G06.Sally小组作文贴

sallyxinduUID：2131253

Originally posted by Archer1123 at 2005-12-15 16:04
to sally,
修改完毕，呵呵，有问题大家讨论

谢谢，刚刚看了．很感谢你提的较有建设性的意见，受益很多哦～～～:handshake

yangxingUID：2112368

阿，不好意思，忘啦。嘿嘿

sallyxinduUID：2131253

Archer，修改完了，看看吧

sallyxinduUID：2131253

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144"It is the artist, not the critic, who gives society something of lasting value.
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4. “Of the two leading real estate firms in our town--Adams Realty and Fitch Realty--Adams is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents. In contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams’ revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch, and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch’s $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago, I listed my home with Fitch and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams.”

我们又要换搭档了，为避免麻烦，大家注意看哦，不要弄错了

sallyxinduUID：2131253

Originally posted by kele05 at 2005-12-15 21:57
to 48778
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid2140485

kelo修改得不错啊，很认真。:victory:

sallyxinduUID：2131253

由于周末回家不方便上网所以只有提前把作业交了。大家多多指教批评
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=379566

ISSUE144
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=379620

[ Last edited by sallyxindu on 2005-12-16 at 03:20 ]

BerlinbearUID：207694

to mayl  文章改好了~~
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... p;page=1#pid2140898
因为今晚学校网络不好，一直上不了寄托，拖到现在才发上来，实在对不起！~~

yangxingUID：2112368

Berlinbear 好尽职

48778UID：209221

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=379965

https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

12.16号作业，麻烦组长给我改了。

[ Last edited by 48778 on 2005-12-16 at 20:50 ]

maylUID：2162549

issue144 argue4
指教一下，my partner是 yangxing吧？这次别抢
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

[ Last edited by mayl on 2005-12-17 at 22:14 ]

BerlinbearUID：207694

ISSUE62
”The widespread idea that people should make self-improvement a primary goal in their lives is problematic because it assumes that people are intrinsically deficient."

ARGUMENT206
206The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Parkville Daily Newspaper.
"Throughout the country last year, as more and more children below the age of nine participated in youth-league softball and soccer, over 80,000 of these young players suffered injuries. When interviewed for a recent study, youth-league softball players in several major cities also reported psychological pressure from coaches and parents to win games. Furthermore, education experts say that long practice sessions for these sports take away time that could be used for academic activities. Since the disadvantages apparently outweigh any advantages, we in Parkville should discontinue organized athletic competition for children under nine."

Archer1123UID：206148

交周五作业,麻烦superficial 帮我看看，狠狠拍，谢谢
issue
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=380127
argument
https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=380128