G06.Sally小组作文贴

sallyxinduUID：2131253

谢谢berlinbear的辛勤工作，你总结的例子已经比较全了，我会再看看，有漏掉的会添加上去．３Ｘ３Ｘ

sallyxinduUID：2131253

issue
116"With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from international influences."

argument
7. The following appeared in a memorandum issued by the strategic planning department at Omni Inc.

“Mesa Foods, a manufacturer of snack foods that currently markets its products within a relatively small region of the country, has strong growth potential. Mesa enjoyed a 20 percent increase in profits last year, and its best-selling product, Diabolique Salsa, has had increased sales over each of the past three years. Since Omni Inc. is interested in reaching 14-to-25 year olds, the age group that consumes the most snack food, we should buy Mesa Foods, and concentrate in particular on marketing Diabolique Salsa throughout the country.”

上次作业的完成情况不是很好，希望这次大家都按时交作业．另外，这次的修改搭档换了，大家请留意

[ Last edited by sallyxindu on 2005-12-11 at 19:40 ]

yangxingUID：2112368

我今天好好总结了一下自己，又把坛子里的帖子又看了一遍，受到很大启发，感谢斑竹，感谢支持我的G友。今天开始正式训练。我将每天至少写5个I＆5个A提纲，欢迎大家来提意见。支持我更希望大家也来一起写。
好我们出发，大家一起来。每天写的题目将发在“成长帖中”，大家一起来写。每天早上发题目。
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;extra=&page=1

sallyxinduUID：2131253

由于明天有事情怕来不及写了，今天抽时间先把ＩＳＳＵＥ写了，
ISSUE116
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid2127426

希望大家多提意见．不胜感激

yangxingUID：2112368

对了，我还发现一个人才，大家可以去问他，真的是好人啊gtrand ：谢谢你的指导，我现在出发

Archer1123UID：206148

Originally posted by yangxing at 2005-12-12 05:56
对了，我还发现一个人才，大家可以去问他，真的是好人啊gtrand ：谢谢你的指导，我现在出发

我也觉得gtrand是一个好人才，帮我修改的issue让我提高不少，谢谢

superficialUID：2151788

他（她）是一个好人，人家都考过了，现在回来继续义务帮我们改，真是好人。这提醒了我，以后考完了也经常上来看看啊，好多像咱们一样需要帮助的人啊！

48778UID：209221

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=377943   13号的作业，限时失败

[ Last edited by 48778 on 2005-12-13 at 09:08 ]

yangxingUID：2112368

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=377957
issue116

sallyxinduUID：2131253

这次是Archer指导我了，多多提意见哦，谢谢拉
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid2131127

BerlinbearUID：207694

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=378134

这篇issue写的真算是费尽周折，第一次快完成时不小心关掉了写字板，只得重新来过，哭啊~~~
写完后感觉内容不够深刻，请大家多拍拍，给些意见、指点，berlinbear在此先谢谢各位了！~~~

BerlinbearUID：207694

sally,这次argument的序号好像应该是8而不是7~~~麻烦组长再查一查做一下订正，麻烦了！~~

BerlinbearUID：207694

12月9日作业之argument
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=378140

maylUID：2162549

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=378159

Archer1123UID：206148

交作业了
issue116
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=378161
argument8
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=378162