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发表于 2006-12-30 11:12:50 |只看该作者

[第三小组]报到！
Skysijie_2005@yahoo.com.cn

相同重量的一只鸡和一只兔子，问：谁的肉比较多？？

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发表于 2006-12-30 13:14:33 |只看该作者

双非DIY美硕申请总结

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发表于 2006-12-30 22:34:32 |只看该作者

handshake  大家共同进步   第四小组
               *******************ctex[committed to excellence ]*****************

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【自己另外写得】---------------------【求拍】
A149
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=594715&extra=page%3D1
A51
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-594873-1-1.html
A53
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=595016&extra=page%3D1
A67
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=595305&extra=page%3D1
A71
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=595511&extra=page%3D1
====================================================================================
【第一次作业】
                           issue154：
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587283-1-1.html
                                 argument147：
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587271-1-1.html

====================================================================================

【第二次作业】
                           issue50：
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=588834&extra=page%3D1
                                 issue51:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=588835&extra=page%3D1
                              argument17:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=588831&extra=page%3D1
====================================================================================
【第三次作业*补交*：（】
Issue5
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=591506&extra=page%3D1
Issue130
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=591508&extra=page%3D1
Argument5
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=591509&extra=page%3D1
====================================================================================
【第四次作业】
Argument2
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=591510&extra=page%3D1
Issue41
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=592498&extra=page%3D1
Issue69
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=593459&extra=page%3D1【sorry,交迟了，：（】
====================================================================================
【第五次作业】
Argument47
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=593464&extra=page%3D1
Issue31
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=593613&extra=page%3D1
Issue177
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=593710&extra=page%3D1
====================================================================================

To be continued……

[ 本帖最后由 ctex 于 2007-1-20 10:17 编辑 ]

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发表于 2006-12-30 23:36:12 |只看该作者

第四小组

第一次作业
ISSUE154
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587409-1-1.html

ARGUMENT147
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587424-1-1.html

第二次作业
ISSUE50
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=588891&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1769514312

ISSUE51
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=588892&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1769514315

argument
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=589367&extra=page%3D1

第三次作业
ARGUMENT 65
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=590734&extra=page%3D2

ISSUE130
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=591060&extra=page%3D1

第四次作业

issue41

argument2

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发表于 2006-12-31 14:16:30 |只看该作者

我的作业贴。。

====================hlee的作文链接帖===================

[第一次作文]
issue 154
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=587235&extra=page%3D1
argu 147
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=587229&extra=page%3D1

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发表于 2006-12-31 21:48:35 |只看该作者

终于跟上组织了！！！

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发表于 2007-1-1 02:23:09 |只看该作者

祝大家新年快乐～～

===============题目链接帖===============
备考第二周－周1(01.01.07)---第二次作业
本次写作的大类：教育

====================Issue======================
【题目1】
Issue51
"Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."
【翻译】
只有针对每个学生的需要和兴趣，教育才真正的有效率的
Issue50
【题目2】
"In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach."
【翻译】
为了提高大学的教学质量，所有的教职员工应该去校外参加一些和他们教的课程相关的工作

【参考链接】
imong的追星特训之教育类
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=204875
分类讨论-教育题材
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=132579

提纲作业：ISSUE214,ISSUE153,ISSUE80,ISSUE191请一并附在文章后面！

====================Argument===================
【题目】
Argument17
The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Walnut Grove town newspaper.

"Walnut Grove's town council has advocated switching from EZ Disposal （which has had the contract for trash collection services in Walnut Grove for the past ten years） to ABC Waste, because EZ recently raised its monthly fee from $2,000 to $2,500 a month, whereas ABC's fee is still $2,000. But the town council is mistaken; we should continue using EZ. EZ collects trash twice a week, while ABC collects only once. Moreover, EZ—which, like ABC, currently has a fleet of 20 trucks—has ordered additional trucks. Finally, EZ provides exceptional service: 80 percent of respondents to last year's town survey agreed that they were 'satisfied' with EZ's performance."

