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发表于 2006-8-10 15:32:21 |显示全部楼层

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文章我给你改了,可是你的帖子被封了,我只好发在这里啦:lol
It is common that in our daily life, some people complain that they do not know how to choose from so many alternatives; some people, however, claim that they have no choice in many cases. In my opinion, I agree with the speaker's view, that the absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare, and the most frequent problem we face is how to make a choice.(有转移话题的嫌疑哦)

Through out our everyday's life(可以直接说everyday life), we are making choices at(in) every minute. Every morning when we open our eyes, we begin to make choices: how to dress? What to have for breakfast? When we are at school, we are facing a lot of multiple(a lot of 和multiple意思上有些重复) choices in the exercises. When we go to work, we have to decide which way to(->is) the best to reach the goal. When we come to the age of marriage, who to marry is another important choice. Such small or big choices are full of our life(颠倒了). In another word, it is those choices that compose our life and make it difficult but colorful. Even when we want to avoid them, it is nothing but impossible.

Admittedly, we can often hear that someone complain that they have no choice but to do so(这里的so没有指代的对象). However, is it true that they have no choice? Close scrutiny of these situation, we can find that it is not that there are no more choices existing but they do not want to admit the existence of other choices. Let's analyze the situation from two aspects.

A threshold situation is that they are forced to choose the certain way by (->under)the outside pressure so that these circumstances become the absence of choice. It is often heard that a miss of a glorious family is miserable to accept the determined choice that she has to marry a millionaire who she does not love at all because of the benefit of family. For her, she may have no more choice because of the pressure of family.(这个例子太中国化了吧) However, in another sense, she actually has another choice—refusing to accept the regulated marriage, yet for most of her limit of courage, this choice is ignored often.

Moreover, there is another situation that the responsibility or convincement(有这个词吗) which(is) solid in their heart decide their great behaviors. I just heard a story about one of the Chinese Pride in 2005, who saved 11 persons from the big fire but was seriously hurt himself(语法不对). When the reporter interviewed this common worker later, he said he had no choice but to rush into the fire sea because it is everyone's responsibility to help others. Those simple words, however, represent the psychology of majority of people who give the hand to others when it is in emergence. They have another choice to stay away and not to care of(about) others, but they give up this and leave themselves the only choice. This absence of choice is worth to praise a lot.

In summary, from what have been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the absence of choice is indeed rare. Those exceptions have their special reasons which should be understood clearly. What we should do is to learn how to make a wise choice. The more important we should know is that some situation of no choice is rare but great.
你的开头结尾都用的模板的说,我写托福作文时用的和你的是一样的,也不知道这样好不好
文章条理清晰,不过我觉得你写那种特殊情况时举的例子不是很合适啊.呵呵
一起加油:D

[ 本帖最后由 cpuliuwen 于 2006-8-10 15:33 编辑 ]

即使遇到不如意，也要善待自己，善待父母，朋友，我们每一个人都是为爱而生的.

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