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[i习作temp] Issue103 Synergy第十一次作业(yangxuan),欢迎来拍! [复制链接]

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发表于 2006-12-25 10:39:51 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
Issue103:"The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."

Is the study of history valuable only insofar as it is relevant to our daily life? Indeed, history can actively influence the common life. However, we should not underestimate the great power of history and just confine its use to daily life; actually, the study of history offers/gives/provides individuals courage and spirits, and help people avoid mistakes- both of which help us determine our lives.

History provides conventional customs and beliefs which are well established by our ancestors and have a profound influence on our daily life. Due to the historical reasons, a variety of rituals, ceremonies and festivals were preserved and handed down from generation to generation, as aptly illustrated by the celebration of the Christmas-Santa Claus, the Saint Valentine’s Day, the Thanksgiving’s Day, the National Day and so forth. Also, only through history can we understand the belief of a family formed with time, the power of a genius in the past, and even the influence of technological innovation. In one sense, studying history, which offers the unique extensive evidential bases, can help us more easily understand not only the customs but also our daily life.  

Besides, history can provide individuals great moral spirits, especially when they are bogged down in troubles. A study of demonstrable heroes, the great men and women who successfully worked through moral dilemmas and more ordinary individuals, who presented the precious merits of human nature (e.g., confidence, persistence, diligence, courage, and constructive protest),  gives individuals great encouragement; that is , whatever the business might be, learning about the past can help us come through the everyday of business.

Moreover, the study of history may help people in current society avoid mistakes committed by ancestors. Take the military for example, by studying lessons of the wars in the history, the wartime generals would avoid mistakes for which the former has failed and therefore make a more efficient and effective strategy. Also consider a work composed by Sun Tzu who is an ancient Chinese author -" the art of war", which influence lots of military commanders and even business leaders. It allows them to operate more appropriately and more effectively. Therefore, history lessons are vivid and will always admonish us not to make mistakes.

In sum, the speaker’s recognition about history should be broadened: history not only exerts a profound influence on the daily life, but also brings about moral spirits and alertness to failure.


[ 本帖最后由 yangxuan 于 2006-12-25 10:43 编辑 ]
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发表于 2006-12-25 11:14:10 |只看该作者
写的很流畅啊,不错
但是我觉得第四段写军事是否不是很合适,貌似有一点好战分子之嫌,万一批改文章的是个和平主义者怎么办?美国人好象都挺反对战争的

有空也拍拍我的啊,呵呵

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发表于 2006-12-25 12:36:10 |只看该作者
语言的确很流畅
但内容我觉得有跑题之嫌
题目我觉得重点是讨论与日常生活无关的历史到底有没有用,通篇没体现
第一段举的一些传统的节日,与历史有什么关系?也可能我们对“历史”的定义不同
至于楼上的说法,完全没有那个担心的必要,你的担心实际上是个逻辑错误,叫什么来着我不记得,就是“对人不对事”的错误
建议以后发帖把提纲也贴出来(中文),这样便于理解些

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发表于 2006-12-25 12:49:05 |只看该作者

回复 #3 christain 的帖子

好久不见你露面了
也没看你交作业啊
有空也拍拍我的 谢谢

BTW,传统节日不属于对历史的研究范围之内吗?传统文化的起源与发展本来就应该属于历史研究的范畴啊

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发表于 2006-12-25 13:21:40 |只看该作者
好的
最近要期末考试,导师也布置了任务,有点忙
你的“向牛人和斑竹门请教issue破题问题”,我谈了点我的看法,你去看看
yangxuan ,刚看了下pooh的百宝箱,你里面有不少东西是取自那里的哦
呵呵,考试时可不能的哟

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发表于 2006-12-25 19:35:15 |只看该作者
pooh的百宝箱?我没听说过,但我后两段确实是从别处弄来后修改的,具体哪的不记得了,可否告诉一下,谢谢!

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Issue103:"The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."

Is the study of history valuable only insofar as it is relevant to our daily life? Indeed, history can actively influence the common life. However, we should not underestimate the great power of history and just confine its use to daily life; actually, the study of history offers/gives/provides individuals courage and spirits, and help people avoid mistakes- both of which help us determine our lives.

History provides conventional customs and beliefs which are well established by our ancestors and have a profound influence on our daily life. Due to the historical reasons, a variety of rituals, ceremonies and festivals were preserved and handed down from generation to generation, as aptly illustrated by the celebration of the Christmas-Santa Claus, the Saint Valentine’s Day, the Thanksgiving’s Day, the National Day and so forth. Also, only through history can we understand the belief of a family formed with time, the power of a genius in the past, and even the influence of technological innovation.
(
这里说到基本上都是传统的延续和保持,但是好像他们如何影响人们的日常生活并没有具体提到,比如节日庆祝现在人们是怎么过的,家庭观念的维持人们现在怎么看待家庭等等,我想如果能更具体一点是否会更好?)
In one sense, studying history, which offers the unique extensive evidential bases, can help us more easily understand not only the customs but also our daily life.  

Besides, history can provide individuals great
moral spirits (spiritual power), especially when they are bogged down in troubles. A study of demonstrable heroes(
什么意思), the great men and women who successfully worked through moral dilemmas and more some other ordinary individuals, who presented the precious merits of human nature (e.g., confidence, persistence, diligence, courage, and constructive protest),  gives individuals great encouragement; that is , whatever the business might be, learning about the past can help us come through the everyday of business (daily affair).你这一段用一个研究结果来证明论点是挺好的主意,但是读下来总觉得力度弱了些,也许是觉得说的太泛了些.


Moreover, the study of history may help people in current society avoid mistakes committed by ancestors.
Take (taking) the military (action) for example, by studying lessons of the wars in the history, the wartime generals would avoid mistakes for (in)  which the former has failed and therefore make a more efficient and effective strategy. Also consider a work composed by Sun Tzu who is an ancient Chinese author -" the art of war", which influence lots of military commanders and even business leaders. (这个例子好像北美范文上也有,是不是应该慎用?)It allows them to operate(少了宾语,这里) more appropriately and more effectively. Therefore, history lessons are vivid and will always admonish us not to make mistakes.

In sum, the speaker’s recognition about history should be broadened: history not only exerts a profound influence on the daily life, but also brings
about
(去掉)moral spirits and alertness for usto (overcome the) failure.


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