V6战队日用贴（停止接受新人）

11yvetteUID: 2102418

今天的作业
issue36：
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=315857
issue7：
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

发现今天写这两篇的队友好多啊~~~一会儿去学习~~

zehuaUID: 199246

晕啊！怎么又在日用贴发起链接来了？这样不好哦！
问下：
1。考试应该几点到考场啊？
2。PP3练习后的文章怎么弄到WORD里啊？

zehuaUID: 199246

大家能否帮我查2个背景资料，只言片语也好啊！
1。西方社会70年代那群精神空虚，爱吸毒的青年“失落的一代”。 我写114提纲的时候想到的例子。
2。法国原来搞的共产主义的那几个小公社后来不知道怎么撤了的。用于195。

mkb57288UID: 2105771

再发今天的第四篇Issue 157
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=315979
半小时后开始为大家改作文

kobestrongUID: 2117374

看了半天觉得里面就两个错误：
１．新技术可能只对高含量的矿石节能
２．对新技术的可行性没有交代

大家还有没有找出别的错误啊，觉得只找２个似乎不够！

kobestrongUID: 2117374

嗯～！　刚才又发现了一个错误：
作者没有说新技术是否也提的纯铜～！
真是粗心啊！！！

[ Last edited by kobestrong on 2005-8-10 at 20:43 ]

mkb57288UID: 2105771

改了四篇
kobestrong Issue 36
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1716853
dinddind2003 Issue 131
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1716919
11yvette Issue 36
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1717244
             Issue 7
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1717402

mkb57288UID: 2105771

一上午都没有人在这里发帖，淹到这么后面了
我来交个作业，顺便顶一下我们的帖子
Issue 184
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=316407
Issue 88
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... type%26typeid%3D101

xiaowenzi118UID: 202887

昨天正好有个快考的朋友来问我Argument，想到难题里面自己还着重研究了一下红肉这篇呢，虽然没考到，大家看一下吧，也让我的劳动发挥一点价值吧。当然希望大家都不要抽到这题了，呵呵。;P

看了一下GTER上集中讨论的贴子，最大的问题就在于一个well-establish的红肉和心脏病的关系是不容反驳的，其它两点是自己瞎编的，没写完，大家就看看第二点吧。:@

142(10G10)The article entitled 'Eating Iron' in last month's issue of Eating for Health reported that a recent study found a correlation between high levels of iron in the diet and an increased risk of heart disease. Further, it is well established that there is a link between large amounts of red meat in the diet and heart disease, and red meat is high in iron. On the basis of the study and the well-established link between red meat and heart disease, we can conclude that the correlation between high iron levels and heart disease, then, is most probably a function of the correlation between red meat and heart disease.

Based on a well-established link as well as the result of a recent study, the arguer concludes that the correlation between high iron levels and heart disease is most probably a function of the correlation between red meat and heart disease. However, this conclusion is specious for several reasons.

First and foremost, as the recent study is too vague, even the correlation between high levels of iron and heart disease is open to doubt. Being unaware of either the sample in the study is larger enough and randomly chosen, it is unlikely for us to assess the credibility of this study.

Even if the sample is statistically reliable, as heart disease results from many factors like genetic influences, living habits, working pressure, emotional conditions as well as diets, the arguer should also provide further evidence to substantiate that it is the high level of iron rather than other factors caused the heart disease of the subjects in the study.

Furthermore, this argument is based on the assumption that it is the iron in red meat rather than other elements or components that attributes to heart disease. Yet no evidence is provided to substantiate this assumption. Without a scientific report about the components of red meat as well as their functions, it is quite likely that the iron in red meat is in a form that could hardly be absorbed by human, which renders little credibility for the function of the iron in red meat to cause heart disease. It is also likely that other elements in red meat like copper contribute to the well-established link between red meat and heart disease. Moreover, as the red meat is high in protein and fat, it is more likely that certain kind of protein or fat rather than elements actually contributes to the link. Without ruling out other possibilities, the correlation between iron in red meat and heart disease is specious at best.

Finally, in making this conclusion between the two correlations, the arguer unfairly assumes that only the iron contains in red meat correlates to heart disease. However, common sense tells us that many other food and drinks could also contain a high amount of ---spinach(菠菜)

1)        well-established link, 这说明这一点是不容争辩的,注意不要把这一点作为问题来攻击
可以辩的地方
1.        认为是红肉中的铁导致了心脏病?
2.        心脏病的来源: heart diseases result from many synthetic reasons, such as genetic influences, living habits, working pressure, emotional conditions, etc

祝大家好运呀，有空会常来看望大家的。:handshake

zehuaUID: 199246

大家能否帮我查2个背景资料，只言片语也好啊！
1。西方社会70年代那群精神空虚，爱吸毒的青年“失落的一代”。 我写114提纲的时候想到的例子。
2。法国原来搞的共产主义的那几个小公社后来不知道怎么撤了的。用于195。

mrealUID: 201732

hehe,xiaowenzi真好：D

大家啊，我前天昨天的四篇都还没拍过呢，走过路过的帮帮忙啊，谢谢啦！！！
今天又贴了两个模考的呢~~~拜托大家啦！！！

dinddind2003UID: 196353

to mkb57288 看看我的意见，讨论一下啊

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1719959

zehuaUID: 199246

怎么都不遵守队规啊？说过在这里只贴改剩的文章嘛！:@
算了，还是顺民意吧。我也不管了。:lol
今天的作业：
argument137
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=316601
issue5
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=316598
issue153
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=316594
argument50
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=316418
issue154
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=316414
issue50
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=316411
issue130
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=316409

mkb57288UID: 2105771

下午的作业
Issue 11
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
Issue 159
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
现在就去给大家改文章

mkb57288UID: 2105771

mreal的两篇
Issue 11
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1721499
Issue 41
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1721231
zehua的两篇
Issue154
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1721027
Issue 50
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid1721121