5T互助小组 第一组 专用贴

LizKwanUID: 2150199

原帖由 微末三月 于 2006-4-12 20:49 发表
那岂不是跑题了...

不是题目很多都是这样出:which do you prefer,A or B?A比较好写,大家都写A好,反弹琵琶就是说B好,虽然B不好写,有些强词夺理.  

也就是说TWE看重写作者的思维吗?还是就看语言及结构就好

哪个你觉得好写就写哪个,如果你有够强的语言能力和辩驳能力,黑白颠倒也OKAY.:)
听一个上过新东方T班的朋友说一个新东方老师考T作文时遇到的题目是一笔钱是用于图书馆还是购买计算机,该老师在作文中支持图书馆的论据竟然是图书馆少了,学生会郁闷,郁闷了就自杀......该作文6分,所以......呵呵,偶就不说啥了.

hynixiaUID: 2147629

enroll.............

stephanie_sisuUID: 201114

观点不重要
ETS评判作文，一向是重视逻辑和结构的，也就是说，不管观点怎样，只要逻辑通顺，就木有问题。
结构么，就是八股文的样子。个人比较喜欢开头-中间三段三个分论点-结尾这样的结构
托福还会重视语言的优美和运用。当然所谓优美不是用长句就可以，而是句式的灵活性和语言的地道性

chongshaomeiUID: 2171541

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chongshaomeiUID: 2171541

现在集中每天练习听力,怎样有效提高听力分数.
头头们有办法吗?

hynixiaUID: 2147629

惨啊。。。。

开始以为自己还不错，可。。。。

今天第一次做托福题，00年的，听力错了17个，阅读9个，语法4个，惨烈阿

问问组长，还有一个月该怎么复习阿？？？？？

hynixiaUID: 2147629

When faced with the issue that wether to suppor or oppose the fact that a factory will(should) be bulit in one's community,depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the opinion that it will be always advisable to not to set a factory in our community.(quite a long and complex sentence, however, the structrue is not well-organized, for instance, the use of depending on seems confusing. )
Meanwhile, others take an opposite stand,which is also my choise(choice),to built a factory(building) will prove to be a farseeing choise by (in light of)the following reasons.

The main reason why I support the statement is that a new factory will enroll a
number of new members who(could) work for the factory,which(what? members or factory?) can solve the job problem in our community.And also,as the number of the new members work(working) in this new factory increased,the demand for houses will augment too(verbose, "too, also, and"). Only can we see this
prospect(Only by realizing the prospects) can we seize the opportunity to make the best use of the new factory with to improve our life.

Furthermore,what is worth noticing fact is that the new factory will bring along (bring about) a sequence of other industries such as the entertainment which is what the workers need to relax after a day's work. These sorts of trades will play the role as the factory do and therefore they interweave(passive voice) into a large scale to bring our community into thriving and prosperous (?).

Of course,arguments will be rised against my standpoint.Some people might argue
that the pullution which the factory bring along will harm our environment. For this point, (Given this point)I will demonstrate that with the development of morden society,the factory will use (employ) the advanced technology to ensure that the pollution will be controlled in (to) the minimal extent.

Taking into account of all these factors,we may reach the conclusion that bulid a
new factory in our community will bring our lives in harmony(would probably make  our lives more harmonious).In fact,not only do I prefer to bulid a new factory in our community,but also do I (but I also)suggest that the community should give publicity to the new factory so that benefit the most from it (problematic).

comments：
意思还是可以的（我还不知道该怎么写TWE），就是语言上还是要下 功夫，少犯些低级的语法问题

advice：
我觉得你的文中will太多了，还有有些句子太复杂以至于有问题

另，第一次改t作文，有点苛刻阿，再说我还没写过呢。。我是按AW的一部分标准评你的作文的

[ 本帖最后由 hynixia 于 2006-4-13 16:48 编辑 ]

hynixiaUID: 2147629

还有，考了AW还有必要复习TWE了么？

hynixiaUID: 2147629

还有想跟 组长 说的一些东西

由于本人前一阶段为了AW落下了很多的专业课，并且一直都没开始准备T，今天做了一套题有点受打击了，所以想以后用少点的时间在电脑上在寄托上，先钻些日子把听力和阅读搞好，如果有时候三四天没来发帖，还请组长原谅，千万别把我赶出去。。。OK？？（I wanna feel belonged, and I am scared of loneliness and solitude. I need your support.）

If I can spare any time, however short it might seem, I will definitely try my best to participate in the discussion of you fellows. I mean it.( I hope that my efforts will be of value.)

I would be awfully grateful...

