5T互助小组 第二组 专用贴

czj_swufeUID: 199954

为什么我们小组这么冷清啊:(

duowqUID: 196783

问一个0201的语法第10题。 One of the basic principles of wildlifecomsercation involves------adequate natural food and shelter to maintain populations of each species in a given habitat.    a    the provision  b  that provision  c to provide  d  providing  知道答案是D的， 但是有点迷糊， 就是C选项。involve是及物动词，但是及物动词后面就不能跟
to provide  ？  请指教。

czj_swufeUID: 199954

主句principles+involves主胃有了，缺宾语，providing food and providing shelter是名词性质的，做宾语。
选C的话，如果我们把状语to provide... to maintain...去掉，involves后面就少了宾语了

dr_greenUID: 193584

我。。。。。我错了。。。今天刚找到这个组。。。。。

duowqUID: 196783

严格遵照莫名N斑竹的要求。贴文本上来。嘿嘿。下面的是修改 czj_swufe的 topic5的文章。由于水平有限，可能改的不妥，请指教。共同学习。
TOPIC5    by  czj_swufe
A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

Words: 284   Time: 35 minutes

Outline: 1. To state my opinion
       2. The adverse effects of building a large factory (2 paragraphs)
          a. adverse effect to citizens there    b. adverse effect to the environment of the community
       3. Admittedly, some benefits exist by building a factory
       4. To sum up

Many people in our community are concerned with a proposal to build a large factory near our community. After weighing the advantages against the disadvantages carefully, I disagree with this proposal.（感觉开头是开门见山的， 比较简洁，但是感觉应该接着叙述下各个分段的idea比较好）For one thing, loud noises produced by machines of a factory will （adversely）感觉这个词用的有点不妥，它表示不利的而后面的affect就有不好影响的意思，有点重复，用badly感觉好点 affect some people’s (way)应该是复数ways of life. For instance, if it’s a factory working at night, lots of people in our community will get sleepless by the noises that machines let out. Suppose it’s not such a factory mentioned above, some citizens in our community may have a different life style of sleeping at daytime while working at night, undoubtedly, these people will be disturbed, making their work (efficiency low) 建议用inefficient.

For another thing, the environment of the community will be polluted by the （wasted ）waste industrial water and heat, which may make our community unsuitable for (habitats)habitats是居住地 ，前面用for感觉有点不妥，是不上应该用living. Take water pollutant for example, as the water is polluted, both trees and( flowers )不可数的，去掉S，whose growth are impossible without water will be in danger. What’s worse, if our water for daily drinking is from this （wasted ）waste water, thus not to say the environment, but (we)建议去掉 ourselves will not stay safe.

Admittedly, as every story has two sides, there are advantages of building a factory as well. After a large factory is settled near our community, laid-off workers can get employed there, the economy of our community will be brought up, and the quality of people life may be improved with the increasing （of ）salary. 去掉of 吧。

To sum up, building a factory near our community do will bring some benefits, but if we have to give up our life styles and the beautiful environment of our community, it’s not a wise choice to accept this proposal.
总结：行文很简洁，论点很清楚的，只是有些词可能要推敲一下。总体不错的说。另外有个问题，就是新东方的老师说可以在表达body段中应该可以穿插点过度句，应该很出彩的说，但是我还不太会用，而且感觉你这篇文章中也没用的说，可以探讨一下。呵呵。

duowqUID: 196783

原帖由 czj_swufe 于 2006-4-19 13:43 发表
主句principles+involves主胃有了，缺宾语，providing food and providing shelter是名词性质的，做宾语。
选C的话，如果我们把状语to provide... to maintain...去掉，involves后面就少了宾语了

恩，懂了。

czj_swufeUID: 199954

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1
我的第三篇，欢迎拍砖

莫名NUID: 146481

好快啊...偶这个星期得赶两篇报告,所以可能会来的比较少...
请大家包涵了~
大家也要加油~

hakeemchoiUID: 193092

原帖由 莫名N 于 2006-4-20 00:03 发表
好快啊...偶这个星期得赶两篇报告,所以可能会来的比较少...
请大家包涵了~
大家也要加油~

没有关系啦　　我这两天一直也在　不过没有说话而已　你先忙吧　我来就可以了

hakeemchoiUID: 193092

从周一到现在ＭＳ大家作文发的比较多　其他部分也应该多多讨论啊　　大家加油　有问题大家一起商量　

czj_swufeUID: 199954

原帖由 duowq 于 2006-4-19 13:56 发表
严格遵照莫名N斑竹的要求。贴文本上来。嘿嘿。下面的是修改 czj_swufe的 topic5的文章。由于水平有限，可能改的不妥，请指教。共同学习。
TOPIC5    by  czj_swufe
A company has announced that it wishes to  ...

恩，非常感谢，我会注意diction的
对啊，过渡段我自己也不是很清楚，但也想了解怎么用，大家清楚的分享下哈

dr_greenUID: 193584

Topic 5
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现在就去改战友的文章！！

对了 我报告一下我的水平吧
去年考过G 不过成绩不怎么样。。。作文4分  哭死~~
现在T的话 听力一般错1-5个不等。。。 语法1-3个 阅读的部分还没有开始
基本上我只有听力有一点优势（常常看连续剧的结果。。。） 所以如果在这方面需要帮忙的话我和乐意的 =）

厄。。。我改文去！！ 希望还敢得上大家的进度
+U+U

[ 本帖最后由 dr_green 于 2006-4-20 10:43 编辑 ]

duowqUID: 196783

原帖由 dr_green 于 2006-4-20 10:35 发表
Topic 5
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

现在就去改战友的文章！！

对了 我报告一下我的水平吧
去年考过G 不过成绩不怎么样。。。作文4分  哭死~~
现 ...

感觉楼上的战友听力超强。我现在有点苦闷。有的时候状态好的时候错6个，但是状态不好的时候会错10个，感觉反差挺大的。 你有没有这种现象啊？ 还有你的PARTA怎么练习的啊？ 有没有提前读选项啊？ 我 一般都要错4到5个。不知道怎么提高。

flyingwindUID: 189320

原帖由 dr_green 于 2006-4-20 10:35 发表
Topic 5
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1

现在就去改战友的文章！！

对了 我报告一下我的水平吧
去年考过G 不过成绩不怎么样。。。作文4分  哭死~~
现 ...

你的听力真厉害啊, 怎么练习出来的哦. 我要错10+

我才哭死~~

czj_swufeUID: 199954

原帖由 flyingwind 于 2006-4-20 12:09 发表


你的听力真厉害啊, 怎么练习出来的哦. 我要错10+

我才哭死~~

差不多啊，加油