[820互助]蝴蝶结:Fernando

jerryUID：2116316

我需要辅导，那位愿意帮忙啊，现在听力及其不稳定，有时候好，有时候坏，但心中。。。。

蝴蝶结可以吗

蝴蝶结UID：195566

Originally posted by Fernando at 2005-8-5 23:04
恩，这样说就有道理了，谢谢jj
刚才看了好多人都说托福越来越难了，心里又开始紧张了

dd要有信心哦，jj支持你的！

jerryUID：2116316

也帮帮我吧，先叫你jj好了！

蝴蝶结UID：195566

我们组好多人啦！
再次号召大家组内互助哦！
同意的响应一下啦~
蝴蝶结谢谢大家~~

FernandoUID：157455

同意，大家把问题都发上来
一起讨论一下

蝴蝶结UID：195566

Originally posted by jerry at 2005-8-5 23:15
也帮帮我吧，先叫你jj好了！

欢迎！
不过也要互助哦~
jj不敢当啦:p

FernandoUID：157455

贴篇作文
There are many famous entertainers and athletes who earn millions of dollars every year. I tend to believe that in a sense they do deserve such high salaries. Being a famous entertainer or athlete requires lots of hard work. The progress of becoming famous requires much tears and sweats. The job also forces them to give up something they prefer to. Moreover, being a famous entertainer or athlete means he or she must be the best in his or her fields.
        To become famous, whether in sports industry or the entertainment industry, they need to work harder than others. One person requires a lot of years of practice to learn the elusive skills. Not only training, much money is cost, for example the tuition of supervisors, and the fee of training places. They spend more than common people both in physical strength and money, so they deserve it.
        Many famous athletes and entertainers win the prizes for their countries. Not only do they win the honor, but also the people of their countries get proud of it. Liu Xiang is an athlete who won the first place in 110-meter hurdles in 2004 Olympics Games. At the moment that he was reaching the terminal, all Chinese people’s breath is taken away. Every one is proud of Liu Xiang. So the inspiring factor of famous athletes and entertainers should be underestimated.
        Besides, The heyday of famous athletes and entertainers is quietly short. The sports life of an athlete may be only three or four years, and the entertainment life of an entertainer may be longer, but only few can last more than 10 years. They have to save their high salaries for their future, because when their vocational life ends, few of them can do other jobs. The high salaries include their pension, so they are not so high as people think.
        In conclusion, I think that famous athletes and entertainers deserve their high pay. While it seems too much money when we first hear how much they earn, after careful consideration, we realize that they must put a lot of work and money in it; they won us honors, high pay includes their pensions.

苹果宝宝UID：2123543

Originally posted by 蝴蝶结 at 2005-8-5 21:49


偶不是斑斑啦~~
谢谢你的支持，我会尽力帮你~~

JJ，苹果也来可以么？
苹果弱弱的......><

蝴蝶结UID：195566

Originally posted by 苹果宝宝 at 2005-8-5 23:43

JJ，苹果也来可以么？
苹果弱弱的......><

欢迎，大家互相帮助，ok?

cctv_futureUID：2103041

同意互助
大家有问题发上来一起讨论啊

蝴蝶结UID：195566

Originally posted by cctv_future at 2005-8-6 00:10
同意互助
大家有问题发上来一起讨论啊

cctv_future（不知道叫GG还是JJ？），偶很佩服在职考GT的人的，+U+U！

蝴蝶结UID：195566

贴篇作文
没有题目啊~~
    There are many famous entertainers and athletes who earn millions of dollars every year. I tend to believe that in a sense they do deserve such high salaries. Being a famous entertainer or athlete requires lots of hard work. The progress of becoming famous requires much tears and sweats. The job also forces them to give up something they prefer to. Moreover, being a famous entertainer or athlete means he or she must be the best in his or her fields.开头有点长了，简单表明态度即可，其他放在body里      
     To become famous, whether in sports industry or the entertainment industry, they need to work harder than others. One person requires a lot of years of practice to learn the elusive skills. Not only training, much money is cost, for example the tuition of supervisors, and the fee of training places.not only……but (also)…… They spend more than common people both in physical strength and money, so they deserve it.
      Many famous athletes and entertainers win the prizes for their countries. Not only do they win the honor, but also the people of their countries get proud of it. Liu Xiang is an athlete who won the first place in 110-meter hurdles in 2004 Olympics Games. At the moment that he was reaching the terminal, all Chinese people’s breath is taken away. Every one is proud of Liu Xiang. So the inspiring factor of famous athletes and entertainers should be underestimated.
      Besides, The heyday of famous athletes and entertainers is quietly short. The sports life of an athlete may be only three or four years, and the entertainment life of an entertainer may be longer, but only few can last more than 10 years. They have to save their high salaries for their future, because when their vocational life ends, few of them can do other jobs. The high salaries include their pension, so they are not so high as people think.
       In conclusion, I think that famous athletes and entertainers deserve their high pay. While it seems too much money when we first hear how much they earn, after careful consideration, we realize that they must put a lot of work and money in it; they won us honors, high pay includes their pensions.

大概看了一下，写的不错，上次5分嘛，保持就可以了~

FernandoUID：157455

谢谢jj帮我改作文，下次会记得把题目贴上
我晚上睡得比较早

[ Last edited by Fernando on 2005-8-6 at 08:18 ]

蝴蝶结UID：195566

Originally posted by Fernando at 2005-8-6 08:17
谢谢jj帮我改作文，下次会记得把题目贴上
我晚上睡得比较早

问题贴上睡就是了，偶是夜猫子~~:D

LIULI0901UID：2110320

我的听力PartA很不好，我知道如何提高，我的语法每次都要错好几个，做的时候也提醒自己要细心，但是每次。。。我怀疑脑子有问题。阅读每次都要错上5－6个，久久不能提高。。
      几天做的是02年10月的题，听力错了8个PartA4个PartB3个。语法错了7个，光改错错了5个，阅读错了6个。
      jj能给我讲一下02年10月的阅读21。27。50的答案么？21题我觉的是D)其它三个第一段就有啊？27题rudimentary我觉得和basic的意思一样啊？50题我怎么觉得是D)Carboniferous period 后面的一句话不是对它的解释么