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Issue184  
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It is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data.
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Many scientists established their theories by observing new phenomenon, collecting relative data, and therefore discovering and summarizing the essences/ rules of their objects. However, there are also a huge number of theories are built at it beginning without data in detail and moreover quite a few of them are epoch-making glorious accomplishments in human history.
First, to theorize before one has data is one of the scientific ways for people to learn and research. Many scientists and socialists theorize their thoughts before they have data, and then put these theories into practice to gain the data, which might then validate or disconfirm these theories and improve them gradually. Goldbach Conjecture is such a exact instance of this sort. Moreover, in some situation, one could not manage to obtain the data timely and as a result to theorize before one has data might protect those creative and talented thoughts vanished in geniuses’ mind and provide chances to test them later. In common sense, with the increasing development in science and technology, more and more problem might be resolved successfully only with knowledge in many interdisciplinary fields; a final resolution needs all-sided developments of numbers of disciplines.  Hence, when a certain discipline goes along much faster than others, the result of its up-to-date research could only be theorized before put it into practice. As we all known, Theory of Relativity, the excellent invention of Albert Einstein, was managed to be tested after many years, when the technologies of physics and mathematics etc. grow strong enough to make the practice of this theory come true. All these factors reveal that to theorize before has data is not only a scientific but also a necessary way for people to do and develop their research.

Second, many theories built before people gain their data might be proved extremely huge accomplishments in later time for their super advancement, and moreover, these innovative thoughts, no mater proved true or false later, actually always inspire people to discover their unknown world and drive many other developments of theories. For example, the Marxist Sociology becomes the basic theoretic guideline of many later socialistic countries; the Theory of Relativity leads to large practical inventions; the study on Four Color Problem results in the impulses of Ichnography Theory, Algebraic Topology, Limited Projective Geometry and Calculator Code programming etc. From all the evidence above, it is not hard to see that hypothesis, theory built before one has data
, has several profound significances, those both in the probable realistic value of this theory itself and its inspiring value to other thoughts. Therefore, we could not overlook the theories that are built before people have their relative data. All the theories serious drawn are the precious wealth waiting for our further understanding and exploration.

In conclusion, to theorize before one has data is a scientific way for people to know our world actively and insightfully. It is right for us to consider it in an all-sided and long-term manner.

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Issue184
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It is a grave mistake to theorize before one has data.
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Many scientists established their theories by observing new phenomenon(可数名次), collecting relative data, and therefore discovering and summarizing the essences/ rules of their objects. However, there are also a huge number of theories are built at itits beginning without data in detail and moreover quite a few of them are epoch-making glorious accomplishments in human history. 开头很好，很自然，没有任何模板的味道，这方面我差了很多啊 ：
First, to theorize before one has data is one of the scientific ways for people to learn and research. Many scientists and socialists theorize their thoughts before they have data, and then put(apply) these theories into practice to gain the data, which might then validate or disconfirm these theories and improve them gradually. Goldbach Conjecture is such a(an) exact instance of this sort. Moreover, in some situation, one could not manage to obtain the data timely(这是形容词吧，in time) and as a result to theorizetheorizing before one has data might protect those creative and talented thoughts vanishedfrom vanishing in geniuses’ mind and provide chances to test them later. In common sense, with the increasing development in science and technology, more and more problems might be resolved successfully only with knowledge in many interdisciplinary fields; a final resolution needs all-sided developments of numbers of disciplines. Hence, when a certain discipline goes along much faster than others, the result of its up-to-date research could only be theorized before putputting it into practice. As we all knownknow, Theory of Relativity, the excellent invention of Albert Einstein, was managed to be tested after many years, when the technologies of physics and mathematics etc. grow strong enough to make the practice of this theory come true. All these factors reveal that to theorize before has data is not only a scientific but also a necessary way for people to do and develop their research.这段论述有点乱啊，前面写的是因为假设的理论可以帮助人们不忘记他们的灵感和创作，后面写的是交叉学科是造成假设理论的一个因素，但是你的第一句没有任何反应，而且两层意思之间没有很好的过渡衔接，给人的感觉很突然

Second, many theories built before people gain their data might be proved extremely huge accomplishments in later time for their super advancement, and moreover, these innovative thoughts, no mater proved true or false later, actually always inspire people to discover their unknown world and drive many other developments of theories. For example, the Marxist Sociology becomes the basic theoretic guideline of many later socialistic countries; the Theory of Relativity leads to large practical inventions; the study on Four Color Problem results in the impulses of Ichnography Theory, Algebraic Topology, Limited Projective Geometry and Calculator Code programming etc. From all the evidence above, it is not hard to see that hypothesis, theory built before one has data
, has several profound significances, those both in the probable realistic value of this theory itself and its inspiring value to other thoughts. Therefore, we could not overlook the theories that are built before people have their relative data. All the theories serious drawn are the precious wealth waiting for our further understanding and exploration. 这段比上面那段清晰很多

In conclusion, to theorize before one has data is a scientific way for people to know our world actively and insightfully. It is right for us to consider it in an all-sided and long-term manner.

