader exert on the staff to compete .我觉得手机市场的例子来阐述cooperation 不是很恰当，那只是一种类似行会吧，是另一种竞争，商家之间本质上还是独立的啊，而且也没有体现出leader来。
不过，你的文章还是很流畅，词汇量很不错，句子也很漂亮。

G猫UID: 192988

回鬼谷子：

1，Co-mpetion 这个词我是在pooh JJ的百宝箱里社会部分cooperation&competition里看到

的，我回去看了看，写错了，应该是Co－Opetition。原来没仔细看，以为就是竞争和合作结

合了，现在发现好像用在这里似乎不怎么合适。它应该只是指我说的手机市场那种情况。

There is an odd but effective business principle that goes by the name co-

opetition. It's a combination of cooperation and competition that offers the

counter intuitive possibility for rivals to benefit from each other's seemingly

competitive activities. In short, there are circumstances where having more

players to cut the pie means bigger pieces of pie for everyone. That's co-

opetition.

2，buzzword，颠峰词汇？？？还没背过，这个词也是在这个百宝箱里学到的，poohJJ的宝贝

用处很大呢。

3，makes a leader and later a successful leader，我想我的主题句应该把主题部分的内容，结构都概括了，所以就写了这么个罗嗦的句子，如果写成makes leader successful 不是就不能体现b1的内容了？不过我觉得b1挺多余的，原来怕写不够。现在想删了算了吧，把后面的内容再充实下。

4，deliberately我想说有意识的，应该用什么呀？

5，【你的结论似乎归结到了竞争的意义上面，应该是归结到领导应该具备sense of competition上面才对】同意，我也觉得没落到主题上。

6，【其实他们同样也是要通过这样的方法来和别人竞争，应该严密一点，说他们不只是在竞争，同样是在合作】 是不只是合作，同样是在竞争吧：）因为我的确写出了合作而没突出竞争。

7，我也觉得罗嗦，就是面铺的太广，反倒很多都不能具体深入，有很多论点都只是泛泛分析了一下，没有将其具体化。这个原来写过提纲，写着写着发现原来的提纲没办法写，就临时组织了，结果有点收不住了。

8，“不用把每个论点都说的那么多，可以把时间多用在完善你的思路上面，比如说你B2的结论部分和除了商业之外其他领域的论述”对于这点我有些疑问，就是在论证的深入和全面上的取舍问题，我觉得应该保证前者。虽然老外范文不是很权威，但是我看他的很多范文只是从一两个方面来详细的分析。而这道题是有点不一样，因为它的限定已经在题目中出现了。我想问，像这种有没有必要把每个领域都提到，还是只要在某个方面提出另人信服的论证就可以了。

9，写到刚才我又发现了一个问题，其实我b2，b3部分都是拿take business world for example，可是没组织好，b3整个都感觉游历在这个example外了，要怎么改善呢？


多谢鬼谷子：）

G猫UID: 192988

回windy-i：
1，“看到这里明白了你的用意：）是用第三句话来统领第三第四段吧”
呵呵，其实没想这样了，没有组织好。

2，“我觉得因为你是想讲竞争与合作的平衡吧，不妨在谈过分aggressive的坏处时，从对合作性削弱的角度来讲。”

好主意，这也是个不错的点：）

3，“这个例子比较……我觉得用跨国公司扩张战略中的并购可能恰当些。这个例子主要好像是用博弈或者说专业市场的形成降低各种成本来解释的。”

我觉得这个例子应该是可以的，它本来就用在一篇讲cooperation so as to competition的文章中作为例证的，不过它是说古董店，似乎，呵呵。

不过你的这个例子也很好呀，我考虑考虑。

4，用词的话在看文章的时候注意一些别人用的挺好，而你不会去用的词。尤其是一些很常用的，就像你说的benefit之类的。想想你平时是怎么表达这样的意思的，把它们联系起来。就会在自己写的时候变换了：）

这些天有点忙，答应网友的一篇文章我还没来得及看，下次一定看看你的：）

对了，你什么时候考呢？

G猫UID: 192988

回whxyj：

1, 呵呵，其实我不知道left out是啥意思，没查到。不过他是在表达类似意思的句子中和left behind一起用的，所以我就把它们一起搬过来了。请教下left out什么意思呢？

2，By subjunctive sentence begin with ‘if’ , u should add ‘will’ before ‘are’

对，教训的极是。

3，The answer is no because??

这个语法有问题么，the answer is no，because这样好点是吧：）

4，In this case, neither shop has got all sales?

