【0706G － CSMY作文互改小组大帖】

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备考第五周－周3(01.24.07)---第八次作业
本次写作的大类：政治[飞跃分类7、17]

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【题目1】
Issue70 [总频69]
"In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership."
【翻译】
在任何领域中——商业、政治、教育、政府——掌权者应该在五年后就让位。这是任何机构获得成的最好的方式：通过更新领导者而保持活力。

【题目2】
Issue43 [总频87]
"To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."
【翻译】
一个公仆如果想成为一位杰出的领导者就必须保持最高的伦理和道德标准。

参考资料
0610G同主题写作第五期——Issue43

提纲作业：ISSUE46、165
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【题目】
Argument137
137.The following appeared in an editorial in the Mason City newspaper.
"At present, Mason City residents seldom use the nearby Mason River for any kind of recreational activity, even though surveys of the region's residents consistently rank water sports (swimming, fishing, and boating) as a favorite form of recreation. Since there have been complaints about the quality of the water in the river, residents must be avoiding the river because they think that it is not clean enough. But that situation is about to change: the agency responsible for rivers in our region has announced plans to clean up Mason River. Therefore, recreational use of the river is likely to increase, so the Mason City council will need to increase its budget for improvements to the publicly owned lands along the Mason River."
当前，Mason市很少利用附近的Mason河来进行娱乐活动，尽管对该地区居的几次调查一直指出他们把水上运动（游泳、垂钓和划船）作为他们最喜欢的娱乐形式。由于曾经存在对于这条河水质的投诉，居一定是因为他们认为河水不够干净才不在这里活动。但这种情况就会改变了：我们地区负责河流管理的部门公布了澄清Mason河的计划。因此，河流的娱乐用途很可能将会增加，因而Mason市的市委有必要增加用于改善Mason河沿岸公共土地的预算。

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备考第五周－周5(01.26.07)---第九次作业
本次写作的大类：政治[飞跃分类17]

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【题目1】
Issue208 [总频89]
"The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."
【翻译】
人们的眼神、穿着和动作都揭示了他们的态度和兴趣。你可以透过观察一个社会中人们的外貌和举止来认识该社会的理念和价值观。

【题目2】
Issue160 [总频64]
"The most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little."
【翻译】
对于一位强有力的领导者来说，最关键的能力就是要对一些原则和目标坚定不移。任何领导如果很频繁的、很轻易的为大众意志而转移的话，他将会一事无成。

参考资料
0510G同主题写作第十八期－－Issue208

提纲作业：ISSUE108、167、8
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Argument38 [总频53]
38.The following memo appeared in the newsletter of the West Meria Public Health Council.
"An innovative treatment has come to our attention that promises to significantly reduce absenteeism in our schools and workplaces. A study reports that in nearby East Meria, where fish consumption is very high, people visit the doctor only once or twice per year for the treatment of colds. Clearly, eating a substantial amount of fish can prevent colds. Since colds are the reason most frequently given for absences from school and work, we recommend the daily use of Ichthaid, a nutritional supplement derived from fish oil, as a good way to prevent colds and lower absenteeism."
我们注意到一种保证可以显著减少学校和工作岗位的缺席的革新疗法。一项研究报告说在附近的East Meria，鱼的消费量很高，那里的人们每年因为治感冒而去看医生的次数只有一或两次。显然，吃较大量的鱼可以预防感冒。由于感冒是学校和单位缺席的最常见原因，我们建议每天服用Ichthaid，一种从鱼油中提炼的营养物质，作为预防感冒和减少缺席率的有效措施。




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备考第六周－周1(01.29.07)---第十次作业
本次写作的大类：政治[飞跃分类17]

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【题目1】
Issue121[总频64]
121 "At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species."
【翻译】
在过去不同的地质时期，很多物种的灭绝都是自然因素造成，而并非人类行为。所以，社会没有理由花费很大的人力物力去拯救濒临灭绝的物种。

【题目2】
Issue83 [总频102]
83 "Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."
【翻译】
政府应该保护那些疆域范围内的偏远地带，保持他们的原始状态，尽管这些地区一般来说非常偏僻，很少有人能够到达。
提纲作业：ISSUE195，149

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Argument140 [总频54]
140.The following appeared in a report of the Committee on Faculty
Promotions and Salaries at Elm City University.

"During her seventeen years as a professor of botany, Professor Thomas has
proved herself to be well worth her annual salary of $50,000. Her classes
are among the largest at the university, demonstrating her popularity
among students. Moreover, the money she has brought to the university in
research grants has exceeded her salary in each of the last two years.
Therefore, in consideration of Professor Thomas' demonstrated teaching and
research abilities, we recommend that she receive a $10,000 raise and a
promotion to Department Chairperson; without such a raise and promotion,
we fear that Professor Thomas will leave Elm City University for another
college."
【翻译】
在Thomas教授作为植物学教授的17年里，她证明了自己确实是值50000元年薪的。她的班级是本校最大的班级之一，这说明她在学生中间的受欢迎度。而且，她给学校带来的研究捐助在过去两年中都超过了她的年薪。因此，鉴于Thomas教授已被证实的教学和研究能力，我们建议将她的年薪增加10000元，并提升为系主任；如果没有这些加薪和提升，我们担心Thomas教授将会离开Elm City大学到别的学校就职。

