5T互助小组 第一组 专用贴

chongshaomeiUID: 2171541

Topic4:
It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained form book. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
提纲：书更重要
原因：1）范围广2）成本低3）系统化
As to which source of getting knowledge is more important, the answers vary. Some people hold the opinion that knowledge gained from books is more important than that gained from experiences. Others, on the contrary, consider that knowledge gained from experience more than crucial. Personally, I would trend the former one.

There are numerous factories why I do think so. I would take a few main arguments to illuminate my own points as follow:

The primary reason why knowledge gained from books is less unimportant than that gained form experience is that knowledge from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. Nowadays, the printed matters are readily available. Not only can you gain present events, but historical events. For example, with Newton bitten by an apple suddenly and studying, universal gravitation is accepted by everybody, yet we need not to taste the feel what was bitten by things.

Knowledge gained from books belongs to the wealth of human, whereas from experience is part of individual. （这里同时省略Knowledge gained，直接用from experience吗？）

The next reason is, for economical perspective that may save a sea of wampum and time. One of the great men once said that: “time is money.” In other word, time is as important as money. In libraries, we can learn nearly everything, history, physics, mathematics, biology, and the list will go on. Take an example, suppose that you are interested in tour, but you can not afford to achieve your dream that circuit the world, It is the best solution that goes to a library to consult a special book about travel.
（for economical perspective我在这里用的作为插入语，是否正确？还有，这里举的例子是否恰当？）
The third cause, not the last one, is knowledge from books is more convenient and systematic. Most books have “search engine” of it own (属于它自己的)，that is the content. If only having the aim of search, we can available quickly.

Of course, knowledge from experience also has importance to some extent. Sometimes knowledge gained from experience is irreplaceable. We have to jump into the water and than gain the knowledge with experience. At least, I have never heard that one person who only depend on books become a swim winner.

From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that the knowledge source from books is more crucial than that from practice.(结尾我想了半天，就是不知道怎样罗列上面的观点)

LizKwanUID: 2150199

原帖由 yanhuangbaby 于 2006-4-15 13:24 发表


有你在偶还敢指点个啥咧?:L
关公面前弄大斧的说:(:o

有空也请JJ你到偶们第五小组串个门:)
偶们那些板油貌似情绪不是太好:L

好,有空就去串串.:D

diaoj03UID: 2147341

我正在做模拟，求05年1月，5月，8月托福最准确的答案，现在网上的答案我发觉错太多

hynixiaUID: 2147629

今天终于阅读到五个了。。。语法一个。。可听力。。。

问个题
Hail is formed when a drop of rain is carried by an undraft to an altitude where____to freeze it.
A is the air cold enough
B the air cold enough
C the cold enough air
D the air is cold enough

答案选C，我觉得是D，你们觉得呢？？

approachUID: 2101189

你内答案错了,这个貌似前几天我刚做过,我内答案是D

mxggUID: 2111875

原帖由 diaoj03 于 2006-4-15 22:45 发表
我正在做模拟，求05年1月，5月，8月托福最准确的答案，现在网上的答案我发觉错太多

请把认为有问题的题目发上来,
大家一起讨论:)

mxggUID: 2111875

原帖由 hynixia 于 2006-4-16 00:21 发表
今天终于阅读到五个了。。。语法一个。。可听力。。。

问个题
Hail is formed when a drop of rain is carried by an undraft to an altitude where____to freeze it.
A is the air cold enough
B the air  ...

选D

mxggUID: 2111875

原帖由 bobyisland 于 2006-4-15 00:53 发表
29应该是B  fill 是充满的意思吧。 另外80%的工作都已经被安排满了
但15我也觉得有问题。

1) CD错了,不是这个题目的选项

2) 选A,意思是20%的工作是广告方式宣传的，80%的工作是用其他的方式.

