【0706G － CSMY作文互改小组大帖】

浮华如烟UID: 113618

===============题目链接帖===============
备考第三周－周4(01.10.07)---第四次作业
本次写作的大类：科技

====================Issue======================
【题目1】
Issue41
"Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology, fortune-telling, and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science."
【翻译】
研究界的一些非主流领域，比如星象学、占卜术和意念及超自然探索，在社会中起到了很重要的作用，因为它们满足了人们无法从主流科学获得的需求。
Issue69
【题目2】
"Government should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development"
【翻译】
政府应该少限制科学研究和发展。


提纲作业：ISSUE40,ISSUE61,ISSUE119,ISSUE184请一并附在文章后面！

====================Argument===================
【题目】
Argument2
The following appeared in a letter sent by a committee of homeowners from the Deerhaven Acres to all homeowners in Deerhaven Acres.
"Seven years ago, homeowners in nearby Brookville community adopted a set of restrictions on how the community's yards should be landscaped and what colors the exteriors of homes should be painted. Since then, average property values have tripled in Brookville. In order to raise property values in Deerhaven Acres, we should adopt our own set of restrictions on landscaping and housepainting."
七年前，附近的Brookville社区的业主实施了一系列关于该社区的庭院应如何布置以及房屋应涂何种颜色的规定。从那以后，Brookville的地产平均价格翻了三番。为使Deerhaven Acres的地产升值，我们也应该对于景观和房屋涂色实施自己的规定。

[ 本帖最后由 浮华如烟 于 2007-1-16 02:00 编辑 ]

yuanyuangreUID: 2290966

:)

yiran27UID: 2201423

晓得拉,这两天考了四门,累死了,一个星期过了望门课,过着非人的生活.实在是.....已经跟组长请过假了,马上写啊,不好意思哈!!

[ 本帖最后由 yiran27 于 2007-1-12 20:05 编辑 ]

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hehe 晓得拉 我不着急 就是怕错过了 你写好后给我QQ留言吧 嘿嘿

lyuzheUID: 2273307

我的第三次作业是不是你改呢？敬请有空时指教 呵呵

askmeUID: 2264776

我3月6日的作文，现在加入还来得及吗？谢谢大家了。

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我3.16 ，可否考虑再建一个小组

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浮华如烟UID: 113618

===============题目链接帖===============
备考第四周－周1(01.15.07)---第五次作业
本次写作的大类：科技

====================Issue======================
【题目1】
Issue31
"Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial."
【翻译】
花在研究上的资金基本上都是不错的投资，即使研究的结果是有争议的
提示结合issue44一起准备

【题目2】
Issue177
"The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes."
【翻译】
对于一门学科的研究会改变我们对世界的看法。在学习这门学科之后，我们看到的世界一如既往，但是我们本身的角度和眼光已然不同。
知识对于人类的影响

提纲作业：ISSUE142,ISSUE168请一并附在文章后面！

====================Argument===================
【题目】
Argument47
Scientists studying historical weather patterns have discovered that in the mid-sixth century, Earth suddenly became significantly cooler. Although few historical records survive from that time, some accounts found both in Asia and Europe mention a dimming of the sun and extremely cold temperatures. Either a huge volcanic eruption or a large meteorite colliding with Earth could have created a large dust cloud throughout Earth's atmosphere that would have been capable of blocking enough sunlight to lower global temperatures significantly. A large meteorite collision, however, would probably create a sudden bright flash of light, and no extant historical records of the time mention such a flash. Some surviving Asian historical records of the time, however, mention a loud boom that would be consistent with a volcanic eruption. Therefore, the cooling was probably caused by a volcanic eruption.
研究历史上气候变化的学者发现在六世纪中叶，地球突然变冷了很多。尽管那个时期很少有历史记录被保存下来，一些在亚洲和欧洲所发现的记录提到了太阳变暗和极度的寒冷。要么是巨大的火山喷发，要么是撞击地球的大型小行星导致地球大气形成一大片尘埃云层，这阻止了一定的阳光导致全球温度显著下降。然而，大型小行星的撞击可能产生突然的强闪光，而现存的那时的历史记录中没有提到过这样的闪光。然而那时遗留下来的一些亚洲历史纪录提到过与一次火山喷发相一致的巨大隆隆声。因此，那时的温度下降多半是火山喷发导致的。

浮华如烟UID: 113618

===============题目链接帖===============
备考第四周－周4(01.19.07)---第六次作业
本次写作的大类：科技

====================Issue======================
【题目1】
Issue87
"In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries."
【翻译】
在所有的研究领域中，新手要比专家更有可能获得重要的发现。


【题目2】
Issue4
"No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
【翻译】
在任何一个研究领域当中，除非有该领域之外的人引进他们的知识和经验，否则该领域就很难获得巨大的发展。

