issue144 shirley的作业(GoGoGo)

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Issue 144 (考频75)
"It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value."
*a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc.
“能够给社会留下具有持久价值东西的人是艺术家，而不是艺术评论家。”

论点：
艺术家能够将他们最有价值的作品留给世人，但艺术评论家帮助我们识别那些真正有价值的作品。

1、任何艺术品都是出自艺术家的手笔。凡高的向日葵，
2、艺术家给我们的都是
3、然而，艺术评论家能够为我们识别出那些真正有艺术价值的作品，

Speaking of artistic works, people would conveniently associate them with the greatest painters, musicians, playwrights, such as Da Vinci, Beethoven, Shakespeare, as well as their masterpieces as hallmarks for those brilliant personalities of different periods of time. However, rarely do people have any idea about some greatest critics in history. I do agree that all the valuable works are created by the artist, but the critic also have contribution on the lasting value.

On one hand, it is undoubted that the artist’s creative minds replete of erratic ideas give birth to the artistic woks. In the history of the development of art, many valuable works that are preserved up to the present are created by famous artists. For example, the “Divine Comedy” written by Dante, “Mona Lisa” painted by Vince. We can definitely say that they are of everlasting value and will certainly be appreciated by people in the future.

On the other hand, without critics, the value of those artistic works can not be distinguished from a huge number of newly born creations. For common persons, who have little professional knowledge to evaluate the artistic works, it is impossible to appreciate the real value lies in a great work. For instance, most of impressionism painting works can not be easily understood with a first glance. Only with the professional explanations can common people know what the real meaning expressed by the works. That’s why when go to an artistic museum it is necessary to follow the guidance. Therefore, only with the evaluation from the critics, can the real valuable works be reserved and the value last for ever.

Furthermore, a criticism could help artist promote their working level and encourage them to create greater works. No one is born to an artist. It is rarely that an artist’s maiden work can turn to be a great work. Every artist needs a progress to improve their creating ability. During this period, criticisms from critics play an important role, which help them realize their shortage and the dissatisfactory points in the work. With endless modification and improvement, a great work and a famous artist finally come out.

In conclusion, it is obvious that the artist and the critic both play important roles of the creation of great works. It is the artist who gives society something of lasting value, and it is the critic that help the artist create the value and distinguish the value.

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Issue 131 （15）
"The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."
“艺术（绘画、音乐、文学等）可揭示出一个社会中那些原来深藏着的观念和冲动。”

提纲：
1、艺术作品能够表达人们的观念和态度；
2、艺术作品能够反映人们内心的需求；
3、艺术作品同时还能引领和唤起人们思想进步。举例，鲁迅的作品。

Issue 190 （14）
"As long as people in a society are hungry or out of work or lack the basic skills needed to survive, the use of public resources to support the arts is inappropriate—and, perhaps, even cruel—when one considers all the potential uses of such money."
“只要社会中有人还在忍饥挨饿，或失业，或缺乏存活所需的基本技能，那么，使用公共资源来支持艺术便是不恰当的，甚至可能是残忍的，尤其是当我们考虑到这些钱款所有的潜在用途时。”

提纲：
部分同意这个观点。
1、我们的社会的确需要将人的生存状态放在首位。
2、但是，精神生活对人的生存来说也非常重要。举例，
3、社会中忍饥挨饿并不是普遍现象，在物质生活已经非常丰富的地区必须要满足人们的精神需要。
结论，在考虑钱款的签字用途时，我们不能忽视人们的物质生活和精神生活。


Issue 218 （26）
"In order for any work of art—whether film, literature, sculpture, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people."
“为了使一部分艺术作品——无论是电影、文学、雕塑，还是歌曲——具有价值，它必须能为大多数人所理解。”

观点：艺术作品是需要为大多数人所理解，但并不只有为人理解的作品才是具有价值的。
1、 艺术作品的价值本身在于能给人们带来思想的启迪和感动，因此它必须为人们所理解。
2 、但是，大多数人的艺术鉴赏能力有限，并不能直接理解艺术作品的内涵，需要通过艺术鉴赏家的分析才能了解艺术品的价值所在。
3 、有些艺术作品超越了它所处的时代，并没有为当时的大多数人理解，但是为后人所理解。举例，凡高的作品。
结论：艺术作品要有自由性，不必限制艺术家的创造力。

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Speaking of artistic works, people would conveniently associate them with the greatest painters, musicians, playwrights, such as Da Vinci, Beethoven, Shakespeare, as well as their masterpieces as hallmarks for those brilliant personalities of different periods of time. However, rarely do people have any idea about some greatest critics in history. I do agree that all the valuable works are created by the artist, but the critic also have contribution on（是to还是on啊？） the lasting value.

On one hand, it is undoubted that the artist’s creative minds replete of erratic ideas give birth to the artistic woks. In the history of the development of art, many valuable works that are preserved up to the present are created by famous artists. For example, the “Divine Comedy” written by Dante, “Mona Lisa” painted by Vince. We can definitely say that they are of everlasting value and will certainly be appreciated by people in the future.

