Issue4 【CSMY作文互改小组】第六次作业

siyuandingUID: 2154137

Issue4
"No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study."
在任何一个研究领域当中，除非有该领域之外的人引进他们的知识和经验，否则该领域就很难获得巨大的发展。

观点 平衡观点
提纲
1、在科学发展史上，许多领域的巨大发展，就是因为领域外人士引入他们的知识和经验，在一些研究领域，应为外来知识和经验的引入，导致了科学史上的重大发现；而在另一些研究领域，因为外来知识的引入，从而突破发展的瓶颈，给该领域的发展带来新的春天
2、但是，我们也因该看到，另外一些研究领域的巨大发展很大程度上应该归功于被领域的知识和经验的积累；退一步说，尽管外来人士可以给本领域带来新的养料，但也需要有本领域一定程度的发展，才能为两个不同学科融会提供基础，更何况很多学科领域不可能也没必要接触到其他领域的知识和经验
3、在科学发展的今天，各个科研领域百花齐放，每一门学科的发展，不仅有自身的发展因素，也有外来知识和经验引入的因素，一方面，各领域专家的广泛交流，从而产生了许多交叉学科；另一方面，各国科学家的通力合作，为一些世界性科研难题的解决提供了希望

Our society is undergoing a process of rapid development in which science serves a leading role. Can a field of study advance significantly without introduction of outside knowledge and experience? I fundamentally agree with the speaker with the notion that the introduction of outside knowledge and experience is quite responsible for the significant advancement of one academic study. However, the speaker overlooks the important role the given knowledge and experts play.

To begin with, I fundamentally agree with the speaker that the introduction of outside knowledge, experience, methodology is quite responsible for the significant advancement of one field of study. The process of mutual interaction among different fields sparkles with wit and intelligence which inspires and creates new ideas, concepts, thoughts, etc. Our recorded history of science is replete with such examples. Some introduction of outside knowledge and experience leads to great discoveries which serve as landmarks throughout the development of science. For example, James Watson, a biologist, with the help of Francis Crick who majored in physics in his early time of research, discovered the molecular structure of nucleic acids which had ever been considered a fundamental mystery. This mystery gives answer to how genetic instructions are held inside organisms and how they are passed from one generation to another. And some other introduction gives a vital impact on some fields of inquiry so that these fields in turn undergo a more rapid of development. With the invention of a compound microscope, Robert Hooke introduced the word cell to describe tiny compartments in living things which marked the beginning of new perspective of biological investigation.

However, the speaker overstates the status of outsiders in the advancement of a field, ignoring the fundamental and determinate role of the given knowledge and experts. After all, all the relevant researches are based on the treasures our predecessors have passed to us. We absorb them, question them, utilize them, and benefit from them finally. It is the given theories that all the new ideas, discoveries and inventions originate from. In the early period of most elementary fields of study, they had no chance to get touch with outside subjects. Along with certain accumulation of inside knowledge and experience many eminent scientist accomplish their remarkable success with their own talents, skills, feeling, and understanding of science. Even though outsiders could provide vital nourishment, without our forerunners' intelligence, as well as a team of proficient and creative experts there would no fuel to ignite the inspiration, let alone significant advancement of this particular field.

Accordingly, both the outside and inside knowledge and experience together with experts is equally important to a certain field. Growing cooperation among scientist with various expertise not only help impede progress of disciplines involved but also facilitate the active interaction of them and generate many new-born cross disciplines. For example, the combination of biology, a science dealing with the living organisms, with chemistry, a science of matter at atomic to molecular scale, gives birth to the science biochemistry which serves as a new start point standing on the shoulders of the two original fields. Furthermore, as for some large-scale international science project, a group of government bodies and organizations along with experts from various fields must be embraced. The Human Genome Project is an international scientific endeavor that aims to decipher the complete genetic inheritance of human beings. It is established as an unprecedented, coordinated research project marshaling collaborative effort of hundreds of researchers. Due to huge advances in the field of genomics and computing technology, as well as widespread international cooperation, a rough draft of the genome was finished in 2000. The development of any field of study needs comprehensive cooperation.

