Issue36 第1篇献丑 请各位都来批批（觉得写的不太好，需要意见）

fengcongleeUID: 198314

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The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
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There is much controversy over the issue of who can decide the greatness of individuals. The speaker asserts that only the descendants can justify the greatness of individuals, but the contemporaries can not. However, I partly agree with the speaker's assertion in that the greatness of the individuals can be better recognized by those who live after them. There were also many exceptions in point.

In the common sense, why the great is great is that their ideas, theories and behaviors have already transcended the scope of the cognition of the ordinary people. So their greatness can not be appreciated with the sufficient understand and respect. The example in point is the great scientist Bruno.  He insisted on the heliocentric theory of Copernicus and developed his own cosmic theory. He was forced to give up his beliefs by the Inquisition and considered as heretic man at that time. At last he was burned on the stake because he did not yield to the Church. Another example i can sited is the great artist Van Gogh. When he was alive, his works were not accepted by the most people because he broke the common rule of the painting. But now his paintings are among the most valuable art treasures.

Furthermore, especially in science field, many theories must be tested by times and practice for even centuries. The master of the science always contrived their own ideas by their extradinary intelligence. Even though these ideas are truth, the scientific condition can not be sufficient to support and testify their ideas. So it should take a long time to facilitate the equipments and scientific conditions to justify the effect of the truth. Take the example of Einstain, his theory of relativity can not be perceived by many people at that time. Until now we can understand only part of it through the advanced development of technology and doing some scientific experiment. Some contents of the theory still can not be proved by scientific experiments because of the confine of the technology.

However, as I mentioned at the beginning, there were also many exceptions especially in political and business areas. In such areas, the greatness of the figures must be recognized by the contemporaries. Thus, they can exert their influence on the mass to realize their goals. For instance, President of America Lincoln, was considered as the wise and prominent leader of all the American people of his day. So he could unify all the mass he can unify to break down the slavery. If his greatness were not be recognized by his supporters, he had not achieved such a historic landmark in the freedom of black. It is the same to a great businessman. His greatness is exhibited by his unexpected strategy and shrewd approaches. If he were not successful in his field, he had not been viewed as a great businessman.

All in all, the greatness of individuals can be better understood and appreciated by those who live after them. However there are still many exceptions. Therefore, we can not easily justify the greatness of individuals only in the sense of time. We should make the judgment according to the various situations.

fengcongleeUID: 198314

自己up一下，语法错误我自己都修改了，只是请大家指出一些逻辑上和论证的不足，
谢谢大家

fengcongleeUID: 198314

好惨啊，没人理

boyjimUID: 125249

------题目------
The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
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There is much controversy over the issue of who can decide the greatness of individuals. The speaker asserts that only the descendants can justify the greatness of individuals, but the contemporaries can not [instead of] . However, I partly agree with the speaker's assertion in that the greatness of the individuals can be better recognized by those who live after them. [不要再重复说一次了，累赘] There were also many exceptions in point.

In the common sense, why the great is great is that their ideas, [重复great了，考虑改] theories and behaviors have already transcended the scope of the cognition of the ordinary people. So [换] their greatness can not be appreciated with the sufficient understand and respect. The example in point is the great scientist Bruno. [引论的话和例子都比较旧，后面就考虑不要说那么多，带过就好了] e insisted on the heliocentric theory of Copernicus and developed his own cosmic theory. He was forced to give up his beliefs by the Inquisition and considered as heretic man at that time. At last he was burned on the stake because he did not yield to the Church. Another example i can sited is the great artist Van Gogh. When he was alive, his works were not accepted by the most people because he broke the common rule of the painting. But now his paintings are among the most valuable art treasures.

Furthermore, especially in science field, many theories must be tested by times and practice even centuries. The master of the science always contrived their own ideas by their extradinary intelligence. Even though these ideas are truth, the scientific condition can not be sufficient to support and testify their ideas. So it should take a long time to facilitate the equipments and scientific conditions to justify the effect of the truth. Take the example of Einstain, his theory of relativity can not be perceived by many people at that time [他出名是他当代的事情，这个例子不行] . Until now we can understand only part of it through the advanced development of technology and doing some scientific experiment. [可以倒装] Some contents of the theory still can not be proved by scientific experiments because of the confine of the technology.

However, as I mentioned at the beginning, there were also many exceptions especially in political and business areas. In such areas, the greatness of the figures must be recognized by the contemporaries. Thus, they can exert their influence on the mass to realize their goals. For instance, President of America Lincoln, was considered as the wise and prominent leader of all the American people of his day. So he could unify all the mass he can unify [连用两次，禁忌！] to break down the slavery. If his greatness were not be recognized by his supporters, he had not achieved such a historic landmark in the freedom of black. It is the same to a great businessman. [who?] His greatness is exhibited by his unexpected strategy and shrewd approaches. If he were not successful in his field, he had not been viewed as a great businessman.

All in all, the greatness of individuals can be better understood and appreciated by those who live after them. However there are still many exceptions. Therefore, we can not easily justify the greatness of individuals only in the sense of time. We should make the judgment according to the various situations.

[这个题目大家说得也很多了，看看别人的文章]

fengcongleeUID: 198314

thx,谢谢你的修改