幫幫忙~~~翻譯短文

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Bill Gates is the head of Microsoft,which he co-found in the 70s. However, it was only when Microsoft stock when Microsoft stock prices soared in the 90s that he became the world richest billionaire. Warren Buffett is an American businessman who learned the tricks to great wealth through wise investing. By doing so , he became the world's second wealthiest billionaire.
翻得不是很順~~~幫幫忙
別用翻譯軟體~~~感謝

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比尔盖茨，微软的领导人-于上世纪七十年代合伙建立此公司。然而，当微软股票价额在二十世纪九十年代猛升时，他成为为了世界上最富有的亿万富翁。沃伦巴菲特是一位了解通过投资获得巨额财富诀窍的商人。由于这点，他成为了世界上第二富有的人。

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There is no such a rule that you have to use the same number of full stops as the original. Try to break one long sentence into several short ones. That will make your translation more fluent.

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謝謝~~~雖然你跟我翻得差不多~~還是感謝你喔!

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? I didn't translate anything. You don't need to thank me for nothing:)

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我回錯了~~~是第一位大大啦