Issue136 <米国有米小组aefiter第8次作业> 欢迎指教

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TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence ofchoice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
WORDS: 540                   TIME: 0:41:00                       DATE: 2007-1-4

1 个人的选择
2 机构，国家的选择
3 社会的选择

The choices will be ubiquitous in personal lives. Nevertheless, the absence of choices exists still in some circumstances such as societal advance. In my observation, choices will only exist when the rule of development all them to happen. As the social advance is a universal trend in the society, we can never turn over the trend of social transformation to progress toward more enlightened and civilized state.

Various choices in our daily lives may infuse in our minds an idea that to do decisions is unavoidable matter for human beings. Because of the complexity of social behaviors, multiple choices cannot be absent in each member's lives. As a person arrives at this world, conventional lifestyle will bring he or she first to the choices of education, to be educated as humanity workers such as historical workers, governmental officials, writers or other kinds of artists, or to be educated as a professional specialized at mathematical works, such as natural science researchers, or accounts. In this bout of choices, we can find the diversified kinds of human pursuits available in our society plays governing role to generate choices. In this sense, social complexity is the sources of the ubiquitous choices in our lives.

Aside from personal choices that are very common in individual lives, large-scale organizations, or a whole nation will also be faced with choices at crucial period. In spite that two kinds of choices bear different power of influences to external environment, they share the same essence of choices that more than one form of solutions is available. When Google Company faces a powerful competitor at video sharing on the Internet -- Youtube, the serious choice of planning acquisition of Youtube or not is unavoidable. Turning to even larger organizations -- a nation, choices are still frequently haunting problems for political leaders and government officials. The periodical national referendum to decide the next generation of leaders is for the time being a widely accepted institution of a country. Although this choice requires millions of people to express their viewpoint and take their decisions, they have no essential difference with individual choices in its essence.

Although choices seem to penetrate deep in our lives, our judgment to this statement may change when we apply it to evaluate the choices faced with the whole society, or the world. When the available ways of development is confined to a single, perhaps natural rules, instead of human will, should decide our future, and the future of the world. Accompanied with the advancement of social productivity, the government will also take different forms to suit this inexorable trend. From slavery, feudal hierarchy, modern society is adjusted by mainly the capitalism. Even some historical figures had ever initiated some movements that ran against this trend of society, the fact tell us natural rule allows no opportunity for individuals to choose a different trajectory for our future.

To sum up, the existence of choices varies when the application field changes. Although individuals, company leaders, or even government of a nation can encounter a multitude of choices, the social evolution forbids human will to choose. It is to some degree for this reason that our lives are prismatic with many choices and possibly many results available for us.

[ 本帖最后由 aefiter 于 2007-1-4 17:03 编辑 ]

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Issue136 <米国有米小组aefiter第8次作业> 欢迎指教
TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence ofchoice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
WORDS: 540                   TIME: 0:41:00                       DATE: 2007-1-4Issue136 <米国有米小组aefiter第8次作业> 欢迎指教
TOPIC: ISSUE136 - "The absence ofchoice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."
WORDS: 540                   TIME: 0:41:00                       DATE: 2007-1-4

1 个人的选择
2 机构，国家的选择
3 社会的选择

The choices will be ubiquitous in personal lives. Nevertheless, the absence of choices exists still in some circumstances such as societal advance. In my observation, choices will only exist when the rule of development all them to happen. As the social advance is a universal trend in the society, we can never turn over the trend of social transformation to progress toward more enlightened and civilized state.
观点到底是什么？

Various choices in our daily lives may infuse in our minds an idea that to do decisions is unavoidable matter for human beings. Because of the complexity of social behaviors, multiple choices cannot be absent in each member's lives. As a person arrives at this world, conventional lifestyle will bring he or she first to the choices of education, to be educated as humanity workers such as historical workers, governmental officials, writers or other kinds of artists, or to be educated as a professional specialized at mathematical works, such as natural science researchers, or accounts. In this bout of choices, we can find the diversified kinds of human pursuits available in our society plays governing role to generate choices. In this sense, social complexity is the sources of the ubiquitous choices in our lives.这段结构很清楚

Aside from personal choices that are very common in individual lives, large-scale organizations, or a whole nation will also be faced with choices at crucial period. In spite that two kinds of choices bear different power of influences to external environment, they share the same essence of choices that more than one form of solutions is available. When Google Company faces a powerful competitor at video sharing on the Internet -- Youtube, the serious choice of planning acquisition of Youtube or not is unavoidable. Turning to even larger organizations -- a nation, choices are still frequently haunting problems for political leaders and government officials. The periodical national referendum to decide the next generation of leaders is for the time being a widely accepted institution of a country. Although this choice requires millions of people to express their viewpoint and take their decisions, they have no essential difference with individual choices in its essence.我认为这段应该是论证机构和国家经常面临很多选择，但笔者的中心确是在说机构和国家在选择上和个人内涵是一样的

Although choices seem to penetrate deep in our lives, our judgment to this statement may change 换个说话，如be different。或者干脆就直接说社会发展的趋势是没有选择，不可更改的，让观点更明确when we apply it to evaluate the choices faced with the whole society, or the world. When the available ways of development is confined to a single, perhaps natural rules, instead of human will, should decide our future, and the future of the world. Accompanied with the advancement of social productivity, the government will also take different forms to suit this inexorable trend. From slavery, feudal hierarchy, modern society is adjusted by mainly the capitalism. Even some historical figures had ever initiated some movements that ran against this trend of society, the fact tell us natural rule allows no opportunity for individuals to choose a different trajectory for our future.好句

To sum up, the existence of choices varies when the application field changes. Although individuals, company leaders, or even government of a nation can encounter a multitude of choices, the social evolution forbids human will to choose. It is to some degree for this reason that our lives are prismatic with many choices and possibly many results available for us. 总结很到位
笔者的语言，句式非常到位，学习！！ 整篇文章结构很清楚，对题目的分析很全面， 如果能够在写每个理由段时，结构更紧凑一些，更好。

[ 本帖最后由 blackswitch 于 2007-1-7 23:11 编辑 ]