5T互助小组 第二组 专用贴

duowqUID: 196783

原帖由 莫名N 于 2006-4-13 23:06 发表
来问一个语法现象:
什么时候是adj.+adj.+n.
什么时候是adv.+adj.+n.

下面这道题:
[U]The[/U] thirteen stripes of the US flag [U]represent[/U] the [U]original thirteen[/U] states of the Union, which ...

个人觉得adj+adj和adv+adj的东西很容易搞混. 此题根据句意感觉original是修饰state的, 所以肯定是用adj的形式的.  个人觉得ETS在出语法改错的时候经常有答案摸棱两可的, 应该选错误最明显的那个.

逆风飞羊UID: 182440

原帖由 莫名N 于 2006-4-13 23:06 发表
来问一个语法现象:
什么时候是adj.+adj.+n.
什么时候是adv.+adj.+n.

下面这道题:
[U]The[/U] thirteen stripes of the US flag [U]represent[/U] the [U]original thirteen[/U] states of the Union, which ...

这个应该是看谁是被修饰的对象吧
adj.+adj.+n里第一个adj就是修饰n的 而adv.+adj.+n里adv则是形容adj的呀
这道题里面也是这个意思。

逆风飞羊UID: 182440

原帖由 莫名N 于 2006-4-13 23:26 发表
再问个问题,
有道题目是
The carbon-are lamp, a very bright electric lamp used for spotlights, consists of two carbon electrodes with a high-current are passing between it.

The carbon-are lamp中 ...

这道题我有点印象做过的。恩这个是改错题吗？你提到的with后面出现are肯定是不对啦
至于carbon-are这个东东就不必去管它啦 有-，而且在lamp，肯定就是个专有的名词什么的。

莫名NUID: 146481

原帖由 duowq 于 2006-4-14 20:07 发表

诶, 大家都要考试了,我马上也有两门专业课要考试, 负担又重了啊. 郁闷.

大家都一样呵,偶在被无数论文和考试追杀~~
不过都要加油哦~~
任何时候都要坚持住哈~

duowqUID: 196783

原帖由 莫名N 于 2006-4-15 00:05 发表


大家都一样呵,偶在被无数论文和考试追杀~~
不过都要加油哦~~
任何时候都要坚持住哈~

恩, 坚持最重要的. 加油 .

莫名NUID: 146481

偶来贴篇作文,就是这次同主题写作的,大家有空就拍拍.有啥错的大家都帮忙指出来.可能会有打错的(偶的WORD好象连语法改错都木有-_-|||)

偶就今晚看了大概的TWE的要求,看了两篇范文就动笔了,还是在写和思考中不断完善吧

5.A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

    There is an announcement from a company that it would like to build a large factory near our community. Although the construction of the factory may solve the problem of laid-off workers and may push the development of economy in our community as well, several disadvantages make me against this announcement.

    For one thing, the noise from the factory may disturb the daily life of the inhabitants in our community. If the machines work during the day, some people working or resting at home will feel annoyed. Writers or artists need a quiet environment to get their ideas on the work frequently, while people staying up too late recover soon after sound sleep in silent room. And if the workers in the factory have to work until midnight, it is certain to make nearly everyone in the community sleepless.

    For another thing, the contaminant let out from the factory may destory the environment around the community. With gas polluting the sky above and water polluting the rivers around, the total environment will become worse and worse. If there is any extremely poinsonous substance in the letting-out which has not been expelled, the health of the inhabitants may be threatened.

    However, as every coins has two sides, the construcion of the factory brings us some benefits at the same time. For instance, laid-off workers may find new job in the factory so that the pressure of employment in our community are released. In addition, increasing companies will be attracted into this area to build their factories, which may generally form an industrial center here, stimulating the economy to grow rapidly.

    Even though the benefits with the construction of the factory seem so fantastic, I feel the drawbacks are majority. We can not have our inhabitants live in a polluted community with terrible environment. Neither can we have our inhabitants in noisy all day. Because of the two main factors above, I disapprove the company to set up a factory near our community.

[ 本帖最后由 莫名N 于 2006-4-16 00:47 编辑 ]

yanhuangbabyUID: 178305

There is an announcement from a company that it would like to build a large factory near our community. Although the construction of the factory may solve the problem of laid-off workers and may push the development of economy in our community as well, several disadvantages make me against this announcement.

    For one thing, the noise from the factory may disturb the (加个形容词修饰一下,peaceful)daily life of the inhabitants in our community. If the machines work during the day, some people working or resting at home will feel annoyed. (加个句子吧,便于衔接下面.Peaceful environment is very important to the resident's lives.For example,)Writers or artists need a quiet environment to get their ideas on the work frequently, while people staying up too late recover soon after a sound sleep in silent room. And if the workers in the factory have to work until midnight, it is certain to make (nearly改用almost) everyone in the community sleepless.