总得来说，写的不错啊，你的开头我很仰慕，而且从文中可以发现你的单词量不错，用词很好。但是长句多了点，以至于有些你自己都难以驾驭啊。
逻辑方面第二段有点乱，第三段很好，例子简单了一点。如果是限时完成，非常不错啦
你什么时候考啊？

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楼上说得很有道理，太谢谢了！我一定好好修改！！我3-28考试，挺紧张的了！我现在去看你的！：）

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Many scientists established their theories by observing new phenomenonphenomena, collecting relative relevantdata, and thereforeand+therefore, 到底是表并列呢还是表因果？ discovering and summarizing the essences/ rules of their objects. However, there are also a huge number of theories are there are...are...语病built at itits? their?指代谁？谁的beginning？ beginning without data in detail and moreover quite a few quite a few 弱了一点啦，这样的例子事实上多的是。起码statistics用于科学研究是19世纪中期Mendel研究遗传学之后的事了of them are epoch-making glorious accomplishments in human history.意思有了，但观点没明确表出
First, to theorize before one has data is one of the scientific ways for people to learn and research. Many scientists and socialists theorize their thoughts before they have data, and then put these theories into practice to gain the data什么叫put these theories into practice to gain the data？, which might then validate or disconfirm these theories and improve them gradually.disconfirm未必improve，有些真的是把一个理论证伪了。或许研究同一问题的其他理论之后受到启发有所improve，或许统一研究者建立新的理论，但那都是另一回事 Goldbach Conjecture一个根本没被证明的猜想怎么能在这里作为一个exact instance？况且，这样的猜想的推出往往是和你说的反方向的：通过一些观察到的现象归纳（当然也不是严格归纳否则本身就被证明，因为归纳法也是一种证明方法）出一种规律——猜想。然后人们就一个个跳到这个挖好的坑里试图用逻辑证明……悲壮啊…… is such a an这种细小错误应该先用word扫一遍exact instance of this sort. Moreover, in some situation, one could not manage to obtain the data timely and as a result to theorize before one has data might protect those creative and talented thoughts vanished protect ... from vanishing...in geniuses’ minds and provide chances to test them later. In common sense, with the increasing development in science and technology, more and more problem might be resolved successfully only with knowledge in many interdisciplinary fields; a final resolution needs all-sided developments of numbers of disciplines. Hence, when a certain discipline goes along much faster than others, the result of its up-to-date research could only be theorized before put it into practice. As we all known, Theory of Relativity, the excellent invention of Albert Einstein, was managed to be tested after many years, when the technologies of physics and mathematics etc. grow strong enough to make the practice of this theory come true. 指出一点，像相对论啊，霍金的时空理论啊最好慎用。事实上，这种hypothesis是比Goldbach还要猜想的猜想。永远不可能被证实，只有可能被证伪（一个好的理论的必要条件），只有在不断的证伪失败的过程中更令人信服All these factors reveal that to theorize before has data befor data are availableis not only a scientific but also a necessary way for people to do and develop their researches.

Second, many theories built before people gain their data might be proved extremely huge accomplishments in later time for their super advancement, and moreover,拆吧拆吧，不要试图在一句话里把什么东西都讲掉 these innovative thoughts, no mater proved true or false later, actually always inspire people to discover their unknown world and drive many other developments of theories. For example, the Marxist Sociology becomes the basic theoretic guideline of many later socialistic countries个人观点：Marx慎用。自由主义学派在美国占重要地位，在他们眼里，马克思主义，从经济学到社会学都是有很大问题的，致命的自负啊！被“many”社会主义奉为“国教”简直是……不能保证你碰上这么个批卷的; the Theory of Relativity leads to large practical inventions; the study on Four Color Problem results in the impulses of Ichnography Theory, Algebraic Topology, Limited Projective Geometry and Calculator Code programming etc.晕，你学数学的？四色问题有那么多功劳？四色问题到本来可以是个很好的论据，虽然被用计算机证明，但至今无法用拓扑学证明。不过问题就在data。四色问题的提出也是和你的论点反了吧。实现从现象或data归纳的 From all the evidence above, it is not hard to see that hypothesis, theory built before one has data, has several profound significances, those both in the probable realistic value of this theory itself and its inspiring value to other thoughts. Therefore, we could not overlook the theories that are built before people have their relative data. All the theories serious drawn are the precious wealth waiting for our further understanding and exploration.

In conclusion, to theorize before one has data is a scientific way for people to know our world actively and insightfully. It is right for us to consider it in an all-sided and long-term manner.总结一般般，对文章的概括不够全面和严密。
一个语句的毛病：长句。这种...and therefore...  ....and moreover... 我个人看起来很不舒服，因为句子里逻辑不清晰
你的论证思路是：1.necessity 2.benefit 。necessity没有问题，然而benefit讲的是一些科学理论共性的问题，这些不是这样的先theorize的独特好处
另外，你应该对题中mistake予以框定，限定它的范围。如果一个理论的确被事实驳倒，这算不算mistake？
感觉没有对data予以深究。可data恰恰是这道题目的一个focus啊
建议你去看看一个叫Milton Friedman的经济学家的一篇论文：mehodology of positive economics，事实上不仅仅将经济学的方法论，而是在讲所有科学研究的方法论。

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楼上真是火眼精睛啊。。。。哭了~~~    -_-b