issue83 <米国有米>第十次作业 保护荒地~ 请指教~~

ernest81888UID: 2247639

83：Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people.

Syllabus: agree with it

View1: 保护荒地有利于保持生态平衡,环境不加以保护，有些生物可能会就此灭绝。
View2: 保护荒地可以提供了科学家研究的场所，具有科研价值，同时保护荒地给人们一个欣赏自然风光的机会。（珠锋）
View3: 政府还需要制定一系列的措施来保护荒地。

While today’s high-advanced technology and prosperity of society makes our life more convenient, the contradictive problem also comes along with such as increased population and limited domestic soil. Therefore, some suggest exploring the wilderness area in order to appease the current situations. However, concerning long-term profit and benefit of the nation or its generations, our government should take the responsibility to preserver publicly owned wilderness areas as well as to maintain them in an original state.

It is now widely accepted by the world, remote areas without human-being‘s interference contains a big number of plants and animals. Nature source is always abundant and specious are various. It could be said protected wilderness area provides a good opportunity and living condition for plants and animals to breed or propagate, therefore, it will keep the balance of nature. Today, as is reported in news, one specious in the world will be extinct in average 3 days for the reason that human-being extravagant explores the wilderness area. So, if not take this problem seriously, many years later, we could only see some of the plant or animal samples in biology museum by that time we will feel nothing but sad or lonely.

Meanwhile, this has a significant meaning for researchers of biology and ecology. Researchers are likely to continue to seek the answers of the origination and evolution of life. As one of the famous biologists once said (and I paraphrased):” Academically, to study one specious that living in a natural environment is more valuable than to study it when it is feed by human-beings. Because studying a wild plant or animal, the researcher could gain a great amount of detailed information about the biosphere. The abundant specious and the complicate relationships among them in wilderness areas are undoubtedly fascinating to every scientist who want to discover the real truth.” Moreover, to prevent the wilderness areas from being destroyed, more chances will exist for people to enjoy wonderful nature scene which is necessarily acquired for travelers. If setting up special region like a natural park, wanderlusts will be attracted to come. Thus, by this visible method it will bring about a long-term profit to the nation. This is also a illustration that our government should preserve the wilderness areas in natural state.

However, when we are emphasizing the important of public wilderness area preservation, I insist that relevant laws or regulation should be immediately enacted to prevent some of the speculators from environment destruction for their personal interests. In fact, many environmentalists have already advocated and definitely have done something in order to keep the fragile earth clean and healthy. Unfortunately, because of lacking the support from government, their effects does not seem greatly. Now, with the conflict becoming more and more serious, some government realize and plan to build up series restrictions, which might be a good signal for us.

In sum, it is instructive for the government to preserve the wilderness areas. And our government must take the responsibility to provide us a robust environment .The advantage of this way could be identified in near future and could contribute to a long-term profit for us.



[ 本帖最后由 ernest81888 于 2007-1-20 10:39 编辑 ]

aefiterUID: 2134740

进步真的非常大， 这一篇很完美了，不知道你最终完成一篇花多长时间。我的文章缺少修改，就没有进步，要向ernest学习！

[ 本帖最后由 aefiter 于 2007-1-19 23:53 编辑 ]

aefiterUID: 2134740

83：Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people.

Syllabus: agree with it

View1: 保护荒地有利于保持生态平衡,环境不加以保护，有些生物可能会就此灭绝。
View2: 保护荒地可以提供了科学家研究的场所，具有科研价值，同时保护荒地给人们一个欣赏自然风光的机会。（珠锋）
View3: 政府还需要制定一系列的措施来保护荒地。

While today’s high-advanced highly advanced technology and prosperity of society makes our life more convenient, the contradictive problem also comes along with such as increased population and limited domestic soil land. Therefore, some suggest exploring the wilderness area in order to appease alleviate the severity the current situations. However, concerning long-term profit and benefit of the nation or its generations people, our the government should take the responsibility to preserver publicly owned wilderness areas as well as to maintain them in an original state.

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So, if not take taking this problem seriously, many years later, we could only see some of the plant or animal samples in biology museum by that time we will feel nothing but sad or lonely.

Meanwhile, this has a significant meaning for researchers of biology and ecology.this 指代 Researchers are likely to continue to seek the answers of the origination and evolution of life. As one of the famous biologists once said (and I paraphrased):” Academically, to study one specious that living in a natural environment is more valuable than to study it when it is feed by human-beings. Because studying a wild plant or animal, the researcher could gain a great amount of detailed information about the biosphere. The abundant specious and the complicate relationships among them in wilderness areas are undoubtedly fascinating to every scientist who want to discover the real truth truth.” Moreover, to prevent the wilderness areas from being destroyed, more chances will exist for people to enjoy wonderful nature scene which is necessarily acquired for travelers. If setting up special region like a natural park, wanderlusts will be attracted to come. Thus, by this visible method it will bring about a long-term profit to the nation. This is also a an illustration that our government should preserve the wilderness areas in natural state.

题目中的even条件，最好回应以下，在论证中用一段说明，为什么人迹罕至的保护区，也应该保护。

However, when we are emphasizing the important of public wilderness area preservation, I insist that relevant laws or regulation should be immediately enacted to prevent some of the speculators from environment destruction for their personal interests. In fact, many environmentalists have already advocated and definitely have done something in order to keep the fragile earth clean and healthy. Unfortunately, because of lacking the support from government, their effects does not seem greatly. Now, with the conflict becoming more and more serious, some government realize and plan to build up series restrictions, which might be a good signal for us.

关于should题型，是非题型，imong的追星箭特训有详细的讲解，这里government should。 这一段放在政府保护了wilderness area的题目里，更合适，不过关于偏题的讨论有些也太苛刻了，我也拿不准

In sum, it is instructive for the government to preserve the wilderness areas. And our government must take the responsibility to provide us a robust environment .The advantage of this way could be identified in near future and could contribute to a long-term profit for us.


题目回应得好，有例证，例证能说明自己的论点，最后语言表达清晰无误。应该就这些要求吧。

ernest81888UID: 2247639

说来惭愧,我写的还是很慢呢.努力中......