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ChunyanLi2005UID: 2124266

Issue138  
    超时    491 words
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position: basicly agree
A. 由于条件的限制，人们不可能避免错误。天文学的例子
B. 从错误中，人们可以汲取经验，或者有新的发现。
C. 并不是所有的成功都要建立在错误的基础上。人们应该吸取经验避免错误，减少损失。 神州六号载人飞船成功的例子。
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Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.
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Most discoveris and progress in the history, are through mistakes, and one often gets through mistakes then to be successful. I believe mistakes are often inextricable. As a result, I basically agree with the speaker. However, in the meanwhile, I do not think discovery or progress are only through mistakes.

First of all, under the conditions surrounding us and with limited knowledge, mistakes are often unavoidable. When we try to do something at the first time, we have no experience and enough knowledge to make sure our efforts absolutely right. Just like playing the maze, we are often not fortunate enough to get the correct routine to the destination. But after trying many times, then we are probably find the exit. Also in astronomy, before the right theory of the structure of space, there are many mistake notions which are caused by highly constraint on ethics, like the geocentric theory supported by Ptolemaic and Aristotle, then the Copernicus' heliocentric theory, ect. So in many times, making mistakes are often necessary to achieve success.(此处，这个天文学的例子说的不太顺， 有哪个牛人能用英语叙述得更好些吗？多谢！)

Additionally, we can learn much from the mistakes and get some experience, which will be very helpful to make more discovery or progress. The failure of perpetual motion machine, made by Chales Redheffle, attracted public's attention, and called many scientists' interests to work on it in that time. Although it failed, the failure greatly inspired James Prescott Joule and then the great law of conservation of energy was finally put out. Thomas Edison had tried and failed for nearly two thousand times. And with the rich experience from so many failures, he finally invent the electric light. It is also true in business. Most of the successful business men have gone through the experience of oscillation between being poor and being rich. The book, <<Rich dad, poor dad>>, is very popular nowadays. Robert through his own experience, has convinced us that business man always make mistakes for many times, but after learning from the failure, they will become more tactful(谁知道“老练的”sofistacated拼写象这个错词似的正确的词 怎么写啊？) and successful in their business. To include, mistakes are very necessary when we are trying to make discoveries and progress.

However, although dealing with mistakes rightfully is helpful to success, we should try our best to avoid mistakes happen and there are some facts of  success without any mistakes. From mistakes, we get experience and more knowledge, but when we have got these enough to do something, we should make sure that we succeed at the first time. The success of Chinese manned spacecraft traveling space for the first time can best illustrate that we can make progress without any mistakes. While before the travel, chinese scientists have tried their best to consider comprehensively in everything. (神州六号升天这个例子， 有没有牛人再指点一下，完善地叙述它啊？多谢！)
In conclusion, in most conditions, mistakes are unavoidable when we want to make progress or discoveries, for restriction from the condition and limited knowledge. But we should learn from mistakes, to avoid more mistakes and try to succeed without any mistakes.

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dinddind2003UID: 196353

Issue138  
    超时    491 words
------提纲-------
position: basicly agree
A. 由于条件的限制，人们不可能避免错误。天文学的例子
B. 从错误中，人们可以汲取经验，或者有新的发现。
C. 并不是所有的成功都要建立在错误的基础上。人们应该吸取经验避免错误，减少损失。 神州六号载人飞船成功的例子。
------题目------
Only through mistakes can there be discovery or progress.
------正文------
Most discoveris and progress in the history, are through mistakes, and one often gets through mistakes then to be successful. I believe mistakes are often inextricable. As a result, I basically agree with the speaker. However, in the meanwhile, I do not think discovery or progress are only through mistakes（I do not think people get every discovery or progress through mistakes）.

First of all, under the conditions surrounding us （under certain conditions） and with limited knowledge, mistakes are often unavoidable. When we try to do something at the first time, we have no experience and enough knowledge to make sure our efforts absolutely right. Just like playing the maze, we are often not fortunate enough to get the correct routine to the destination. But after trying many times, then we are probably find the exit. Also in astronomy, before the right theory of the structure of space, there are many mistake notions （mistakes） which are caused by highly constraint on ethics, like the geocentric theory supported by Ptolemaic and Aristotle, then the Copernicus' heliocentric theory, ect. So in many times, making mistakes are often necessary to achieve success.(此处，这个天文学的例子说的不太顺， 有哪个牛人能用英语叙述得更好些吗？多谢！) （这个例子我一般用来表示权威对正确的抵触，我没听说Copernicus发现日心说犯了多少错误，只是有不少阻碍罢了，你要说清除这个例子就要从Copernicus犯了不少错误说起）

Additionally, we can learn much from the mistakes and get some experience, which will be very helpful to make more discovery or progress. The failure of perpetual motion machine, made by Chales Redheffle, attracted public's attention, and called （attract） many scientists' interests to work on it in （at） that time. Although it （指代不清） failed, the failure greatly inspired James Prescott Joule and then the great law of conservation of energy was finally put out. Thomas Edison had tried and failed （失败？made mistakes） for nearly two thousand times. And with the rich experience from so many failures, he finally invent the electric light. It is also true in business. Most of the successful business men have gone through the experience of oscillation between being poor and being rich. The book, <<Rich dad, poor dad>>, is very popular nowadays. Robert through his own experience, has convinced us that business man always make mistakes for many times, but after learning from the failure, they will become more tactful(谁知道“老练的”sophisticated拼写象这个错词似的正确的词 怎么写啊？（skilled, sophisticated）) and successful in their business. To include, mistakes are very necessary when we are trying to make discoveries and progress. （这段还行）

However, although dealing with mistakes rightfully is helpful to success, we should try our best to avoid mistakes happen and there are some facts of （删facts of） success without any mistakes. From mistakes, we get experience and more knowledge, but when we have got these enough to do something, we should make sure that we succeed at the first time （我们从错误吸取经验，然后一次就能成功，那以前的错误是第零次？既然你要说不经过错误成功就不要再提出错误来啊）. The success of Chinese manned spacecraft traveling space for the first time can best illustrate that we can make progress without any mistakes. While before the travel, chinese scientists have tried their best to consider comprehensively in everything. (神州六号升天这个例子， 有没有牛人再指点一下，完善地叙述它啊？多谢！) （神州六号升空前人们做了多少模拟阿，这些不算错误吗？除非你说人们第一次模拟就成功了）

In conclusion, in most conditions, mistakes are unavoidable when we want to make progress or discoveries, for restriction from the condition and limited knowledge. But we should learn from mistakes, to avoid more mistakes and try to succeed without any mistakes.

ChunyanLi2005UID: 2124266