05年1月8号作文:Qualities of a journalist~~~

lucy_zq2002UID: 177408

在我看了题目，列了提纲，确定我有话可说之后，我还是花了一个多小时，写了一下这篇拙作，难以想象，考试我40分钟写成什么样子？
写了才知道：
1。时间很不够
2。单词不会拼

2005年1月8号
task2:我们可以从新闻了解世界,但不能相信记者.
people are reliable on news,but how far can they trust on journalists, give your opinion and what personalities do you think should journalists have?




We get news on various of means of media every day and those pieces of news keep us well informed of the world and usually become our topics in chatting.But,have you ever doubted the truth behind it?As far as I'm concerned,we should keep a critical view on it.

We don't deny news do brings plenty of fresh information in every corner of the world ,howerver, sometimes it includes unverified or even false contents.For example,when you surf the internet you may come across thousands of pieces of news ,some of which occasionally are unjustified without carefully investigation .Some journalists simply copy or quato according to their imagination and hearing in order to fulfill their professional task.

News are products of news agency which somehow represent certain viewpoint in persuit of their interests. The same piece of news could be reported in different versions.This phenomenon is especially clear in political fields,yet,there should be no condemnation on it.

One situation may be neglected that some of journalists make use of their special occupation power to maximize their pockets.It's reported one news agency in Jiangxi province blackmailed the local primary school who has ever charged more tuition fee ,in case he would report on the newspaper.Ironically,the school became a model school after it gave the agency abundant pocket money.

The above incident is striking but true.So how to be a qualified journalist is a question deserved serious thinking.We get news largly depend on journalist's writing and report ,we first show our trust.In return,a journalist should have a sense of duty to display good-quality works.Sensitive perception ,careful investigation and deep insight all contribute to cultivate best reporters.

In my opinion,there is no standard criteria in becoming a good jounalist.To be or not to be is individual's choice in the contents of news and reporting styles.Rather,he or she doesn't fool the viewers and try to make news object and transparent is a key rule which should be beared in mind.

lucy_zq2002UID: 177408

抢占沙发！我先自我批评，有点头重脚轻，opinion 和personality比重不当，主要后面匆匆收尾，觉得写不出什么：）

bqianaUID: 193168

尽量避免用人称代词，这是A类作文的要求之一
当然，In my opinion 是可以的，但是不要用太多I
整体架构不错！继续努力！

playbearleeUID: 198693

我赞成斑竹的意见，不要用这么多I

echo707UID: 207373

谨以此篇感谢LucyMM对我的帮助，恭喜MM荣当斑竹。
这是我对这个TOPIC的一点点理解，还望大家指点讨论
[B]TITLE: [/B]  We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can not trust the journalist, what do u think? And what do u think the important qualities that a journalist.
分析：这是要我们写一个Report，
所以我们可以采用两种方法来写：
一，  第一段：概述，说明是多方面的原因
第二段：讲第一个他们存在的problem
第三段：对这个问题的Solution
第4段：讲第二个他们存在的problem
第5段：对上段问题的Solution
总结
二，  第一段：也就不用我说了（同上）
第二段：他们存在的problem
第三段：对这个问题的第一Solution
第4段：对这个问题的第二Solution
第5段：总结
我们的思路：
1，        现在有假新闻，有偿新闻的原因是什么?---------不外乎就是为钱为名为利益～～～～
所以要对症下药
(1)        防范，让他们没有念头去犯错———如，高薪养廉，良好的制度，让他们实现自身价值―――而且如果犯错将得不偿失。
(2)        暴光，使其在业内失去竞争力
2，        另一个方面，他们也许也是无辜的受害者，被其他人所利用―――所以要
（1）        增强自我保护意识和能力，可以有training course啦
（2）        用法律手段，加强审查制度

lucy_zq2002UID: 177408

首先谢谢echo707 mm对我的支持!还有很有味道的pp,这个似乎成了我们版的风格了,个性帖子+图片:)
再看写作题目,有的是agree or disagree,题目是没有导向型的,两方面都可写.可是此题,似乎暗示了写作方向.(如果写记者好,可靠,那么后面的记者的素质似乎和前面衔接不起来了)所以,我觉得,此题基本上属于problems +recomemdations类.论点统一.[B]此为审题[/B] echo拿出了两个方案
第一个方案我没有看过类似文章是这么写的,对我有点新概念.你后面的思路基本上寻着这个方案写的,我觉得思路不错.其中,高薪养廉,审查制度以及有关动词,如果精确表达会让文章增色不少的.
第二个方案也还行,但我觉得这些不必要深究.行文没有固定模式
但是[B],mm 似乎忘了几乎和你提到内容同样重要的 important qualities that a journalist部分[/B] .这个基本上没有1/2也有1/3的文字需要写,才是没有偏题和遗漏.[B]此为内容和布局.[/B]

ps:标题的"素质"打错了?
我还是那句话,mm肯动脑思考是好事,有思路,可是考场上很难自如发挥,所以[B]请注意时间,和拼写.[/B] 文章有个大的框架就好了.开头和结尾很重要.观点不要一边倒.

bqianaUID: 193168

what do u think？ ‘Think’ 可以 Think 出很多方面
记者也是人，有些讲职业操守，有些就没有，和品质有关
但愿是前者＋好品质

echo707UID: 207373

对，谢谢LucyMM的提醒，我在审题上粗糙了点，而且还要在基本功上下功夫才好～～～

upstudioUID: 124777

不光是I这些词吧
YOU，WE也不能用，这种说法在老外看来有强加建议于别人身上的感觉