恩,听力和阅读要加强啊.
5T6G很辛苦,这个是事实的,
建议你把计划做好,做到每天每个小时要做什么,
这样一项一项有条理的完成,效果比较好,加油!

mxggUID: 2111875

原帖由 yanhuangbaby 于 2006-4-15 13:24 发表


有你在偶还敢指点个啥咧?:L
关公面前弄大斧的说:(:o

有空也请JJ你到偶们第五小组串个门:)
偶们那些板油貌似情绪不是太好:L

有时间去串门,
欢迎过来看看:D

mxggUID: 2111875

Topic4:
It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained form book. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
提纲：书更重要
原因：1）范围广2）成本低3）系统化
As to which source (way) of getting knowledge is more important, the answers vary. Some people hold the opinion that knowledge gained from books is more important than that gained from experiences. Others, on the contrary, consider that knowledge gained from experience more than crucial(more crucial). Personally, I would trend the former one.

There are numerous factories (factors)why I do think so. I would take a few main arguments to illuminate my own points as follow:(.)

The primary reason why knowledge gained from books is less unimportant (这个地方不用双重否定，虽然你想变化一些，但这样不是很顺畅，建议换个词）than that gained form (from)experience is that knowledge from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. Nowadays, the printed matters are readily available.(delete) Not only can you(can not only) gain present events, but historical events. For example, with Newton bitten by an apple suddenly and studying, universal gravitation is accepted by everybody, yet we need not to taste the feel what was bitten by things.(重新写，我觉得你想写牛顿发现引力的例子吧,不过写的有点看不懂,一是语法,二是表达)

Knowledge gained from books belongs to (is viewed as) the wealth of human, whereas(It) from experience is part of individua(S)l. （这里同时省略Knowledge gained，直接用from experience吗？）---------为什么突然插入这一段呢？你想表达什么呢？


The next reason is, for economical perspective, that may (to)save a sea of wampum and time. One of the great men once said that: “time is money.” In other word(s), time is as important as money. In libraries, we can learn nearly everything, history, physics, mathematics, biology, and the list will go on. (重写,语法错误,两个句子不能没有连词就连在一起)Take an example(for example,要不就说,TAKE ...AS AN EXAMPLE), suppose that you are interested in tour, but you can not afford to achieve(come to) your dream that circuit to travel aroundthe world, It is the best solution that goes(tp go) to a library to consult a special(look at) a book about travel.
（for economical perspective我在这里用的作为插入语，是否正确？还有，这里举的例子是否恰当？）-----可以插入
[这段写很乱,首先你应该提出论点,一种原因是可以节省钱.然后解释为什么能节省钱呢,举例说明,最后给一个这个小段的CONLUSION就可以了]

The third cause, not the last one, is knowledge from books is more convenient and systematic. Most books have “search engine” of it own (their owns)(属于它自己的)，that is the content. If only having (with)the aim of search, we can available quickly.(knowledge can be reached easily.)

Of course, knowledge from experience also has (its) importance to some extent. Sometimes knowledge gained from experience is irreplaceable. We have to jump into the water and than(then) gain the knowledge with experience. At least, I have never heard that one person who only depend on books become a swim winner.

From what has been discussed above,(camparing with the advantages of the knowledge from books and experence), we may finally draw the conclusion that the knowledge source(delete) from books is more crucial than that from practice in the aspects of range, economy and systematize.
.(结尾我想了半天，就是不知道怎样罗列上面的观点)

1.结构:不是很清楚。我建议在每段里比较他们两个的好坏,然后你侧重说明前者好，
这样和我给你的结尾配合的就更协调了.
2.语言:CHINESE ENGLISH很多,我建议你多看看范文,多学习一些语言的表达.
3.语法:语法错误比较多,建议你练习T的语法的同时提高作文的语法,如果拿不准的话,不要乱用,例如NOT ONLY, BUT ALSO, 这个你要弄清楚你强调的到底是哪个部分,然后再倒装.
4.逻辑:逻辑表达上不要乱,每个段要说明什么,写着写着就有点跑题了,这样不是很好,加强练习

[ 本帖最后由 mxgg 于 2006-4-16 16:03 编辑 ]

LizKwanUID: 2150199

Organization, in any form, be it a family, a community or a country, plays a significant role in an individual’s growth and development. It provides the basic material for one to survive, supports and helps 这两个词是跟provides平行吧?加个and好点.anyone to fulfill their goals, and 这里就用as well as possess a cohesive power forcing its member to create miracle. Details of reasons concerning an organization’s crucial role are as following.