To sum up, the speaker's assertion in not without merit that outsiders' knowledge and experience could offer an available opportunity to the development of the particular field. But at the same time, we cannot reach an extreme conclusion that, never can a field of study progress without the outsiders' benefaction for the relative independence of academic studies. Both the outside and inside aspects are equally important to the flourish of the field of study.

sky2007UID: 2206968

Our society is undergoing a process of rapid development in which science serves a leading role. Can a field of study advance significantly without introduction of outside knowledge and experience? I fundamentally agree with the speaker with the notion that the introduction of outside knowledge and experience is quite responsible for the significant advancement of one academic study. However, the speaker overlooks the important role the given knowledge and experts play.
To begin with, I fundamentally agree with the speaker that the introduction of outside knowledge, experience, methodology is quite responsible for the significant advancement of one field of study.复述主题句的话了，这样写不好吧？ The process of mutual interaction among different fields sparkles with wit and intelligence which inspires and creates new ideas, concepts, thoughts, etc. Our recorded history of science is replete with such examples. Some introduction of outside knowledge and experience leads to great discoveries which serve as landmarks throughout the development of science. For example, James Watson, a biologist, with the help of Francis Crick who majored in physics in his early time of research, discovered the molecular structure of nucleic acids whichwas considered as a mystery at that time had ever been considered a fundamental mystery. This mystery gives answer to how genetic instructions are held inside organisms and how they are passed from one generation to another. And some other introduction gives a vital impactimpulse on some fields of inquiry so that these fields in turn undergo a more rapid of development. With the invention of a compound microscope, Robert Hooke introduced the word cell to describe tiny compartments in living things which marked the beginning of new perspective of biological investigation.
However, the speaker overstates the status 可以这样表达吗of outsiders in the advancement of a field, ignoring the fundamental and determinate role of the given knowledge and experts. After all, all the relevant researches are based on the treasures our predecessors have passed to us. We absorb them, question them, utilize them, and benefit from them finally. It is the given theories that all the new ideas, discoveries and inventions originate from. In the early period of most elementary fields of study, they had no chance to get touch with outside subjects. Along with certain accumulation of inside knowledge and experience many eminent scientist accomplish their remarkable success with their own talents, skills, feeling, and understanding of science. Even though outsiders could provide vital nourishment, without our forerunners' intelligence, as well as a team of proficient and creative experts there would no fuel to ignite the inspiration, let alone significant advancement of this particular field.
Accordingly, both the outside and inside knowledge and experience together with experts is equally important to a certain field. Growing cooperation among scientist with various expertise not only help impede progress of disciplines involved but also facilitate the active interaction of betweenthem and generate many new-born cross disciplines. For example, the combination of biology, a science dealing with the living organisms, with chemistry, a science of matter at atomic to molecular scale, gives birth to the science biochemistry which serves as a new start point standing on the shoulders of the two original fields. Furthermore, as for some large-scale international science project, a group of government bodies and organizations along with experts from various fields must be embraced. The Human Genome Project is an international scientific endeavor that aims to decipher the complete genetic inheritance of human beings. It is established as an unprecedented, coordinated research project marshaling collaborative effort of hundreds of researchers. Due to huge advances in the field of genomics and computing technology, as well as widespread international cooperation, a rough draft of the genome was finished in 2000. The development of any field of study needs comprehensive cooperation.这个例子举得也太长了吧？
To sum up, the speaker's assertion in not without merit that outsiders' knowledge and experience could offer an available opportunity to the development of the particular field. But at the same time, we cannot reach an extreme conclusion that, never can a field of study progress without the outsiders' benefaction for the relative independence of academic studies. Both the outside and inside aspects are equally important to the flourish of the field of study.
楼主也是学生物的吧，举的都是生物方面的例子，可以考虑下搜寻些其它方面的例子。

siyuandingUID: 2154137

谢谢sky2007的修改
was considered as a mystery at that time 想了想，的确是用过去时
知识水平有限，能用的例子不多呀
我2.12考