嗯，应该是none才对。

5，首先，在竞争里，用sales department内部举例，应该是有一点偏差吧。

我觉得可以呀，领导者有竞争的意识也应该包括他认为竞争会带来哪些好处并且能够利用竞争达到某些目的。在这个例子里，领导者利用奖励销售成绩比较突出的员工就是利用了员工之间的竞争来提高公司总体的销售额。

6，我觉得手机市场的例子来阐述cooperation 不是很恰当，那只是一种类似行会吧，是另一种竞争，商家之间本质上还是独立的啊，而且也没有体现出leader来。

看来对于这个例子大家都有点疑问，可能这种观点比较少见吧。这也并不是我的观点，在pooh JJ的百宝箱和imong曾经的一篇素材精读的贴子里都提到了这种通过cooperate so as to compete 的观点。我觉得很好，所以就用在了自己的文章里。

其实我原稿的时候的确没突出leader，于是我改动了一个句子。Why do the leaders of those shops choose a place that is replete with competitors? 但是由于后面没有做相应的改动，指代词有点混乱，所以突出地不是很好，我再考虑下。

多谢修改：）

windy-iUID: 196853

谢谢G猫：）我来这儿不久，一个多星期就要考啦！呵呵

windy-iUID: 196853

我是说关于用词的建议，谢谢你哦！！！！我的时间明显很紧了……加油加油！！！你也是！

neuzergUID: 156156

While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.
------正文------
Co-mpetition, which means a应该用the combination of competition and cooperation, is a buzzword in this decade. Both the sense of competition and cooperation isare necessary for any one, especially the leaders. Competition together with cooperation makes a leader and later a successful leader. A society should better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of competition as well as a sense of cooperation.

Be competitive and having the ability to cooperate with others makes one outstanding to be a leader. Be competitive render individual enterprise. Driven by such enterprise, he or she will take pains to perform well in any given task and also strive to catch up with creative ideas that are differingdiffer from the majority. This makes the prospective leader prominent and noticeable in an organization. However, one who performs best in the organization will not ensure that he has the ability to become a leader.only the best perform in the organization alone will not certainly prove that he has the ability to become a quanlified leader The sense and ability of cooperation drive one to deliberately organize his or her partners cooperate in an effective way so as to reach a solution to the given task. In short, a desire to win in competition, the willingwillingness to cooperate with others and the capacity for organizing cooperation is the key to leadership.

Furthermore, the sense of competition makes a successful leader. In the super-modern society, the tasks confronted byto leaders are increasingly complex and complicated. Take the business world for example. The leader of a company must lead his or her organization to survive competition. Facing the external competitors, a sense of competition compels the leader to take advantage of various strategies to improve their service and product so as to win the other competitors. By doing so, instead of being left out and left behind, the leader are possible to make continuing profit in a changeable economic climate. For the internal employees, encouraging the competition spirit sometimes can boost the efficiency and productivity of the organization. In the sales department, for example, if a reward policy is adopted, the leader might promote a competitive atmosphere for the employees to compete against others to win the reward, and as a result the over all sales are promoted. However, competition is not always a good thing to have. An unhealthy realization of competition will harm the company and its future. For the sake of winning in competition in the market, some leader may use illegal means, such as stealing business information of their competitors. This will damage the interest of other companies and also will result in a reputation lapse of the company itself in the long run. Thus, the sense of competition of a leader includes not only being competitive but also being competitive whenever and wherever needed and applying this strategy in an appropriate way.

A sense of cooperation is also an essential element of good leadership. Cooperation, as a managerial strategy, will benefit the corporation from many aspects. For the internal operation of the organization, most of the tasks cannot be finished by individual effort. Cooperation can make use of every member's advantages and intelligence to maximize the productivity and efficiency. For the external competition in the market, cooperation is also an effective way to promote sales. As a business strategy, cooperation so as to competition has benefited many business institutions. This can be illustrated in the example of shopping center of certain kinds of goods, Such as the cell phone market. Many shops selling cell phones are located there. Why do the leaders of those shops choose a place that is replete with competitors? Don’t they be afraid to be beaten by their competitors? The answer is no because they are in a relationship of cooperation to attract more customers as people believe that they will have more choices in this kind of shopping center. In this case, neither shop has got all sales, but the over all sales of the market rise. And as a result, every shop is a winner. Here, the sense of cooperation of leader has taken effect. From all the above, we can see the sense of cooperation is important for the leaders not only in the company's operation but also in its profit-making in the market.