On the other hand, without critics, the value of those artistic works can not be distinguished from a huge number of newly born creations. For common persons, who have little professional knowledge to evaluate the artistic works, it is impossible to appreciate the real value lies in a great work. For instance, most of impressionism painting works can not be easily understood with a first glance. Only with the professional explanations can common people know what the real meaning expressed by the works. That’s why when go to an artistic museum it is necessary to follow the guidance. （语言没的说，但观点不敢苟同。艺术具有直观性，暧昧性，不一定非要解说才看得懂，所谓不同人不同体验和理解。但是评论家可以看到一些更深入的东西，丰富我们对作品的认识，获得更多愉悦。） Therefore, only with the evaluation from the critics, can the real valuable works be reserved and the value last for ever.

Furthermore, a criticism could help artist promote their working level and encourage them to create greater works. No one is born to an artist. It is rarely that an artist’s maiden work can turn to be a great work.（这也不竟然啊，很多艺术家处女作最棒，后来越写越烂！） Every artist needs a progress to improve their creating ability. During this period, criticisms from critics play an important role, which help them realize their shortage and the dissatisfactory points in the work. With endless modification and improvement, a great work and a famous artist finally come out.

In conclusion, it is obvious that the artist and the critic both play important roles of the creation of great works. It is the artist who gives society something of lasting value, and it is the critic that help the artist create the value and distinguish the value.

[color=Whit感觉第三段不够强有力，主要是例子的问题，绘画是直观的艺术，语言文字说不清，另外美术家向来对评论家嗤之以鼻,还有guidance毕竟不是critics啊。

我想举文学的例子会更好，比如《红楼梦》，一般人只看到宝黛二人的爱情故事，可是在评论家那里，红楼梦是无数异样女子的命运悲剧，是中国文化的缩影。这句话我不知道怎样用英文写，不过你一定能写得比我用中文写的还好。

在语言上帮不上你什么，只能想个例子，供你参考吧。[/color]

题外话:
    麻烦将一楼中我的考试日期由"不详"改为"2月27日", 将yunzilu改为yunziluo
    另外,作业连接的地方将yunzilu改为yunziluo
    我自己好象改不了!:rolleyes:

[ Last edited by yunziluo on 2005-12-27 at 18:06 ]

happy_shirleyUID: 2155516

Speaking of artistic works, people would conveniently associate them with the greatest painters, musicians, playwrights, such as Da Vinci, Beethoven, Shakespeare, as well as their masterpieces as hallmarks for those brilliant personalities of different periods of time. However, rarely do people have any idea about some greatest critics in history. I do agree that all the valuable works are created by the artist, but the critic also have contribution on（是to还是on啊？）(改为contribute to) the lasting value.

On one hand, it is undoubted that the artist’s creative minds replete of erratic ideas give birth to the artistic woks. In the history of the development of art, many valuable works that are preserved up to the present are created by famous artists. For example, the “Divine Comedy” written by Dante, “Mona Lisa” painted by Vince. We can definitely say that they are of everlasting value and will certainly be appreciated by people in the future.

On the other hand, without critics, the value of those artistic works can not be distinguished from a huge number of newly born creations. For common persons, who have little professional knowledge to evaluate the artistic works, it is impossible to appreciate the real value lies in a great work. For instance, most of impressionism painting works can not be easily understood with a first glance. Only with the professional explanations can common people know what the real meaning expressed by the works. That’s why when go to an artistic museum it is necessary to follow the guidance. （语言没的说，但观点不敢苟同。艺术具有直观性，暧昧性，不一定非要解说才看得懂，所谓不同人不同体验和理解。但是评论家可以看到一些更深入的东西，丰富我们对作品的认识，获得更多愉悦。） Therefore, only with the evaluation from the critics, can the real valuable works be reserved and the value last for ever.

Furthermore, a criticism could help artist promote their working level and encourage them to create greater works. No one is born to an artist. It is rarely that an artist’s maiden work can turn to be a great work.（这也不竟然啊，很多艺术家处女作最棒，后来越写越烂！）我用了rarely. Every artist needs a progress to improve their creating ability. During this period, criticisms from critics play an important role, which help them realize their shortage and the dissatisfactory points in the work. With endless modification and improvement, a great work and a famous artist finally come out.

In conclusion, it is obvious that the artist and the critic both play important roles of the creation of great works. It is the artist who gives society something of lasting value, and it is the critic that help the artist create the value and distinguish the value.

感觉第三段不够强有力，主要是例子的问题，绘画是直观的艺术，语言文字说不清，另外美术家向来对评论家嗤之以鼻,还有guidance毕竟不是critics啊。
恩可能是有一些差别的，改为电影影评是不是好些！

我想举文学的例子会更好，比如《红楼梦》，一般人只看到宝黛二人的爱情故事，可是在评论家那里，红楼梦是无数异样女子的命运悲剧，是中国文化的缩影。这句话我不知道怎样用英文写，不过你一定能写得比我用中文写的还好。

在语言上帮不上你什么，只能想个例子，供你参考吧!

题外话:
    麻烦将一楼中我的考试日期由"不详"改为"2月27日", 将yunzilu改为yunziluo
    另外,作业连接的地方将yunzilu改为yunziluo
    我自己好象改不了!
已经改了

谢谢yunziluo拍的文章！
其实周一的作业写得有点不是很认真，而且迟交了！
我也帮你拍了，注意修改！