    For another thing, the contaminant let out from the factory may destory the environment around the community. With gas polluting the sky above and water polluting the rivers around, the total environment will become worse and worse. If there is any extremely poinsonous substance in the letting-out which has not been expelled, the health of the inhabitants may be threatened.

    However, as every coins has two sides, the construcion of the factory brings us some benefits at the same time. For instance, laid-off workers may find new job in the factory so that the pressure of (用unemployment貌似更好呀:D )in our community (are 改为will be)released. In addition,( increasing number of 或者more吧,increasing修饰名词好象怪怪的) companies will be attracted into this area to build their factories, which may generally form an industrial center here, stimulating the economy to grow rapidly.(这里最好不要把好处说得太好,提一下就可以了,要不观点立场就不明显了)

    Even though the benefits with the construction of the factory seem so fantastic, I feel the drawbacks are majority. We can not have our inhabitants live in a polluted community with terrible environment. Neither can we have our inhabitants in noisy all day. Because of the two main factors above, I disapprove the company to set up a factory near our community.

莫莫jj写得很好涅,:D:victory: 流畅,自然 偶都挑不出毛病了:p :rolleyes:
偶就加点东西上去润色一下吧:)

flyingwindUID: 189320

Toefl Part b&c 听力分类mp3+相关资料

是2000年后的吗?

danielle84125UID: 2105176

我也来贴篇作文哈～～第一篇，好像有点乱，嘿嘿，大家多批
59.Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live lift at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


      With the development of economic, the life rhythm in many big cities is so quickly that people always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Thus, they would be more efficient to do more things and to earn more money. However, there are also many people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. So they can enjoy their life. As for me, I would like to do something that related with work and study in a hurry pace, and to stay with my family and friends I would like to take my time and enjoy the happy hour.
     As time limited, and if you want to make great profit from the business you do, time is very important for you. Like the proverb says: time is money. Hence, in case that you could do the work more efficiently, as a result, much time would be left for you to do other things which other people even could not get a chance to do them. Then you might be able to make greater benefit and earn more money. Eventually, you make a wonderful career in your life.
     On the other hand, people who living at a slower pace in their life may also make a better life for themselves. For example, a person who is on the way to his/her workplace. If he/she slow down the pace, he/she can smell the flowers beside the road, take a deep breath to taste the air and pay a little attention to the people pass by. Consequently, he/she will enjoy the beautiful world and enjoy his /her life drastically.
     Finally, our life would not always be in a hurry or at a slow pace. The most important we want is to do things more efficiently with full composure. And also as for different things, there would be different attitude. We all like to give it an end as quickly as possible when we are working and studying. While we are staying with our friends and families, there is no need to bustle up. We can doing it at a slower pace and enjoy the time.

evil1226UID: 2116532

报道，报道，不好意思，晚了很久了哈

hakeemchoiUID: 193092

原帖由 evil1226 于 2006-4-15 17:05 发表
报道，报道，不好意思，晚了很久了哈

恩　抓紧时间吧　你把你的情况先大体说说吧

evil1226UID: 2116532

去年8月考过一次，607+3.5 听力错6个阅读错两个，语法好像错了7，8个记不得；（可是这次作题感觉还没有上次好，阅读6个左右，语法还是3到5个不等，听力10个左右，PARTC都错的一片一片的，已经停了半个月不想看书了，咋办哪，5555-----

duowqUID: 196783

问道0110 38  (Different fourteen) crops were (being grown) 8,600 years (ago) by some of the world’s earliest( farmers.)  感觉对B有点迷糊, 既然是8,600 years ago了 怎么前面动词用过去进行时?  不太懂的. 请指教.

duowqUID: 196783

原帖由 evil1226 于 2006-4-15 17:25 发表
去年8月考过一次，607+3.5 听力错6个阅读错两个，语法好像错了7，8个记不得；（可是这次作题感觉还没有上次好，阅读6个左右，语法还是3到5个不等，听力10个左右，PARTC都错的一片一片的，已经停了半个月不想看书了 ...

感觉你的听力基础不错啊,我去年考8T的时候听力才考了54分, 感觉你要把语法加强下, 其他坚持的话, 应该会好些.

czj_swufeUID: 199954

原帖由 duowq 于 2006-4-15 17:26 发表
问道0110 38  (Different fourteen) crops were (being grown) 8,600 years (ago) by some of the world’s earliest( farmers.)  感觉对B有点迷糊, 既然是8,600 years ago了 怎么前面动词用过去进行时?  不太懂的 ...

汗~！我就是错了这道的...不过后来看下A错误很明显，自己太粗心了.
也说不上来