[820互助]蝴蝶结:Fernando

fiaoyayaUID: 193089

好的,谢谢蝴蝶结JJ,还有body1和2论证过程中多说如果你来教孩子们他们就不会失去学习机会或者犯罪而不是缺乏教育他们会怎样，这点提得很好,偶会改进的,偶算学文科的吧,没考过AW,我还会继续贴上来改的,呵呵,偶总是发现偶的每段的论述有点站不住脚,是吧?

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by ygpin at 2005-8-7 00:41
25. （Addressing） themes that were （unique） American, the poet Walt Whitman （celebrated） the lives of （ordinary people）.

我觉得American可以做名词当美国人讲，那么unique作形容词来修饰它没有 ...

苹果MM说的对
be unique+to

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蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by fiaoyaya at 2005-8-7 08:37
好的,谢谢蝴蝶结JJ,还有body1和2论证过程中多说如果你来教孩子们他们就不会失去学习机会或者犯罪而不是缺乏教育他们会怎样，这点提得很好,偶会改进的,偶算学文科的吧,没考过AW,我还会继续贴上来改的,呵呵,偶总是发 ...

哈你已经写的很好了，不用太在意~~
偶是文科生门前耍墨嘞：P
关于时间再抓紧一些就没问题了，这点我们是不一样的，学文科的是因为要说的话太多时间不够，偶是因为没话说想啊想啊时间就不够了:L
有空的话给上面两位看看作文，偶吃点东西去:D

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your

Have you thought some problems about learning such as what is the purpose of attending unvistery?If you did,then have you thought of what you want to get?Today almost everyone want to study in unvistery,what is the reason ?I think every people has his own reason.What I bet the reason why people attended university is for furture life.问句不要太多，开门见山就可以了

As we all know university is different from high school in many ways especially in education. Studied Studying in high school,people have learned basical basic knowledge.Of course,after graduating from high school,people can do many easy jobs.But they will not be able to do jobs which are in more specialized fields.

Attending university , people will learn more knowledge and study in different feilds as accounting ,the science of computer,the science of law and so on.Then people will have owned more special knowledge .When graduate from unviersity,they can be in good occupations.正面阐述观点要多写一些

And and最好不用在句首和开头competion competition is becoming more and more intense in our time.Those who do not have professional knowledge are really easy to lose their jobs.As the investigation by some newspaper,the proportion of people graduated from unviersity who are  out of work is 20 percent lower than that of people graduated from high school.
   
"Knowledge is power." It is still useful today and now it is gradually becoming "knowledge is life".That is why more and more people is wanting to attend unviersity for furture life.Do not you think so?结尾的反问也可以不要

文章深度有些浅了，或者是你没有表达清楚
你的观点是高等教育获得更好的生活，为什么呢？
body1上大学让我们掌握专业知识，可以举举自己的例子呀
body2大学生就业形式更好，为什么呢？因为现在是高科技社会，因为社会进步需要创新，因为工作要用能力解决问题……而这些都是高等教育的责任和目标……
这样文章就丰满了不是？
你可以看看fiaoyaya的文章，写的很好，加油！

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

27. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
        
Great scientists attain the tremendous achievements because they are interested in science all along. Politicians desired to take part in political activities when they were youth. In my opinion, I cannot accept the above statement that people should do something that they do not enjoy doing

Firstly, people cannot perform perfectly if they cannot enjoy doing his work. In this case, people only want to accomplish the job as soon as possible. As for the effect, they would not like to consider it. For example, my sister does not like mathematics. Thus, as to the mathematic assignment, she usually completes it very fast without thing think it over. At the risk of sounding too direct, people will take it as a bore because they do not like doing it.对自己影响

Secondly, people will be in bad mood if he must do things that he feels terrible. People will be unpleased and whine when he does some boring tasks. Even though he accomplishes the work, he may still in bad mood. Thus, he will regard everything horrible. Furthermore, he will affect the moods of his relatives and friends. As a result, people who are around him maybe upset as well.对别人影响