In addition, 希望其他的组员能理解。。

[ 本帖最后由 hynixia 于 2006-4-13 18:38 编辑 ]

hynixiaUID: 2147629

原帖由 allison 于 2006-4-9 23:00 发表
请教 亲爱的组长和组员们 ，像是一家人

Each SMSA would contain at least (a) one central city with 50,000 inhabitants or more or (b) two cities having shared boundaries and constituting, for genera ...

personal perspective:

B is wrong for sure merely according to the passage given insomuch as the word "outlying" means "remote from a center or main body"; however, meanwhile, without contexts, I could not exculde D.

chongshaomeiUID: 2171541

今天看了2000年10月的听力,有点发憷了,看都不明白,就不要说听了,能不能帮我翻译一下大意?而且我觉的题目37都不沾边.
So what do you think of that ancient Egyptian temple the Professor talked about in class today? The temple in Kanenet? Oh, pretty amazing. So grand and magnificent with all those many features.
Woo, I’m sure. After all, the temple was built to honor the ruler and those ancient Egyptian rulers were viewed as god after the death.
Oh, I know. But like that all the heaven grand whole living up to遵守遵从the temple. I mean that roadways with all those statues, sacrificial animals along both sides. All that seems perfectly designed for the grand religious perception they often had there. And that huge stone over the entrance of the temple was cut away.
Yeah. That was clever. cut away part of that stone, so the ...perception could pass through the entrance underneath, even with all torn these they are carrying out of temple.
Right. How about the inside, ...? In the great hall.
You mean the columns?
Yeah.
So the columns are really amazing. i mean, like how many were there, over 100? And each one is in the image of gods and kings cut to its surface to tell stories of their great deeds.
Well, they were all pretty awesome. But I particularly meant the columns down the center of the island at the hall. The one that is so much taller than others, so they raise the central roof much higher than the roof on neither side.
Oh, yeah though. What a brilliant solution for letting nature light down in middle of the great hall. Architects must be really creative.
36. What aspects of the temple of Ka.. Are the speakers mainly discussing?
37. According to the discussion, what was the avenue of ramp of a newsport?
38. Why is part of the stone over the elfrance the missing?
39. According to the conversation, what aspect of the great hall was improved by raising part of its roof?
37.        (A) Public market days.
(B)        Races and sporting events.
(C)        Processions of priests.
(D)        Speeches by politicians.

38.        (A) It was removed by an invading army.
(B)        It broke off when part of the hall
collapsed.
(C)        It was cut away to let banners pass
through the entrance.
(D)        It was later used in building another
temple.
39.        (A) Its lighting.
(B)        Its sound quality.
(C)        Its air circulation.
(D)        Its stability in an earthquake.

allisonUID: 192807

原帖由 hynixia 于 2006-4-13 17:45 发表


personal perspective:

B is wrong for sure merely according to the passage given insomuch as the word "outlying" means "remote from a center or main body"; however, meanwh ...

thanx very much, this paragraph is derived from the last passage 9705, hope that u can have a look

[ 本帖最后由 allison 于 2006-4-13 18:08 编辑 ]

allisonUID: 192807

原帖由 chongshaomei 于 2006-4-13 17:53 发表
今天看了2000年10月的听力,有点发憷了,看都不明白,就不要说听了,能不能帮我翻译一下大意?而且我觉的题目37都不沾边.
So what do you think of that ancient Egyptian temple the Professor talked about in clas ...

36. What aspects of the temple of Ka.. Are the speakers mainly discussing?
主要讲ka的建筑及其代表的意义
37. According to the discussion, what was the avenue of ramp of a newsport? w%F$W R/I
这道是不是错了，好像不是这篇文章的。
38. Why is part of the stone over the elfrance the missing?
And that huge stone over the entrance of the temple was cut away.
Yeah. That was clever. cut away part of that stone, so the ...
39. According to the conversation, what aspect of the great hall was improved by raising part of its roof
The one that is so much taller than others, so they raise the central roof much higher than the roof on neither side  What a brilliant solution for letting nature light down in middle of the great hall. Architects must be really creative.

38.        (A) It was removed by an invading army.bbs.gter.net s N1{0wG
(B)        It broke off when part of the hall
collapsed.
(C)        It was cut away 根据所听到的cut away 去选to let banners pass
through the entrance.
(D)        It was later used in building another
temple.V
39.        (A) Its lighting.
(B)        Its sound quality.
(C)        Its air circulation.
(D)        Its stability in an earthquake.
看不懂不用怕，听到什么就选什么是段子题真理，有时不需听懂，但能选对，因为考的地方听的时候有关键词的重复

approachUID: 2101189

咱组真好~~认真看了大家给我改的作文~~吸取教训.
另问个大家现在都怎么练习作文呢啊???超级郁闷作文的东西,由4到5真是不小的距离啊~

PS,汇报一下自己这两天的进展.前天,昨天,今天,做了0001,0005,0008.由于某些原因听力没有做.总结的结论是,语法一定要细,要稳,还错那么3,4个.真郁闷.阅读又是7-9个.
今天晚上去总结错题原因,明天进行0010.争取一天一套.

PS2:看大家都在跟读,不晓得要跟风一下不,据说有人跟读之后PARTA能全对啊???跟读的那个同学~~你一天跟读00-05一遍,怎么做到的??貌似超多的东西啊~~~

PS3.某人签名貌似多了一句话哈.....