Issue48 <米国有米第三次作业>

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Issue 48
提纲：
    同意作者观点
1．不能否认名人之所以出名是因为他们在历史上所做出的贡献，
2．但是，不是名人缔造了历史而是广大的人民群众，从社会改革，技术进步，文学艺术三个方面论证

I agree with the speaker's viewpoint that not the famous few but groups of people made the most significant events and trends possible in history. Although many famous people made great contribution to the progress of society and they deserve to be immortalized by history, by carefully analyzing some important history events, we would find that ,in fact ,it is the thousands of ordinary people ultimately made these events. From social revolution to development of technology, from Asia to Europe, North America, a large number of examples can aptly illustrate this point.

Admittedly, the great figures played significant roles in the making of history. Maybe they are political leaderships who are renowned for they leaded or encouraged significant wars or reforms which changed the course of the history greatly. They include Zedong Mao, Xiaoping Deng in China, Lincoln Abraham in America, Winston Churchill in England. Maybe they are distinguished scientists being famous resulting from they presented new theories or invented new products which promoted the development of technology such as James Watt, Isaac Newton. Maybe they are artists whose masterpieces were passed by from one generation to another generation including Leonardo Da Vinci, Michaelangelo and so on. In short, whoever they were and whatever they did, they are famous for the contribution they made in the history.

However, the great figures can not make the significant events and trends available alone. For instance, Zhedong Mao,the 1st chairman of P.R.China, was known and respected by almost every Chinese and the status of him stand in many public places such as plaza, university. The supreme efforts of Zhedong Mao in the foundation of P.R.China based on social democracy principle can never be estimated. But, it is apparent that the attainment of social democracy would have been impossible without the sacrifices of the martyrs on the batter field and the advocating social democracy of some ideologists through their works. Yet, But these brave people rarely were mentioned in the history text book. In the realm of social revolution, there are various similar examples all over the world, such as America civil war, World War II which were made by the huge amount of publicity.

In the science and technology fields, great inventions and reform that changed the world were the results of all the members of groups who have sparked revolutions .For instance, James Watt was considered a famous figure in “Industrial Revolution”. Indeed, Watt played an important role in this revolution because he made fundamental improvements in the steam engine. But without the support from thousands of engineers, inventors, enterprisers, works, and populaces who applied widely this new machinery in the manufacture of products, “Industrial Revolution” can not spread all over the word and became a milestone in the development of society.

In the realm of art, we would find similar examples. Take renaissance for example, it was not only the famous ones but thousands of the philosophers and painters that caused this movement.

In sum, we can not neglect the influence the famous ones made in the history, but we should cognize that it was the group efforts of people that made the crucial events and trends in history possible.

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I agree with the speaker's viewpoint that not the famous few but groups of people made the most significant events and trends possible in history. Although many famous people made great contribution to the progress of society and they deserve to be immortalized by history, by carefully analyzing some important history events, we would find that ,in fact ,it is the thousands of ordinary people ultimately made[不觉得有点绝对了吗] these events. From social revolution to development of technology, from Asia to Europe, North America, a large number of examples can aptly illustrate this point.

Admittedly, the great figures played[play] significant roles in the making of history. Maybe they are political leaderships who are renowned for[for后跟完整句子,这是口语中才有的情况或后面原因显而易见,况且要搁句首,换个词吧] they leaded or encouraged significant wars or reforms which changed the course of the history greatly. They include Zedong Mao, Xiaoping Deng in China, Lincoln Abraham in America, Winston Churchill in England. Maybe they are distinguished scientists being famous resulting from they presented new theories or invented new products which promoted the development of technology such as James Watt, Isaac Newton. Maybe they are artists whose masterpieces were passed by from one generation to another generation including Leonardo Da Vinci, Michaelangelo and so on. In short, whoever they were and whatever they did, they are famous for the contribution they made in the history.

However, the great figures can not make the significant events and trends available alone. For instance, Zhedong Mao,the 1st chairman of P.R.China, was known and respected by almost every Chinese and the status of him stand in many public places such as plaza, university. The supreme efforts of Zhedong Mao in the foundation of P.R.China based on social democracy principle can never be estimated. But, it is apparent that the attainment of social democracy would have been impossible without the sacrifices of the martyrs on the batter field and the advocating social democracy of some ideologists through their works. Yet, But these brave people rarely were mentioned in the history text book. In the realm of social revolution, there are various similar examples all over the world, such as America civil war, World War II which were made by the huge amount of publicity.

In the science and technology fields, great inventions and reform that changed the world were the results of all the members of groups who have sparked revolutions .For instance, James Watt was considered a famous figure in “Industrial Revolution”. Indeed, Watt played an important role in this revolution because he made fundamental improvements in the steam engine. But without the support from thousands of engineers, inventors, enterprisers, works, and populaces who applied widely this new machinery in the manufacture of products, “Industrial Revolution” can not spread all over the word and became a milestone in the development of society.

In the realm of art, we would find similar examples. Take renaissance for example, it was not only the famous ones but thousands of the philosophers and painters that caused this movement.

说具体点,拿例子

In sum, we can not neglect the influence the famous ones made in the history, but we should cognize that it was the group efforts of people that made the crucial events and trends in history possible.

分析的很好,句子很不错,再接再厉