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发表于 2005-8-13 18:40:58 |只看该作者

Originally posted by fiaoyaya at 2005-8-13 18:17
JJ这几天没心情看咋办闹?~~我作文也看不进去~~may god bless me 在你的那个区考~~

让自己平静一下哦，适当休息休息，不要象以前那样大量做题了，调整生物钟
还有一周了要坚持~~

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发表于 2005-8-13 18:41:44 |只看该作者

Originally posted by 蝴蝶结 at 2005-8-13 18:11

北工商是分东西两区的，不过我已经记不清哪个东哪个西了
我在比较老的那个区，一座老楼，6层，语音室，30人大概
耳机很清楚，外面也不吵
监考一共3个，很和善的2男1女，跨区偷看基本不管（要掌握尺度）
不 ...

原来JJ是BJ的呀，苹果差点就去了北工商的了，要不是妈妈死活不让我去外地的话><

JJ知道有谁是在上外考过的么?苹果问了,米人答><|||

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发表于 2005-8-13 18:42:26 |只看该作者

Originally posted by mhsy at 2005-8-13 18:23
作文我每天都写的，也写了15，16篇了，因为说不能用模版，写起来就快不了了，要想着句式变化，而且每次想例子想的很痛苦~

多练吧，把185的思路和分论点都想好~

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发表于 2005-8-13 18:44:38 |只看该作者

Originally posted by 苹果宝宝 at 2005-8-13 18:41

原来JJ是BJ的呀，苹果差点就去了北工商的了，要不是妈妈死活不让我去外地的话><

JJ知道有谁是在上外考过的么?苹果问了,米人答><|||

不清楚的说:(

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发表于 2005-8-13 18:47:23 |只看该作者

苹果的文章还是老规矩，24：00以后看~

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发表于 2005-8-13 18:49:22 |只看该作者

谢谢姐姐

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发表于 2005-8-13 18:51:00 |只看该作者

感觉论坛上做题做得很快
今天做到0405
照这速度下去，下周不就没题做了吗
到底要不要留两套题最后模考啊

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发表于 2005-8-13 18:52:05 |只看该作者

我留了0408和0410,我们一起模拟吧

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发表于 2005-8-13 18:54:26 |只看该作者

好呀，我是想下周二和下周四模考这两套

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发表于 2005-8-14 00:41:16 |只看该作者

我是circlezh组的，她只给我回答阅读

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发表于 2005-8-14 01:06:26 |只看该作者

GG J J 苹果问个听力
0010的23
W: can you believe it? A twenty-page term paper in the final exam! What does Professor
Johnson think? That we don't have any classes of his?
M: wait a second, I’m sure what he said was either one or the other
Q: what does the man imply?
either one or the other这个是2选一的意思么？
如果是，跟上下文好象没很大关系啊><

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发表于 2005-8-14 01:06:54 |只看该作者

Originally posted by 蝴蝶结 at 2005-8-13 18:47
苹果的文章还是老规矩，24：00以后看~

辛苦JJ的说
太谢谢JJ了

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发表于 2005-8-14 01:58:59 |只看该作者

Originally posted by 苹果宝宝 at 2005-8-14 01:06
GG J J 苹果问个听力
0010的23
W: can you believe it? A twenty-page term paper in the final exam! What does Professor
Johnson think? That we don't have any classes of his?
M: wait a second, I’m ...

是不是原文有问题呀？
我记得意思大概是这样的
M说A twenty-page term paper和final exam是二选其一的，所以答案是正确的~

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发表于 2005-8-14 10:34:22 |只看该作者

改苹果的文章

昨天就要改完的时候电脑突然罢工，气愤的去睡觉:@:@:@
一睁眼就跑来补上恩~~

18. What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important

Some of my classmates want to be a boss in future.All what they are learning and doing is that they prepare for the goal.（这句看着有点别扭:(） They always ask me that they should have what qualities of a good supervisor （which qualities they should have to be a good supercisor这样看着好多了恩）.My guess is that many qualities like confidence,sence of humor,hardness are indispensable.

On one hand, if someone want to be a boss or a CEO confidence is necessary.A person who is not （does not）believe himself or herselfis （is） not able to do anything well.Confidence is important to everyone especially to a boss.If a supervisor has lost confidence ,his or her subjects would have been hopeless. Maybe confidence cannot give people money or time,but it will give people chance to win,to beat opponents.In addition,it will let others believe you.（加个实例就更好了）

On the other hand, the sence of humoris an important quality as well.The sence of humor can keep people happy.A humorful boss is always more successful than a humorless one.Becaus he is emable to relax not only himself but his staff. As the scientific reasch which has been done by some unversities,people will be efficiency in good moods and relaxing enviroment.But about 77percent of workers are feel nervous about their bosses or supervisors.Many famous boss such as Gazi,Pansonic and so on are humor How is the sence of humor important。（这句看不懂呀）

Last but not least,working hard is also necessary.KongZi （孔子好象专门有一个词的）who is an ancient scholar told people（and i paraphase）,'what you cannot do,that you do not let others do".Only when a boss work hard,would the staff work hard.A lazy boss cannot be regarded as a boss and his staff will leave him alon.这段写的最好~:)

In closing, a successful supervisor or boss ought to work hard,be full of confidence and the sence of humor. Although many more qualities are also indispensable,what I above-mentioned are essential.

整体还是不错的，不过语法错误有点多了，这样是不会得到好分数的哦~

发现自己越写越多了，第一篇是248，今天已经到280了。。。。。
JJ，这样的文能到最底要求线么？
PS，苹果学文科的恩

有进步就是好的，280不算多，能到300最好啦，比如body1加个例子再~
要有信心哦，加油~~