At last, people maybe threaten the community if he is forced to do something he hates. People will be anger when he is compelled to do assignments that he loathes. In this situation, he maybe want to do something in order to release his bad emotions. Unfortunately, he usually reaches the goal by assaulting other people, destroying amenities and so forth. Hence, his activities will threaten the peace of the society. In some severe cases, he will violate the law.对社会影响

Undoubtedly, people sometimes must do something that he does not enjoy doing. As a mater of fact, it does not avoid in our lives. But I think people should not do something that he cannot find pleasures from. It only makes him make many faults and run into pain.

写的挺好啊，继续努力！

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ygpinUID: 156595

谢谢蝴蝶结！！！

苹果宝宝UID: 2123543

谢谢JJ恩
PS，苹果听力PART A比起后面的2部分都差可以有好方法提高么？

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by 苹果宝宝 at 2005-8-7 15:01
谢谢JJ恩
PS，苹果听力PART A比起后面的2部分都差可以有好方法提高么？

听抄，多记一些人家的习语，判断场景和语气，找到感觉就好了~

苹果宝宝UID: 2123543

Originally posted by 蝴蝶结 at 2005-8-7 15:04


听抄，多记一些人家的习语，判断场景和语气，找到感觉就好了~

听抄，任何一套题都可以么？

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

Originally posted by 苹果宝宝 at 2005-8-7 15:35

听抄，任何一套题都可以么？

时间不够听最近几年的（00-04）就可以了，只听抄Part A即可

苹果宝宝UID: 2123543

明白了，现在就去
谢谢JJ
\^^/

cookUID: 181960

1 Although classified as  a carnivore, the North American grizzly bear eats berries and
even grass.
是不是像although when 等连词的分句主语与主句主语一致，且是is are 这些谓语，is 或者are 就可省略。
2 not until 的倒装，只有主句倒装，分句不倒装，是吧
比如 Not until the we had had the meal, did he showed up.
这句话没问题吧

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苹果宝宝UID: 2123543

Originally posted by cook at 2005-8-7 15:57
1 Although classified as  a carnivore, the North American grizzly bear eats berries and
even grass.
是不是像although when 等连词的分句主语与主句主语一致，且是is are 这些谓语，is 或者are 就可省略 ...

1,
状语从句主语一直，谓语是系动词，可以省略的

2，
需要THE么？
看上去别扭的恩><

苹果宝宝UID: 2123543

63. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.

  In China, thousands of students take part in the Exame of College Admination every year.The exam can be called one of the most importan and difficult exams in    one’s life. When I was a high school student,I really hated it.I was sure it must be the most difficult experience in all my life.

   But now,when I look back,Ifind the experience give me many things.I guess it had given so many things that I weill be able to learn in the rest of my life.Of course,almost my classmates,friends agree with me,too. Most seemed difficult experiences in our lives will become valuable lessons for the future.

    First,we all cost very long time doing perparetion.During the period, we did so many exercise,found what we did not know and “fixed” that we had understood. Most difficult experience in our life such as important exams,adventures,some sports,all need us much time to ready whereas we will spend more time ,more money on them.For example,many chinese students cost more than three years and 20,000yuan for the Exame of College Admination.

   Second,difficult experiences will strong our body and heart.What we can bear is more and heavier.Do not believe?After some difficult experience,we will find we can bear more stress.The reason is we can face the difficult without fear and be more confidence.

   Finally,most difficult experiences in our lives are also important ones.Every time we met them and have done them well,we weill be rewarded by them,not only in money,chances,but also in our brain as well as the environments around ourselves.Sometime,we will get a better view.

    Life is a box of chocolates,everyone in it has its own taste.The black ones do not look pretty,just like mud,but they may be tasted very well

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问个傻问题
大家听抄都要几遍捏?