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原帖由 hakeemchoi 于 2006-4-16 00:22 发表
全体组员请注意　以后组内发作文最好附加一个ＷＯＲＤ格式　方便大家互改！！！

小C提的建议不错,这样也可以避免直接复制下来一堆乱码

小C,你还欠我一篇作文修改,你看吧,这次不改就留到下一篇:D

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

莫莫滴topic 5~

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原帖由 hakeemchoi 于 2006-4-16 00:22 发表
全体组员请注意　以后组内发作文最好附加一个ＷＯＲＤ格式　方便大家互改！！！

好方法啊, 今天晚上交一篇的说.

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原帖由 蝴蝶结 于 2006-4-16 02:33 发表
莫莫滴topic 5~

谢谢蝴蝶结了~
抱~

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原帖由 莫名N 于 2006-4-13 23:47 发表


01.05的34
有人告诉我MS题目印错了,可能是carbon-12

是Carbon-arc，真题电子书这道题好像是明明校正的~~
对不起回答晚了呢

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呵呵,大海,我用的不是GTER的真题,是那种大白本的
谢谢~

czj_swufeUID: 199954

谢谢各位了，有拍必回拍！:handshake

[ 本帖最后由 czj_swufe 于 2006-4-17 13:56 编辑 ]

duowqUID: 196783

这是TOPIC5， 交晚了。 晚上上自习再交一篇。由于水平不中， 大家尽情拍砖。 谢谢。

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[ 本帖最后由 czj_swufe 于 2006-4-17 17:38 编辑 ]

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166. People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Strictly speaking, it is a hard to pick up one exact time or event to define a critical line between children and adults, because the transition from a child to an adult is a gradual procedure. Nevertheless, if I have to choose one, I assert that the graduation ceremony from high school is favorable.

When graduating from high school, most students in China are about eighteen years old, which is the age defined in China as adults. It is reasonable because in most cases, both the physical shape and mental maturity of eighteen years old children meet tremendously those of adults according to researches and statistics. Furthermore, after this time, legally speaking, they should take the full responsibility of everything they are involved. Their supervisors (parents or teachers) have no duty on the misconducts or crime their 18 aged boys or girls has conducted. Thus, after high school students have celebrated their graduation, they are treated as adults in law.

Moreover, during the study in high school, students have learned many specialized techniques or fundamental knowledge in many realms, which will benefit their future lives as adults. After graduation, some students choose to work directly. Of course, in the social job markets, they are more treated as men or women, not boys and girls. They have to learn skills and techniques in many aspects, such as career, communication. Other high school students continue achieving higher education, for instance a master's degree. However, it does not delay their roles as adults. Colleges are also societies, but little ones. Living in college rather than home, students also learn to deal with everything, such as how to cope with the relationship between roommates, or how to improve their skills both in social communication and academic achievement. All these help them to do as adults.

In sum, graduation ceremony is more likely to be cited as a critical event which distinguish children and adults. After graduation ceremony adolescents graduating from high school are more treated as adults any more.Sample Text2

[ 本帖最后由 flyingwind 于 2006-4-17 23:35 编辑 ]

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我想更正一下小C说的关于作文发帖的意思

先把作文贴上来,然后再加个附件
修改过的文章,请直接文本回复,不要再粘贴附件

因为GTER直接复制文本有乱码的原因,所以附上个附件会比较好批改
而不是说直接贴一个附件上来.考虑到可能有些文章被修改过两三遍后,别人再提出意见可能就不会是语言上的,而是一些行文上的,那样就不用在原文上改了.

而且修改后的文章直接贴文本利于大家一起学习,就不用download那么麻烦了.XIXI,偶也懒的说~

感觉自己说的比较乱...汗...
不知道大家明白我的意思了没有
给大家添麻烦了~

[ 本帖最后由 莫名N 于 2006-4-17 19:20 编辑 ]

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原帖由 莫名N 于 2006-4-17 19:17 发表
我想更正一下小C说的关于作文发帖的意思

先把作文贴上来,然后再加个附件
修改过的文章,请直接文本回复,不要再粘贴附件

因为GTER直接复制文本有乱码的原因,所以附上个附 ...

完全理解错了！！:o

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原帖由 duowq 于 2006-4-15 22:41 发表
再问一个阅读的词汇题目啊.0110的第46题.: the word "prolific" in  line 22 is closest in meaning to    a  efficient    b   productive  c self-employed   d progressive   
这题拿不定的 , 感觉 ...

prolific~producing abundantly(from: WB)~productive
这样是不是比较好理解一点

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TOPIC 166 欢迎拍砖。

duowqUID: 196783

看见了， 收益非浅的。  由于学校网速的原因，我会尽快修改你的作文的。 互相取经啊。