Argument188 拍必回(武汉刚考过的题目)

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A new report suggests that men and women experience pain very
differently from one another, and that doctors should consider these
differences when prescribing pain medications. When researchers
administered the same dosage of kappa opioids—a painkiller—to 28
men and 20 women who were having their wisdom teeth extracted, the
women reported feeling much less pain than the men, and the easing of
pain lasted considerably longer in women. This research suggests that
kappa opioids should be prescribed for women whenever pain
medication is required, whereas men should be given other kinds of
pain medication. In addition, researchers should reevaluate the effects
of all medications on men versus women.
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The speaker recommends that kappa opioids should be prescribed for
women whenever pain medication is required, whereas men should be
given other kinds of pain medication,moreover researchers should
reevaluate the effects of all medications of all medications on men
versus women.To justify the suggestion the article's author cites a new
report on the men and women exprience pain.And it is said that women
feeling much less pain than the men when they are administers the
same dosage of kappa opioids,a painkiller.However,the argument relies
on a series of unsubstantiated assumptions,which render it un
convincing as it stands.

First of all,the report cites a study of 28 men and 20 women who were
having theri wisdom teeth extracted.It is said that the women reported
feeling much less pain than the men and the easing of pain lasted
considerable longer in women although they have been administered
the same dosage of kappa opioids.However the speaker does not
provide enough information about the subjects of the study.Just as we
known,the physical condition and the age of people can decide how
pain they are when extracting their wisdom teeth.Maybe 28 men are all
children and they feeled more pain,however 20 women are all adults so
that they can stand the pain of the extracting.So the author concludes
his remark from unsubstantiated assumptions,he does not consider
whether 28 men and 20 women can represent all people.

Moreover it is said that men suffer much more pain than women,but the
report does not get any information why men suffer more.Maybe men
deserve it because their physical structure and other factors.And so
when extracting the wisdom teeth men  feel more pain than women
even they are administer the same painkiller.The suggestion that kappa
opioids should be prescribed for women other than men is wrong due to
all these.

Finally,assuming that men will suffer more pain than women,we should
not take the conclusion that men should be given other kinds of pain
medication.Kappa opioids can be the most suitable painkiller for men
and other kinds of pain medication are less efficient and men will suffer
much more pain.The author rudely suggests men should change their
painkiller when men feel more pain than women using kappa opioids.

In sum ,the recommendation for changing painkiller in not well
supported.To convince me that kappa opioids should be prescribed for
women whenever pain medication is required,whereas men should be
given other painkillers,the author must provide clear evidence that the
subjects of the study can represent all people.To better evaluate the
recommendation,I would need more information about whether there
are more suitable painkillers for men.
这个是武汉的考题4.1的

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The speaker recommends that kappa opioids should be prescribed for women whenever pain medication is required, whereas men should be given other kinds of pain medication,moreover researchers should reevaluate the effects of all medications of all medications重复了 on men versus women.To justify the suggestion the article's author cites a new report on thethe去掉 men and women exprience pain.And it is said that women feeling much less pain than the men when they are administers the same dosage of kappa opioids,a painkiller.However,the argument relies on a series of unsubstantiated assumptions,which render it un convincing as it stands.

First of all,the report cites a study of 28 men and 20 women who were having theri wisdom teeth extracted.It is said that与第一段重复，换成in this study, the women reported feeling much less pain than the men and the easing of pain lasted considerable longer in women although they have been administered the same dosage of kappa opioids.However the speaker does not provide enough information about the subjects of the study.Just as we known,the physical condition and the age of people can decide how pain they arehow much they pain when extracting their wisdom teeth主语不对，改为when their wistom teeth is extracted.Maybe 28 men are all children and they feeled more pain,however 20 women are all adults so that去掉that they can stand the pain of the extracting teeth.So the author concludes his remark from unsubstantiated unconvincingassumptions,heor she does not consider whether 28 men and 20 women can represent all people.

Moreover it is said that men suffer much more pain than women,but the report does not getprovide any information about why men suffer more.Maybe men deserve it because their physical structure and other factors.And so when extractingextracted the wisdom teeth men feel more pain than women even they are administer the same painkiller.The suggestion that kappa opioids should be prescribed for women other than men is wrong due to all these.

Finally,assuming that men will suffer more pain than women,we should not take the conclusion that men should be given other kinds of pain medication.Kappa opioids can be the most suitable painkiller for men and other kinds of pain medication are less efficient and men will suffer much more pain.The author rudely suggests men should change their painkiller when men feel more pain than women using kappa opioids.

In sum ,the recommendation for changing painkiller inis not well supported.To convince me that kappa opioids should be prescribed for women whenever pain medication is required,whereas men should be given other painkillers,the author must provide clear evidence that the subjects of the study can represent be representative of all people.To better evaluate the recommendation,I would need more information about whether there are more suitable painkillers for men.
逻辑上很好，但语言上有一些问题，抄原文的内容太多了，可以适当换一下词。加油！

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[B]The speaker recommends that kappa opioids should be prescribed for women whenever pain medication is required, whereas men should be given other kinds of pain m..

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The speaker recommends that kappa opioids should be prescribed for women whenever pain medication is required, whereas men should be given other kinds of pain medication,moreover researchers should reevaluate the effects of all medicationson men versus women.To justify the suggestion the article's author cites a new report on men and women exprience pain.And it is said that women feeling much less pain than the men when they are administers the same dosage of kappa opioids,a painkiller.However,the argument relies on a series of unsubstantiated assumptions,which render it un convincing as it stands.

First of all,the report cites a study of 28 men and 20 women who were having theri wisdom teeth extracted.It is said that与第一段重复，换成in this study, the women reported feeling much less pain than the men and the easing of pain lasted considerable longer in women although they have been administered the same dosage of kappa opioids.However the speaker does not provide enough information about the subjects of the study.Just as we known,the physical condition and the age of people can decide how much they suffer from pain when their wistom teeth is extracted.Maybe 28 men are all children and they feeled more pain,however 20 women are all adults so they can stand the pain of the extracting teeth.So the author concludes his remark from unsubstantiated unconvincingassumptions,heor she does not consider whether 28 men and 20 women can represent all people.

Moreover it is said that men suffer much more pain than women,but the report does not getprovide any information about why men suffer more.Maybe men deserve it because their physical structure and other factors.And so when extractingextracted the wisdom teeth men feel more pain than women even they are administer the same painkiller.The suggestion that kappa opioids should be prescribed for women other than men is wrong due to all these.

Finally,assuming that men will suffer more pain than women,we should not take the conclusion that men should be given other kinds of pain medication.Kappa opioids can be the most suitable painkiller for men and other kinds of pain medication are less efficient and men will suffer much more pain.The author rudely suggests men should change their painkiller when men feel more pain than women using kappa opioids.

In sum ,the recommendation for changing painkiller inis not well supported.To convince me that kappa opioids should be prescribed for women whenever pain medication is required,whereas men should be given other painkillers,the author must provide clear evidence that the subjects of the study can represent be representative of all people.To better evaluate the recommendation,I would need more information about whether there are more suitable painkillers for men.
逻辑上很好，但语言上有一些问题，抄原文的内容太多了，可以适当换一下词。加油！
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