提纲作业：科技类的剩余提纲

====================Argument===================
【题目】
Argument45
45.The following appeared as an editorial in a wildlife journal.
"Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic region. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of a year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed, and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the decline in arctic deer populations is the result of deer being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea."
北极鹿生活在加拿大极地区域的岛屿上。它们全年都通过冰块在岛屿间移动来寻找食物。它们的栖居地局限在那些温暖得足以维持它们所需的植物生长，并且在一年的至少某些时候冷到足以让岛屿间的海面结冰以使它们能够在岛屿间旅行的地方。然而，根据当地猎人的报告，鹿的数量正在下降。由于这一报告正好与最近导致海洋冰面融化的全球变暖趋势同时发生，我们可以得出结论：北极鹿数量的下降是它们无法按它们原有的迁移习惯穿越结冰海面的结果。



[ 本帖最后由 浮华如烟 于 2007-1-19 02:46 编辑 ]

siyuandingUID: 2154137

lonix 于 2007-01-19 18:35:06 在他的信中提到
GRE第三组的兄弟们，请抓紧最后的时间

我不知道大家是什么原因，或者是退却，或者是惰性，或者真的是其他重要的事情缠身，使得大家不能如期完成作业。

当然，我不是批评更不是指责，而是尽我小组长的一些义务，督促大家完成最后的冲刺。我还是想援引大贴中的一句话：

“一个人的生命应当这样度过:当他回首往事的时候不会因虚度年华而悔恨,也不会因碌碌无为而羞愧!”---- 保尔柯.察金

来鼓励大家继续奋斗，ＧＲＥ真的不是什么，我们看重的不是分数，而是我们确确实实地在这路上走了一遭，结果固然重要，

但是这个奋斗过程却比分数更重要。

希望大家能咬紧牙关，再苦再累也就这几天了！

好感动呀！从现在起，我更应倍加努力！ :mad:

[ 本帖最后由 siyuanding 于 2007-1-20 14:25 编辑 ]

siyuandingUID: 2154137

浮华如烟同学近期因为科研上的任务，所以比较忙，大组作业布置的任务就暂由我来安排。最近本组状况低迷，希望组内有能之士能带领大家共渡难关，多组织几次讨论，多改几篇作文，充分发扬互帮互助、同甘共苦的精神。组是大家共建的组，每个人都出一份力，大组的成长就会更健康，拜托了！亟盼大组初建的辉煌！

===============题目链接帖===============
备考第五周－周1(01.22.07)---第七次作业 [从本周起，我们将加快作业布置的进度]
本次写作的大类：科技[飞跃分类11]

====================Issue======================
【题目1】
Issue88 [总频67]
"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."
【翻译】
技术不仅仅影响而且实际上是决定了社会传统和道德规范。

【题目2】
Issue150 [总频70]
"Because of television and worldwide computer connections, people can now become familiar with a great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete."
【翻译】
由于电视和全球范围内的计算机网络，人们现在可以熟悉很多以前从未涉足过的地方。其结果就是使得旅游变得过时了。

提纲作业：ISSUE30、151、196

====================Argument===================
【题目】
Argument71
71. Copper occurs in nature mixed with other minerals and valuable metals in ore, and the proportion of copper in the ore can vary considerably. Until fairly recently, the only way to extract pure copper from ore was by using a process that requires large amounts of electric energy, especially if the proportion of copper in the ore is low. New copper-extracting technologies can use up to 40 percent less electricity than the older method to process the same amount of raw ore, especially when the proportion of copper in the ore is high. Therefore, we can expect the amount of electricity used by the copper-extraction industry to decline significantly.
铜在自然中与其他矿物和有价值的金属混合存在于矿石中，而且矿石中铜的比例可能有很大差别。直到最近，从矿石中提取纯铜的唯一方法是通过一种需要大量电力的流程，特别是当矿石中铜的比例比较低的时候。新的铜提取技术在处理同等数量的原矿石时能够比老的方式节省40％的电力，特别是当矿石中铜的比例比较高的时候。因此，我们可以预期铜矿提取工业所用的电力将会显著减少。


[ 本帖最后由 siyuanding 于 2007-1-22 16:53 编辑 ]

siyuandingUID: 2154137

AW终于告一段落，感谢寄托所有帮助过我的人，谢谢！
我改过的文章汇总了一下，哇！足足十一篇，没想到自己曾经这样认真过！
                                                                 ----------记于2007.2.19 大年初二   Chris

第三组 siyuanding 批改的作业
Issue154  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587289-1-1.html
               https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587324-1-1.html
Issue51    https://bbs.gter.net/thread-588316-1-1.html
Issue130  http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-591534-1-1.html
Agument194     https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=585144&extra=page%3D1
Issue41    https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=593306&extra=page%3D1
Issue41   https://bbs.gter.net/thread-594414-1-1.html
Issue43   https://bbs.gter.net/thread-599555-1-1.html
Issue4     https://bbs.gter.net/thread-601100-1-1.html
Issue69   https://bbs.gter.net/thread-602302-1-1.html
Argument180    https://bbs.gter.net/thread-593882-1-1.html

一些和G友的讨论
Issue154  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587343-1-1.html
Issue41    https://bbs.gter.net/thread-593391-1-1.html
Argument2   https://bbs.gter.net/thread-593390-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 siyuanding 于 2007-2-20 10:41 编辑 ]