同主题第5期－topic15－有拍必回！

woodygtUID: 2136751

All people live in communities, so every one has some neighbors. And form centuries ago, neighbors have become a very important part in people’s lives. Good neighbors can make your life much happier while a bad neighbor may even become your enemy and force you to move out the community. In my opinion, a good neighbor should be honest, kind heated and respecting others.

        The quality of honest may be the most important thing to all people, especially the ones who live around you everyday. Nearly all relationships are based on trust. If your neighbors are not honest and cannot get your trust, how can you leave all your things in the house while you are out? All you think that time may be whether your neighbors steal something from your house. So to be a nice neighbor, one must be honest and can get the trust of others.

        And kind hearted is another quality a good neighbor should have. As we live in the community everyday, we may sometimes meet some troubles. And a good neighbor is always kind enough to help you every time. An old Chinese saying goes,”a good neighbor is better than a relation far away”. Living with a kind hearted neighbor you will fell that your life is becoming much easier.

        And the third quality a good neighbor should have is that he/she should always respect others. We lives with our neighbors everyday, so if we cannot get respect from them, our lives can just be characterized as terrible. Imagine that you live in a place where all the others do not live you at all. Then you may never find any happiness at home.

        To sum up, good neighbors can surely improve our live quality. And honesty, kind hearted and respecting others are the signs of good neighbors, in my point of view.

这篇写的一点感觉都没有。。。

danielfeiUID: 2143290

All people live in communities, so every one has some neighbors. And form(from) centuries ago, neighbors have become a very important part in people’s lives. Good neighbors can make your life much happier while a bad neighbor may even become your enemy and force you to move out the community. In my opinion, a good neighbor should be honest, kind heated and respecting others.
(不错！开门见山，我觉得可以借鉴一下模版上句式更加多变一点)The quality of honest may be the most important thing to all people, especially the ones who live around you everyday. Nearly all relationships are based on trust. If your neighbors are not honest and cannot get your trust, how can you leave all your things in the house while you are out? All you think that time may be whether your neighbors steal something from your house.（这句话好象有语法错误） So（consequently）, to be a nice neighbor, one must be honest and can get the trust of others.(在这问一个问题ONE可以怎么用？)And kind hearted is another quality a good neighbor should have. As we live in the community everyday, we may sometimes meet some troubles. And a good neighbor is always kind enough to help you every time. An old Chinese saying goes, ”a good neighbor is better than a relation far away”.（这句话美国人能看懂吗？应为relatives relation通常都是男女朋友的意思吧）Living with a kind hearted neighbor you will fell that your life is becoming much easier.|留
And the third quality a good neighbor should have is that he/she（是否是正规文体） should always respect others. We lives with our neighbors everyday, so if we cannot get respect from them, our lives can just be characterized as terrible. Imagine that you live in a place where all the others do not live （respect）you at all. Then you may never find any happiness at home.0_o   
To sum up, good neighbors can surely improve our live quality. And honesty, kind hearted and respecting others are the signs of good neighbors, in my point of view.
总体来说还可以，总觉得有些不够充实~

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