[820互助] imong, Ella-Ella：mxgg, avenir_ls, nora0020

wx8348UID: 185363

我来了!

Ella-EllaUID: 191056

Originally posted by mxgg at 2005-8-5 21:50
11.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use spec ...

你的第一段很失败，为什么这么说呢？因为第一段大而不当，你等于什么都没说。用本山的话就是忽悠。如果你把这段翻译成中文，让你来评分，你不会打高分的对吗。第一段一定要表明自己的观点并简要陈述。不是我喜欢打击别人，只是想让你认识到这点
下面写的不错，论点阐述不错，希望你做出题目要求的东西---examples。这个东西太重要了，是画龙点睛的东西，别光讲理，还要拿证据，ETS有看specific example的癖好呵呵
继续努力，加油

Ella-EllaUID: 191056

Originally posted by mxgg at 2005-8-5 21:58
1.physical: 写完就觉得手疼!!
2.time:本来觉得写的时间应该够的,一直不停的写,但是还是超了5分钟:(
3.words:有点提笔忘字的感觉,有很多错误的拼写.而且字迹有点潦草.
4.two questions:
a. 用不用写title
...

不用题目
字体不要太小，太大也不好，以视觉美观为主吧，能写满两页是好事情，但是超了也没有纸的，下一步你要联系“压缩一下了”，很了不起啊，别人都写不来那么多呢，
比如精简一下话语，两个句子，能不能合并成1个句子里的两个分句。。。这是下一步修改练习的重点


comprehensive  universities
sports college university(my own translation)
regulator(additive是添加剂)

wx8348UID: 185363

加多一个行不行,求求两位斑竹..
不竟不知有这活动,太久没上网了..
不管怎么样,我都会好好做,共同进步!

nora0020UID: 104886

请问有没有什么好的材料适合复习这个过程中背诵的，新东方好像有个背诵50篇的，好不好呢？

avenir_lsUID: 188248

几个语法
Q1：The world's deepest cave,Pierre St.Martin in the Pyrenees mountains,is almost three times as deep_____.
A as the Empire State Building is high
B that the ESB is higher
C is higher than the ESB
D and the ESB's height

我知道要选A，因为有as……as。但是把答案带入句中，感觉结构很乱(the ESB is high?)，可否分析一下。我理解的应该写为：as deep as the height of the ESB

Q2:___，dolphins have no sense of smell.
A as known as far
B known thus far as
C it is known as far
D as far as is known

答案解释说as far as 在T中是优选项
可我不大理解D选项。as和 is间不该有个主语么？

Q3:我查过after可以做conj和prep
但是做过的题里面都只当它是介词，后面只能跟动名词，不能引导从句
如果它可以做连词的话，不是应该能够引导从句么？

谢谢:)

mxggUID: 2111875

你们两都比我起的早啊?

mxggUID: 2111875

Originally posted by avenir_ls at 2005-8-6 08:22
几个语法
Q1：The world's deepest cave,Pierre St.Martin in the Pyrenees mountains,is almost three times as deep_____.
A as the Empire State Building is high
B that the ESB is higher
C is higher  ...

Q1.我认为可以这么理解的
Q2.是不是题目错了??这样的句子我怎么没有见过,是哪套的?
Q3. 是的,after是可以接从句的

mxggUID: 2111875

请问XDF有一本<TOFEL写作教程>红+黄的外皮,里面的"TWE Model Essays"都是好文章吗??

有点质疑.

imongUID: 140258

一晚上灌了好多...

TOFEL写作教程
没印象。

Whether universities should use the same amount of money in students’ sports activities as well as libraries is depending（dependent?） on the input-output ratio. If outputs are larger than input or at least equal to input, it is a reasonable money allocation, in turn universities are worthy of doing. In the reverse aspect, it is not and they do not need to do so. 和Ella-Ella 评价一致：这段儿啥也没说。

combination universities 北京联合大学？:L
have better brains 这个看上去不太舒服啊。有点屠宰场的感觉...

0405的题目。用这个it depends来写是一点问题都没有的。问题是写的绕了些 文字表达上还不是很简洁/完全通顺。这道题 我想350个字照样拿6分 而不是绕嘴来绕嘴去

imongUID: 140258

Q2:___，dolphins have no sense of smell.
A as known as far
B known thus far as
C it is known as far
D as far as is known

as far as is known --> 就目前(最大限度)所知
直接看语义选咯。

Ella-EllaUID: 191056

Originally posted by nora0020 at 2005-8-6 07:35
请问有没有什么好的材料适合复习这个过程中背诵的，新东方好像有个背诵50篇的，好不好呢？

那些文章很经典，不过我没有背过。那个是为写文章和阅读准备的吧

Ella-EllaUID: 191056

Originally posted by Ella-Ella at 2005-8-6 09:47

那些文章很经典，不过我没有背过。那个是为写文章和阅读准备的吧

去背什么不重要，关键是坚持到底，必有收获

Ella-EllaUID: 191056

Originally posted by mxgg at 2005-8-6 08:51
请问XDF有一本<TOFEL写作教程>红+黄的外皮,里面的"TWE Model Essays"都是好文章吗??

有点质疑.

who's the author

Ella-EllaUID: 191056

after不能作连词
after可以跟clause