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发表于 2007-1-20 16:18:38
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bingbingxiemin 修改~
lz的思路比我宽呢呵呵,学习借鉴到一些收获比较大^_^,改的都是小问题~~
Issue182 agree
1.Trust only on【好像trust要是用作名词的话是接in】 intelligence as panacea usually leads people to be arrogant and arbitrary before making decision.
2.Intelligence without basic moral standard such as honesty and probity does harm to people and society. Eg. High-tech crime: hacker, terrorism; moral controversy: clone; scientific problem: plagiarism;【这些例子好好啊~^_^】
Issue192 diagree
1.Careful and cautious planning helps people to establish a definite objective and choose the optimized method to success. Eg, the annual financial budget of government promise the comprehensive development of the nation; the careful maketing management plan of a company;
2.Detailed planning is able to predict the potential difficulty, which helps people to adjust themselves and prepare the certain solving method ahead to promise the success.【这个观点好~】
3.Admittedly, success sometimes seems to come from chances and risks, but the essence of success relates tightly to the usual effort and careful prepare【preparation】, which implies that the chance of success can be created by means of careful planning.
Issue206
1.Quick actions tends to be too arbitrary and shortsighted to ignore the possible consequence, which may hamper the process to success.
2.Careful planning and consideration before action makes people clear of what to do and how to do, which promises the action go smoothly in a long turn.
3.Actually, with the limited time, action should be taken as soon as possible for the reason that undue hesitate may lose the golden chance.
Issue211
1.Some problems that should be solved as soon as possible to minimize the adverse effect needs take into account the present condition.
2.Many decision is【单复数不一致】 made according to the future condition for the long term consideration.
3.Actually, most of things are decided under both future and present consideration.
Issue 222
1.The proper and good-intent methods to the worthy goal is encouraged, such as hard work, cooperation with each other and even at the cost one’s life.
2.But many goals obtained by means of doing harm to others and even illegality have become unworthy and dangerous.【觉得这个是不是细细的分类别说一下比较好?】
Issue225
1. Comparison functions 【as】a mirror to reflect one’s advantages and disadvantages, which play【s】 an important role in making progress.
2. Creation and innovation always come from comparison.【?这个怎么说呢?用什么论证?我觉得那个应该是analogy而不是comparison吧@@,我的一家之见呵呵】
3. Sometimes, something should be considered on its own terms esp. when comparison leads the harmful effect.
Issue231 agree
1. The theory of moderation can been seen everywhere in our life. Eg, the sports exercise, the pursuit of authority and money.
2. Actually, there are many things that require intense effort and focus. Eg, the Olympic game.
Issue99 disagree
1. 理想的优点:指路明灯,引向成功。Eg.望梅止渴的作用【望梅止渴看起来不错,可是好像不太容易表述啊~~】
2. 通过努力,理想变成现实。Eg.the invention of internet
Issue148 disagree
1. 理想主义的优点:指路明灯,引向成功。
2. Blind idealism without careful analysis of present condition does harm to people, which may lead to disappointment and trouble.
Issue186
1. All efforts are made for our future life, which means practicality is the ultimate goal.
2. But idealism plays an important role in the pursuit of better life.
3. With the unremittent efforts, our ideal will become reality and benefit our life.
Issue210
1. 现实的考虑是基于最基本的生存要求,所以大部分自然会在择业时考虑实用问题。
2. 当然也有一部分人无私地追求理想,而不计较现实的问题。
3. 在基本生活保障下,更多的人会根据兴趣择业;往往选择的就变成自己喜欢的,like what you do.
Issue236 disagree
1. 鼓励年轻人努力是使他们拥有信心&培养正确积极的态度,这对获得成功很关键。
2. 使年轻人敢于创新,敢于挑战,不断进取。
3. 年轻人需要在了解自己实力和前人的经验基础上,负责【??否则???呵呵】他人的鼓励就变成恶意的怂恿。
Issue218【??这次作业有这个题目吗?】
1. The works of arts in various forms and genres are always difficult to be understood by most people with different backgrounds of language, culture and belief, etc. Moreover, different people understand the art works from different appreciating angles.
2. Many art works are relatively subjective which relates closely to the creators’ ideas, so it’s natural to understand difficult.
3. The merit of an art work is judged by its benefits to peoples’ idea, feeling, even improve the lives. Eg. Ads, films
Issue196
1. It’s true that some discoveries and creation may take place by chance in our life.
2. But the chances are always based on the usual hard work and careful observation.
3. What’s more important for us is to work hard to create chances and sensitive to find them.
Issue105
1. It is democratic for the government to accept challenges of its own citizens which reflect the problems of policies and do good to the national development.
2. As far as some malicious【赞一下这个词~~^_^我写的时候想了好久都没有想起来~~】 challenges which does harm to the security and unite of the country, the government should be sensible to take active action.
3. The true strength of a country is based on the comprehensive power including in scientific, technological, educational, military and economic areas which require the cooperation of the government and citizens.【赞这个角度~~】 |
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