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13. Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the adage says, ”where there are a hundred audiences, there are a hundred Hamlets,” every person has the primary right to choose what is him(his)/her favor. So it appears ordinary and reasonable that some people prefer to prepare their food at home, and others prefer to enjoy their meals in a restaurant, especially in a modern city. For me, a citizen of 21st century, I would like to have my food at stands or restaurants.
表明观点，你要出去吃。
First of all, it is indubitable that eating outsides instead of home brings about lots of convenience. What a man should do at a restaurant is simply(just) to look over the menu, order the dishes(好像不要the,你再查一下), and then enjoy himself. Moreover, you could never be caught up in the boring (of/about i'm not sure) preparing works such as shopping, cuttings, frying, stewing, washing, etc., if you do not choose to cook food at home. Consequently, it may save you a great amount of time, energy, and perhaps as well as money, which plays a significant role in a modern rush life style.
理由一，比自己做方便。
Secondly, it makes eating outside possible that you could taste a various flavors all over the world. Due to the fully development of the society and community, there are so many restaurants providing sorts of food from every region of the world that your appetite would be stimulated unceasingly. Compared with eating at home, a consumer would experience myriad of customs and flavors at restaurants, for example, the Chinese cuisine, Italia pizza and Japanese sushi(什么东东，没吃过), which are not able to cook by one chef. In addition, most restaurants are not far away from the residence sites or even available in your neighborhood, which make your diets much more satisfactory.
理由二，可以吃遍天下。
The last but not least, eating outdoors may promote your mood or give you a mental pleasure. Engaged in a busy career or tedious housework, nearly all guys, like me, look forward to something comfortable. If one prefers to prepare the food himself at home with an exhausted body from work, you can imagine how bad his spirit will be. Why not choose an easy way to release yourself from the mess of kitchen and enjoy your candle dinner.
理由三，在外面吃感觉很爽。例子好像与理由一有些重复。最后一句挺好。
In conclusion, if I am asked whether to eat at restaurants or at home, I will prefer the former resolutely in order to lead a convenient, multiplex, and relaxed life.
总结，很好。
总体感觉不错，有理有据，条理清晰。
我提出的几处是我凭自己的语感改的，不一定对，你参考一下，如果有错，要说出来，也当帮我改错了。:victory:
最后说一下，我觉得T的作文题目很无聊，不像G的题目有深度，好展开。
我个人觉得不太好写。
ps: 我想在哪吃饭，它(ETS)也要管？一帮无聊的人。;P |
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楼主: genie05
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