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备考第六周－周3(01..031)---第十一次作业本次写作的大类：艺术，学习，媒体

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【题目1】
Issue144[总频152]
144 "It is the artist, not the critic,* who gives society something of lasting value." *a person who evaluates works of art, such as novels, films, music, paintings, etc. " [05/75; 06/11]
【翻译】
是艺术家而不是批评家，带给社会一些具有持久价值的东西。*批评家指经常评价艺术作品，例如小说、电影、音乐、绘画等的人。。

【题目2】
Issue47 [总频88]
47 "Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect-that is, on reasoning and
other cognitive skills." [05/47; 06/4]
【翻译】
社会对于智力还是重视不够，比如推理和认知的能力。

提纲作业：ISSUE85=101 96 131 143 144 176 190 218 243(艺术)
                ISSUE 28 86 183 205 226 14 47 112（学习）
                ISSUE: 29 60=103 74 109 161 215（媒体）

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Argument180 [总频41]
180.The following is a recommendation from the personnel director to the
president of Acme Publishing Company.

"Many other companies have recently stated that having their employees
take the Easy Read Speed-Reading Course has greatly improved productivity.
One graduate of the course was able to read a five-hundred-page report in
only two hours; another graduate rose from an assistant manager to vice
president of the company in under a year. Obviously, the faster you can
read, the more information you can absorb in a single workday. Moreover,
Easy Read costs only $500 per employee-a small price to pay when you
consider the benefits to Acme. Included in this fee is a three-week
seminar in Spruce City and a lifelong subscription to the Easy Read
newsletter. Clearly, Acme would benefit greatly by requiring all of our
employees to take the Easy Read course."
【翻译】

很多其他公司最近指出他们的员工参加了Easy
Read的速读课程之后生产效率显著提高。这个课程的一名毕业生能够在两个小时之内读完长达500页的报告，另一名毕业生在一年内从助理经理上升到了副总裁。显然，你的阅读速度越快，在一天之内所能吸收的信息就越多。而且，Easy
Read的学费只有每人500元，当考虑到它给Acme带来的效益的时候这就是个小数目。这个费用包括在Spruce
City举行的为期三周的研讨会和Easy Read新闻刊物的终生赠阅。显然，Acme通过要求所有员工参加Easy Read的课程将会极大地受益。

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备考第六周－周5(02..02)---第十二次作业
本次写作的大类：现代学习和研究：传统vs新技术

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【题目1】
Issue38[总频106]
38 "In the age of television, reading books is not as important as it once was. People can learn as much by watching television as they can by reading books."
【翻译】
在电视机时代，阅读书籍已经没有原来那样重要了。人们从电视上学到的东西丝毫不比从书本中学来的少。

【题目2】
Issue7 [总频82]
7 "The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."
【翻译】
数码相机可以精确、令人信服地记录当代人们的生活，作为一种记录方式，它的重要性已经超过了纸笔记录。

提纲作业：Mode of study and research:tradition V.S. new technology: 38 155 237 7

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Argument51 [总频65]
51.The following appeared in a medical newsletter.
"Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some
patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain. This hypothesis
has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of two groups of
patients. The first group of patients, all being treated for muscle
injuries by Dr. Newland, a doctor who specializes in sports medicine, took
antibiotics regularly throughout their treatment. Their recuperation time
was, on average, 40 percent quicker than typically expected. Patients in
the second group, all being treated by Dr. Alton, a general physician,
were given sugar pills, although the patients believed they were taking
antibiotics. Their average recuperation time was not significantly
reduced. Therefore, all patients who are diagnosed with muscle strain
would be well advised to take antibiotics as part of their treatment."

【翻译】
医生长期以来怀疑严重肌肉扭伤后的二次感染妨碍了一些患者迅速康复。这一假说现在被一项对两组患者的研究的初步结果所证实。第一组患者全部由专攻运动医学的Dr.
Newland治疗肌肉损伤，他们在疗程中经常服用抗生素。他们的康复期平均比通常预期的快40％。第二组患者由综合医师Dr.
Alton治疗，他们被给予糖丸，而患者相信他们在服用抗生素。他们的平均康复时间没有明显缩短。因此，任何被确诊为肌肉损伤的患者应被建议服用抗生素作为辅助治疗。
实验组的人：性别，年龄，生理特征
副作用

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作业

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备考第六周－周日(02..04)---第十三次作业
本次写作的大类：社会类
====================Issue======================
【题目1】
Issue36[总频132]
NO.36  历史与人"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries."   
【翻译】
个人的伟大只能通过后来人而不是同时代的人来评价。

【题目2】
Issue185[总频114]
NO.185  媒体  "Scandals -- whether in politics, academia, or other areas -- can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
【翻译】
丑闻，不管是政治、学术还是其他领域可能有用.它们吸引人们注意，而这点是任何发言人和改革家都办不到的。
提纲作业：Sotial phenomenon: 56 152 185   203  93 136 36=241
====================Argument===================
【题目】
Argument200 [总频50]

200.Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. This evidence suggests that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male consumer and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients.

从牙医那里获得的统计数据表明在看牙医时男性昏厥的次数是女性的三倍。这一证据说明男性在接受牙科治疗时比女性更容易感到痛楚。因此，那些做广告来吸引患者的牙医应该定位于男性顾客，并同时强调他们的麻醉技术和他们的职员对于紧张和痛苦患者的敏感度。

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