关于ARGUMENT
我觉得ARGU是中国学生永远不要放弃的,因为这个是最容易拿分的。我问了一些在短时间里面备考作文取得高分的同学,他们都告诉我说一定要把ARGU抓好,ISSUE如果写不好关系不是太大,但是如果ARGU没有写好,那就亏大了。
写ARGU,我想先举个题目,这个是我自己编造的,并不代表我的立场。
The following comes from a memo of the vice president of the HUST Logistic Group:
"Five months ago, we increase the average price of rice in all the canteens in HUST. And two months ago, we adopt the agreement of the board to impose a fee on the plastic bag that was used to be given to the customer without charge.After that, complaints and discontent of the customers accumulate and become more and more strong. According to a survey conducted recently by the student union, 87% of the respondents show their discontent to the Logistic Group. To pacify the students, we should reduce the average price of rice to the former level, and continue providing free plastic bags for our students. Thus, our popularity among the students will certainly ascend, and a larger profit will follow."
这段论述里面有好几个明显的错误:1、到底是哪个原因造成客户的不满意还不知道;2、偷换概念,客户->学生;3、调查有问题,值得怀疑;4、降价送袋子能否使得学生满意;5、受欢迎度是否会提高,还是个问题;6、能否获得更大赢利仍然是个问题。
这些都是ARGU里面经常出现的逻辑错误。当然,还有错误类比。很多人以为满意度就是受欢迎度,其实不然,试想,你做的事情别人满意,你就获得了满意度,但是你的受欢迎程度不一定高。你在别人眼中可能还是比较平凡,但是你有较高的受欢迎程度就不同了。不要担心没有错误可以找,里面的错误足够你批驳的。