【参考链接】
同主题写作
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=435474&highlight=17
argument就应该这样写（二）
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-416323-1-1.html

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发表于 2007-1-1 11:23:58 |只看该作者

第一次作业 2007-01-01 迟到了
要批评自己
ISSUE154 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587610-1-1.html

ARGU147 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587615-1-1.html

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第二次作业 2007-01-02
***************************************************
ISSUE51 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-588473-1-1.html

ISSUE50 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-588119-1-1.html

ARGU17 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-588585-1-1.html

***************************************************
第三次作业 2007-01-07
***************************************************
ISSUE 5 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-591070-1-1.html

ISSUE 130 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-591033-1-1.html

ARGU 65 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-591051-1-1.html

***************************************************
第四次作业 2007-01-12
***************************************************
ISSUE 41  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-591653-1-1.html

ISSUE 65  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-592811-1-1.html

ARGU  2 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-592862-1-1.html

***************************************************
第五次作业 2007-01-17
***************************************************

ISSUE 31 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-594206-1-1.html

ISSUE177 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-594209-1-1.html

ARGU47 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-594218-1-1.html

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第六次作业 2007-01-21
***************************************************
ISSUE4 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-596301-1-1.html

ARGU45 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-596310-1-1.html

ISSUE177 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-596313-1-1.html

***************************************************
第七次作业 2007-01-21
***************************************************
ISSUE150 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-597696-1-1.html

ISSUE31  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-597698-1-1.html

ARGU71  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=598543&extra=page%3D1

***************************************************
第8次作业 2007-01-25
***************************************************
ISSUE70 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=598542&extra=page%3D1

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发表于 2007-1-1 11:43:36 |只看该作者

第一次作业，第四小组

issue154
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1769499774

一路看天不低头

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发表于 2007-1-1 22:10:19 |只看该作者

好怀念呀,一转眼一年过去了.:)
组长辛苦的,大家要好好珍惜哦,呵呵.
寒假希望跟你们一起玩,嘿嘿.:loveliness:

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发表于 2007-1-1 23:01:45 |只看该作者

小小是个好孩子。。。好好考研，俺们期待你的凯旋哦～～

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发表于 2007-1-3 15:00:43 |只看该作者

[第一组srarocean(夜)]

第一次作业，
issue 154  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-599550-1-1.html
Argument147 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=587267&extra=page%3D1

第二次作业
Issue 51 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-578757-1-1.html
Issue 50 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-593817-1-1.html(未改)
Argument 17 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587220-1-1.html

第三次作业
Issue 130 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=583869&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1769460975
argument 65 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-591422-1-1.html

第四次作业
arguement 2 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-587555-1-1.html

第五次作业
argument 47 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-587221-1-1.html(这个应该是很早以前写的了。。。。)

第六次作业
argument 45 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=595714&extra=page%3D1

第七次作业
argument 71 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=598539&extra=

第八次作业
issue 43 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=593865&extra=page%3D1
argument 137 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=591430&extra=page%3D2

第九次作业
argument 38 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-587694-1-1.html

第十次作业
argument 140 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=590266&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1769527975

第十一次作业
issue 83    http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=605757&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1769681123(未改)
argument 180 http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=593882&extra=page%3D1

第十二次作业
issue 38          http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=602085&extra=page%3D1
argument 51 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=593346&extra=page%3D1

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发表于 2007-1-3 20:52:18 |只看该作者

作业链

第二次作业
Issue50
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=588758&extra=
Issue51
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=588768&extra=

Argument17
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/post.php?action=newthread&fid=23&extra=

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发表于 2007-1-4 14:00:24 |只看该作者

===============题目链接帖===============
备考第二周－周1(01.04.07)---第三次作业
本次写作的大类：教育

====================Issue======================
【题目1】
Issue130
How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
【翻译】
现在孩子的社会化程度决定了社会的命运。可惜的是，我们还没有学会教孩子怎么样去建设一个更好的社会。
Issue5
【题目2】
A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
【翻译】
一个国家应该要求所有的学生在进入大学之前都学习由国家统一制定的课程，而不是允许由国家不同地区的学校去决定课程的安排。

【参考链接】
imong的追星特训之教育类
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=204875
分类讨论-教育题材
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=132579

提纲作业：教育类到此为止，感兴趣的同学可以自行列该类的其它提纲

====================Argument===================
【题目】
Argument65

The following appeared in a memo from the president of a chain of cheese stores located throughout the United States.

"For many years all the stores in our chain have stocked a wide variety of both domestic and imported cheeses. Last year, however, the five best-selling cheeses at our newest store were all domestic cheddar cheeses from Wisconsin. Furthermore, a recent survey by Cheeses of the World magazine indicates an increasing preference for domestic cheeses among its subscribers. Since our company can reduce expenses by limiting inventory, the best way to improve profits in all of our stores is to discontinue stocking many of our varieties of imported cheese and concentrate primarily on domestic cheeses."

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