The major fascination of an organization lies in the fundament fundamental living substance which it offers offered to any individuals. Society as an organization has been divided into various sections specifying in diverse works. concerning Take any people’s daily life into account. Materially, In material side,we obtain food from factory; acquire clothes from cotton spinners, apartments from house builders. Mentally, While in spiritual field,artist create vision world of beauty to us. 建议这句不要用顺序,以避免和上文重复.the whole world's beauty just originate from the fantastic creativity of those artists living in the past and contemporary time.Musicians help release our stress and pressure from work.. Excellent authors solace our suffered heart.同理 All of these effects can never be achieved by a single individual.

Another aspect contributing to an organization’s vital position is that an organization acts as a support system, which individuals can rely upon in times of need去掉. For instance, when Li Zhekai was seeking to run his own business, he turned to his family, friends, community banks for financing(Good Example,but what I have to remind u is to make sure the spelling of 李泽凯,the Pingying simply could not be right). AtUnder that situation, without the help from an organization, Li Zhekai could hardly accomplish his ideal to set up such a popular website as Tom.com. What’s more, whenever individuals are frustrated by hardship, encouragement and solace from their family and community can quickly make their recovery recover from dismal, and then continue to struggle for their dream despite of difficulty. Adversely, an individual lacking of the assistance from an organization may perhaps unfortunately end up with a miserable life of self-abandon.

Generally speaking, organization is not only essential to an individual’s existence, but also kernel to individual’s success in career. Without organization, pleasure and happiness are faint(推荐一个好短语,a flash in the pan昙花一现,偶知道你这里想说微不足道,但从另一角度给你意见) for nobody can share it, hardship and trouble become more severe to conquer for nobody will offer a help. In a word, life is incomplete if being devoid of the feeling of belonging to a special unity.

给MM的评价是一个词:Excellent!!
这是第一篇让我提升到精改的文章,非常非常不错.
红色是我认为不合适的地方,蓝色是我的意见.
呵呵,果然不出所料......继续努力啊.:D

[ 本帖最后由 LizKwan 于 2006-4-16 19:04 编辑 ]

allisonUID: 192807

原帖由 LizKwan 于 2006-4-16 19:02 发表
Organization, in any form, be it a family, a community or a country, plays a significant role in an individual’s growth and development. It provides the basic material for one to survive, [color=R ...

谢谢LizKwan 的费时费心的修改，还有高度的夸奖，甜甜的，:)虽然错得乱七八糟却还受赞赏

LizKwan 果然功底非凡， 偶没想过要用a flash in the pan 这么牛的句子，不过经提醒，也知道该咋做了。

第一组 加油！！ 5T 5T！

"呵呵,果然不出所料......继续努力啊.:lol"
LizKwan 笑得奸奸的 （开玩笑）
我会努力的
Thanx a million.

LizKwanUID: 2150199

原帖由 allison 于 2006-4-16 20:21 发表


谢谢LizKwan 的费时费心的修改，还有高度的夸奖，甜甜的，:)虽然错得乱七八糟却还受赞赏

LizKwan 果然功底非凡， 偶没想过要用a flash in the pan 这么牛的句子，不过经提醒，也知道该咋做了。

第一组 ...

不客气,我最擅长表扬人了.吹水技术一流,别的没啥.:$

hynixiaUID: 2147629

原帖由 approach 于 2006-4-15 09:43 发表
还在坚持每天一套的真题,感觉又回到了阅读8,9个的水平.昨天又被同学恐吓说04年05年的更难...突然对于自己5T能否比1T高没信心了....
问个阅读吧.
00年10月的.
reading
5.        In paragraph 2, the author mentions ...

我昨天做的这套题。

不管怎么排除，反正那些石头是用于日常生活工具用的，不能造房子的

并且，如果能用于打猎，那起码有点weapon的功能把

AceLeeUID: 2137421

03年10月
改错18.Sea horses (usually) live along the shore among seaweed and (other) plants  to which they (cling to )by (their tails).
答案(cling to ) 是因为(cling to )中的to 与to which 中的to重复吗？

34题。European (settlers) in NORTH AMERICA moved from the Atlantic (coast across)3000 (miles forests),grasslands,deserts,and mountains (until) they reached the Pacific Ocean