In sum, the sense of competition and cooperation makes one to be a leader; moreover, they both serve benefit purpose for a leader to run his or her institutions more successfully. The leader should realize both the merits and drawbacks of competition and cooperation, making use of them in a proper way, so as to achieve the final goal of the community.
结构方面，个人建议将第二段调到第3，4段之后，这样说理显得更有逻辑）
比我强太多了，我打死也写不出这么多东西来：（我的qq：261990467有空联系

poohUID: 146994

Issue46 领导者的竞争合作意识
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作者：G猫 共用时间：44分33秒 645 words
从2005年2月1日8时17分到2005年2月1日9时44分

------题目------
While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation.
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Co-mpetition, which means a combination of competition and cooperation, is a buzzword in this decade. Both the sense of competition and cooperation is necessary for any one any one改成everyone好些, especially the leaders. Competition together with cooperation makes a leader and later a successful leader.这个似乎不应该有什么顺序吧，不能说先变领导，再做成功的领导。这句根后面一句有些重复 A society should better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of competition as well as a sense of cooperation.

Be being competitive and having the ability to cooperate with others makes one outstanding to be a leader. make one outstanding to be a leader没见过这种用法Be being competitive renders individual enterprise.此句两处语法错误,另外，be competitive罗嗦， 直接用competition就行了 Driven by such enterprise, he or she will take pains to perform well in any given task and also strive to catch up with creative ideas that are differing from the majority. 重点在how, 为什么有了这两种sense人就可以成为成功的领导。如果你不解释原因直接就说he will perform well in any given task有谁会相信呢 This makes the prospective leader prominent and noticeable in an organization. However, one who performs best in the organization will not ensure that he has the ability to become a leader. The sense and ability of cooperation drive one to deliberately organize his or her partners cooperate in an effective way so as to reach a solution to the given task. In short, a desire to win in competition, the willing to cooperate with others and the capacity for organizing cooperation is the key to leadership. 不如把后半部分分离开，单独写一段

Furthermore, the sense of competition makes a successful leader.本文用了好多make ...leader.....the sense of.....太多重复了。另外，我感觉，这段跟body1的前半部分是一个意思 In the super-modern society, the tasks confronted by leaders are increasingly complex and complicated. Take the business world for example. The leader of a company must lead his or her organization to survive competition. Facing the external competitors, a sense of competition compels the leader to take advantage of various strategies to improve their service and product so as to win win over the other competitors. By doing so, instead of being left out and left behind, the leader are possible 还是用able好，possible多用it 做形式主语  to make continuing profit in a changeable economic climate. For the internal employees, encouraging the competition spirit sometimes can boost the efficiency and productivity of the organization. In the sales department, for example, if a reward policy is adopted, the leader might promote a competitive atmosphere for the employees to compete against others to win the reward, and as a result the over all overall sales are promoted. However, competition is not always a good thing to have. An unhealthy realization of competition will harm the company and its future. For the sake of winning in competition in the market, some leader may use illegal means, such as stealing business information of their competitors. This will damage the interest of other companies and also will result in a reputation lapse of the company itself in the long run. Thus, the sense of competition of a leader includes not only being competitive but also being competitive whenever and wherever needed and applying this strategy in an appropriate way. 这段写的很好，分析的有理有据，而且这个however之后的内容体现了你思维的深度

A sense of cooperation is also an essential element of good leadership. Cooperation, as a managerial strategy, will benefit the corporation from many aspects. For the internal operation of the organization, most of the tasks cannot be finished by individual effort. Cooperation can make use of every member's advantages and intelligence to maximize the productivity and efficiency. For the external competition in the market, cooperation is also an effective way to promote sales. As a business strategy, cooperation so as to competition has benefited many business institutions. This can be illustrated in the example of shopping center of certain kinds of goods, Such as the cell phone market. Many shops selling cell phones are located there. Why do the leaders of those shops choose a place that is replete with competitors? Don’t they be afraid to be beaten by their competitors? The answer is no because they are in a relationship of cooperation to attract more customers as people believe that they will have more choices in this kind of shopping center. In this case, neither shop has got all sales, but the over all sales of the market rise. And as a result, every shop is a winner. Here, the sense of cooperation of leader has taken effect. From all the above, we can see the sense of cooperation is important for the leaders not only in the company's operation but also in its profit-making in the market.例子真得很好，从一个不同于commonsense的角度来分析问题，体现了你的敏锐的观察力

In sum, the sense of competition and cooperation makes one to be a leader; moreover, they both serve benefit purpose for a leader to run his or her institutions more successfully. The leader should realize both the merits and drawbacks of competition and cooperation, making use of them in a proper way, so as to achieve the final goal of the community.

body2,3 写的很不错，body1有些生硬而且逻辑混乱。开头还可以。我认为这篇文章应该有5分

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